How to Write an Essay
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Essay Writing Fundamentals
How to prepare to write an essay, how to edit an essay, how to share and publish your essays, how to get essay writing help, how to find essay writing inspiration, resources for teaching essay writing.
Essays, short prose compositions on a particular theme or topic, are the bread and butter of academic life. You write them in class, for homework, and on standardized tests to show what you know. Unlike other kinds of academic writing (like the research paper) and creative writing (like short stories and poems), essays allow you to develop your original thoughts on a prompt or question. Essays come in many varieties: they can be expository (fleshing out an idea or claim), descriptive, (explaining a person, place, or thing), narrative (relating a personal experience), or persuasive (attempting to win over a reader). This guide is a collection of dozens of links about academic essay writing that we have researched, categorized, and annotated in order to help you improve your essay writing.Â
Essays are different from other forms of writing; in turn, there are different kinds of essays. This section contains general resources for getting to know the essay and its variants. These resources introduce and define the essay as a genre, and will teach you what to expect from essay-based assessments.
Purdue OWL Online Writing Lab
One of the most trusted academic writing sites, Purdue OWL provides a concise introduction to the four most common types of academic essays.
"The Essay: History and Definition" (ThoughtCo)
This snappy article from ThoughtCo talks about the origins of the essay and different kinds of essays you might be asked to write.Â
"What Is An Essay?" Video Lecture (Coursera)
The University of California at Irvine's free video lecture, available on Coursera, tells you everything you need to know about the essay.
Wikipedia Article on the "Essay"
Wikipedia's article on the essay is comprehensive, providing both English-language and global perspectives on the essay form. Learn about the essay's history, forms, and styles.
"Understanding College and Academic Writing" (Aims Online Writing Lab)
This list of common academic writing assignments (including types of essay prompts) will help you know what to expect from essay-based assessments.
Before you start writing your essay, you need to figure out who you're writing for (audience), what you're writing about (topic/theme), and what you're going to say (argument and thesis). This section contains links to handouts, chapters, videos and more to help you prepare to write an essay.
How to Identify Your Audience
"Audience" (Univ. of North Carolina Writing Center)
This handout provides questions you can ask yourself to determine the audience for an academic writing assignment. It also suggests strategies for fitting your paper to your intended audience.
"Purpose, Audience, Tone, and Content" (Univ. of Minnesota Libraries)
This extensive book chapter from Writing for Success , available online through Minnesota Libraries Publishing, is followed by exercises to try out your new pre-writing skills.
"Determining Audience" (Aims Online Writing Lab)
This guide from a community college's writing center shows you how to know your audience, and how to incorporate that knowledge in your thesis statement.
"Know Your Audience" ( Paper Rater Blog)
This short blog post uses examples to show how implied audiences for essays differ. It reminds you to think of your instructor as an observer, who will know only the information you pass along.
How to Choose a Theme or Topic
"Research Tutorial: Developing Your Topic" (YouTube)
Take a look at this short video tutorial from the University of North Carolina at Chapel Hill to understand the basics of developing a writing topic.
"How to Choose a Paper Topic" (WikiHow)
This simple, step-by-step guide (with pictures!) walks you through choosing a paper topic. It starts with a detailed description of brainstorming and ends with strategies to refine your broad topic.
"How to Read an Assignment: Moving From Assignment to Topic" (Harvard College Writing Center)
Did your teacher give you a prompt or other instructions? This guide helps you understand the relationship between an essay assignment and your essay's topic.
"Guidelines for Choosing a Topic" (CliffsNotes)
This study guide from CliffsNotes both discusses how to choose a topic and makes a useful distinction between "topic" and "thesis."
How to Come Up with an Argument
"Argument" (Univ. of North Carolina Writing Center)
Not sure what "argument" means in the context of academic writing? This page from the University of North Carolina is a good place to start.
"The Essay Guide: Finding an Argument" (Study Hub)
This handout explains why it's important to have an argument when beginning your essay, and provides tools to help you choose a viable argument.
"Writing a Thesis and Making an Argument" (University of Iowa)
This page from the University of Iowa's Writing Center contains exercises through which you can develop and refine your argument and thesis statement.
"Developing a Thesis" (Harvard College Writing Center)
This page from Harvard's Writing Center collates some helpful dos and don'ts of argumentative writing, from steps in constructing a thesis to avoiding vague and confrontational thesis statements.
"Suggestions for Developing Argumentative Essays" (Berkeley Student Learning Center)
This page offers concrete suggestions for each stage of the essay writing process, from topic selection to drafting and editing.Â
How to Outline your Essay
"Outlines" (Univ. of North Carolina at Chapel Hill via YouTube)
This short video tutorial from the University of North Carolina at Chapel Hill shows how to group your ideas into paragraphs or sections to begin the outlining process.
"Essay Outline" (Univ. of Washington Tacoma)
This two-page handout by a university professor simply defines the parts of an essay and then organizes them into an example outline.
"Types of Outlines and Samples" (Purdue OWL Online Writing Lab)
Purdue OWL gives examples of diverse outline strategies on this page, including the alphanumeric, full sentence, and decimal styles.Â
"Outlining" (Harvard College Writing Center)
Once you have an argument, according to this handout, there are only three steps in the outline process: generalizing, ordering, and putting it all together. Then you're ready to write!
"Writing Essays" (Plymouth Univ.)
This packet, part of Plymouth University's Learning Development series, contains descriptions and diagrams relating to the outlining process.
"How to Write A Good Argumentative Essay: Logical Structure" (Criticalthinkingtutorials.com via YouTube)
This longer video tutorial gives an overview of how to structure your essay in order to support your argument or thesis. It is part of a longer course on academic writing hosted on Udemy.
Now that you've chosen and refined your topic and created an outline, use these resources to complete the writing process. Most essays contain introductions (which articulate your thesis statement), body paragraphs, and conclusions. Transitions facilitate the flow from one paragraph to the next so that support for your thesis builds throughout the essay. Sources and citations show where you got the evidence to support your thesis, which ensures that you avoid plagiarism.Â
How to Write an Introduction
"Introductions" (Univ. of North Carolina Writing Center)
This page identifies the role of the introduction in any successful paper, suggests strategies for writing introductions, and warns against less effective introductions.
"How to Write A Good Introduction" (Michigan State Writing Center)
Beginning with the most common missteps in writing introductions, this guide condenses the essentials of introduction composition into seven points.
"The Introductory Paragraph" (ThoughtCo)
This blog post from academic advisor and college enrollment counselor Grace Fleming focuses on ways to grab your reader's attention at the beginning of your essay.
"Introductions and Conclusions" (Univ. of Toronto)
This guide from the University of Toronto gives advice that applies to writing both introductions and conclusions, including dos and don'ts.
"How to Write Better Essays: No One Does Introductions Properly" ( The Guardian )
This news article interviews UK professors on student essay writing; they point to introductions as the area that needs the most improvement.
How to Write a Thesis Statement
"Writing an Effective Thesis Statement"Â (YouTube)
This short, simple video tutorial from a college composition instructor at Tulsa Community College explains what a thesis statement is and what it does.Â
"Thesis Statement: Four Steps to a Great Essay" (YouTube)
This fantastic tutorial walks you through drafting a thesis, using an essay prompt on Nathaniel Hawthorne's The Scarlet Letter as an example.
"How to Write a Thesis Statement" (WikiHow)
This step-by-step guide (with pictures!) walks you through coming up with, writing, and editing a thesis statement. It invites you think of your statement as a "working thesis" that can change.
"How to Write a Thesis Statement" (Univ. of Indiana Bloomington)
Ask yourself the questions on this page, part of Indiana Bloomington's Writing Tutorial Services, when you're writing and refining your thesis statement.
"Writing Tips: Thesis Statements" (Univ. of Illinois Center for Writing Studies)
This page gives plentiful examples of good to great thesis statements, and offers questions to ask yourself when formulating a thesis statement.
How to Write Body Paragraphs
"Body Paragraph" (Brightstorm)
This module of a free online course introduces you to the components of a body paragraph. These include the topic sentence, information, evidence, and analysis.
"Strong Body Paragraphs" (Washington Univ.)
This handout from Washington's Writing and Research Center offers in-depth descriptions of the parts of a successful body paragraph.
"Guide to Paragraph Structure" (Deakin Univ.)
This handout is notable for color-coding example body paragraphs to help you identify the functions various sentences perform.
"Writing Body Paragraphs" (Univ. of Minnesota Libraries)
The exercises in this section of Writing for Success will help you practice writing good body paragraphs. It includes guidance on selecting primary support for your thesis.
"The Writing ProcessâBody Paragraphs" (Aims Online Writing Lab)
The information and exercises on this page will familiarize you with outlining and writing body paragraphs, and includes links to more information on topic sentences and transitions.
"The Five-Paragraph Essay" (ThoughtCo)
This blog post discusses body paragraphs in the context of one of the most common academic essay types in secondary schools.
How to Use Transitions
"Transitions" (Univ. of North Carolina Writing Center)
This page from the University of North Carolina at Chapel Hill explains what a transition is, and how to know if you need to improve your transitions.
"Using Transitions Effectively" (Washington Univ.)
This handout defines transitions, offers tips for using them, and contains a useful list of common transitional words and phrases grouped by function.
"Transitions" (Aims Online Writing Lab)
This page compares paragraphs without transitions to paragraphs with transitions, and in doing so shows how important these connective words and phrases are.
"Transitions in Academic Essays" (Scribbr)
This page lists four techniques that will help you make sure your reader follows your train of thought, including grouping similar information and using transition words.
"Transitions" (El Paso Community College)
This handout shows example transitions within paragraphs for context, and explains how transitions improve your essay's flow and voice.
"Make Your Paragraphs Flow to Improve Writing" (ThoughtCo)
This blog post, another from academic advisor and college enrollment counselor Grace Fleming, talks about transitions and other strategies to improve your essay's overall flow.
"Transition Words" (smartwords.org)
This handy word bank will help you find transition words when you're feeling stuck. It's grouped by the transition's function, whether that is to show agreement, opposition, condition, or consequence.
How to Write a Conclusion
"Parts of An Essay: Conclusions" (Brightstorm)
This module of a free online course explains how to conclude an academic essay. It suggests thinking about the "3Rs": return to hook, restate your thesis, and relate to the reader.
"Essay Conclusions" (Univ. of Maryland University College)
This overview of the academic essay conclusion contains helpful examples and links to further resources for writing good conclusions.
"How to End An Essay" (WikiHow)
This step-by-step guide (with pictures!) by an English Ph.D. walks you through writing a conclusion, from brainstorming to ending with a flourish.
"Ending the Essay: Conclusions" (Harvard College Writing Center)
This page collates useful strategies for writing an effective conclusion, and reminds you to "close the discussion without closing it off" to further conversation.
How to Include Sources and Citations
"Research and Citation Resources" (Purdue OWL Online Writing Lab)
Purdue OWL streamlines information about the three most common referencing styles (MLA, Chicago, and APA) and provides examples of how to cite different resources in each system.
EasyBib: Free Bibliography Generator
This online tool allows you to input information about your source and automatically generate citations in any style. Be sure to select your resource type before clicking the "cite it" button.
CitationMachine
Like EasyBib, this online tool allows you to input information about your source and automatically generate citations in any style.Â
Modern Language Association Handbook (MLA)
Here, you'll find the definitive and up-to-date record of MLA referencing rules. Order through the link above, or check to see if your library has a copy.
Chicago Manual of Style
Here, you'll find the definitive and up-to-date record of Chicago referencing rules. You can take a look at the table of contents, then choose to subscribe or start a free trial.
How to Avoid Plagiarism
"What is Plagiarism?" (plagiarism.org)
This nonprofit website contains numerous resources for identifying and avoiding plagiarism, and reminds you that even common activities like copying images from another website to your own site may constitute plagiarism.
"Plagiarism" (University of Oxford)
This interactive page from the University of Oxford helps you check for plagiarism in your work, making it clear how to avoid citing another person's work without full acknowledgement.
"Avoiding Plagiarism" (MIT Comparative Media Studies)
This quick guide explains what plagiarism is, what its consequences are, and how to avoid it. It starts by defining three wordsâquotation, paraphrase, and summaryâthat all constitute citation.
"Harvard Guide to Using Sources" (Harvard Extension School)
This comprehensive website from Harvard brings together articles, videos, and handouts about referencing, citation, and plagiarism.Â
Grammarly contains tons of helpful grammar and writing resources, including a free tool to automatically scan your essay to check for close affinities to published work.Â
Noplag is another popular online tool that automatically scans your essay to check for signs of plagiarism. Simply copy and paste your essay into the box and click "start checking."
Once you've written your essay, you'll want to edit (improve content), proofread (check for spelling and grammar mistakes), and finalize your work until you're ready to hand it in. This section brings together tips and resources for navigating the editing process.Â
"Writing a First Draft" (Academic Help)
This is an introduction to the drafting process from the site Academic Help, with tips for getting your ideas on paper before editing begins.
"Editing and Proofreading" (Univ. of North Carolina Writing Center)
This page provides general strategies for revising your writing. They've intentionally left seven errors in the handout, to give you practice in spotting them.
"How to Proofread Effectively" (ThoughtCo)
This article from ThoughtCo, along with those linked at the bottom, help describe common mistakes to check for when proofreading.
"7 Simple Edits That Make Your Writing 100% More Powerful" (SmartBlogger)
This blog post emphasizes the importance of powerful, concise language, and reminds you that even your personal writing heroes create clunky first drafts.
"Editing Tips for Effective Writing" (Univ. of Pennsylvania)
On this page from Penn's International Relations department, you'll find tips for effective prose, errors to watch out for, and reminders about formatting.
"Editing the Essay" (Harvard College Writing Center)
This article, the first of two parts, gives you applicable strategies for the editing process. It suggests reading your essay aloud, removing any jargon, and being unafraid to remove even "dazzling" sentences that don't belong.
"Guide to Editing and Proofreading" (Oxford Learning Institute)
This handout from Oxford covers the basics of editing and proofreading, and reminds you that neither task should be rushed.Â
In addition to plagiarism-checkers, Grammarly has a plug-in for your web browser that checks your writing for common mistakes.
After you've prepared, written, and edited your essay, you might want to share it outside the classroom. This section alerts you to print and web opportunities to share your essays with the wider world, from online writing communities and blogs to published journals geared toward young writers.
Sharing Your Essays Online
Go Teen Writers
Go Teen Writers is an online community for writers aged 13 - 19. It was founded by Stephanie Morrill, an author of contemporary young adult novels.Â
Tumblr is a blogging website where you can share your writing and interact with other writers online. It's easy to add photos, links, audio, and video components.
Writersky provides an online platform for publishing and reading other youth writers' work. Its current content is mostly devoted to fiction.
Publishing Your Essays Online
This teen literary journal publishes in print, on the web, and (more frequently), on a blog. It is committed to ensuring that "teens see their authentic experience reflected on its pages."
The Matador Review
This youth writing platform celebrates "alternative," unconventional writing. The link above will take you directly to the site's "submissions" page.
Teen Ink has a website, monthly newsprint magazine, and quarterly poetry magazine promoting the work of young writers.
The largest online reading platform, Wattpad enables you to publish your work and read others' work. Its inline commenting feature allows you to share thoughts as you read along.
Publishing Your Essays in Print
Canvas Teen Literary Journal
This quarterly literary magazine is published for young writers by young writers. They accept many kinds of writing, including essays.
The Claremont Review
This biannual international magazine, first published in 1992, publishes poetry, essays, and short stories from writers aged 13 - 19.
Skipping Stones
This young writers magazine, founded in 1988, celebrates themes relating to ecological and cultural diversity. It publishes poems, photos, articles, and stories.
The Telling Room
This nonprofit writing center based in Maine publishes children's work on their website and in book form. The link above directs you to the site's submissions page.
Essay Contests
Scholastic Arts and Writing Awards
This prestigious international writing contest for students in grades 7 - 12 has been committed to "supporting the future of creativity since 1923."
Society of Professional Journalists High School Essay Contest
An annual essay contest on the theme of journalism and media, the Society of Professional Journalists High School Essay Contest awards scholarships up to $1,000.
National YoungArts Foundation
Here, you'll find information on a government-sponsored writing competition for writers aged 15 - 18. The foundation welcomes submissions of creative nonfiction, novels, scripts, poetry, short story and spoken word.
Signet Classics Student Scholarship Essay Contest
With prompts on a different literary work each year, this competition from Signet Classics awards college scholarships up to $1,000.
"The Ultimate Guide to High School Essay Contests" (CollegeVine)
See this handy guide from CollegeVine for a list of more competitions you can enter with your academic essay, from the National Council of Teachers of English Achievement Awards to the National High School Essay Contest by the U.S. Institute of Peace.
Whether you're struggling to write academic essays or you think you're a pro, there are workshops and online tools that can help you become an even better writer. Even the most seasoned writers encounter writer's block, so be proactive and look through our curated list of resources to combat this common frustration.
Online Essay-writing Classes and Workshops
"Getting Started with Essay Writing" (Coursera)
Coursera offers lots of free, high-quality online classes taught by college professors. Here's one example, taught by instructors from the University of California Irvine.
"Writing and English" (Brightstorm)
Brightstorm's free video lectures are easy to navigate by topic. This unit on the parts of an essay features content on the essay hook, thesis, supporting evidence, and more.
"How to Write an Essay" (EdX)
EdX is another open online university course website with several two- to five-week courses on the essay. This one is geared toward English language learners.
Writer's Digest University
This renowned writers' website offers online workshops and interactive tutorials. The courses offered cover everything from how to get started through how to get published.
Writing.com
Signing up for this online writer's community gives you access to helpful resources as well as an international community of writers.
How to Overcome Writer's Block
"Symptoms and Cures for Writer's Block" (Purdue OWL)
Purdue OWL offers a list of signs you might have writer's block, along with ways to overcome it. Consider trying out some "invention strategies" or ways to curb writing anxiety.
"Overcoming Writer's Block: Three Tips" ( The Guardian )
These tips, geared toward academic writing specifically, are practical and effective. The authors advocate setting realistic goals, creating dedicated writing time, and participating in social writing.
"Writing Tips: Strategies for Overcoming Writer's Block" (Univ. of Illinois)
This page from the University of Illinois at Urbana-Champaign's Center for Writing Studies acquaints you with strategies that do and do not work to overcome writer's block.
"Writer's Block" (Univ. of Toronto)
Ask yourself the questions on this page; if the answer is "yes," try out some of the article's strategies. Each question is accompanied by at least two possible solutions.
If you have essays to write but are short on ideas, this section's links to prompts, example student essays, and celebrated essays by professional writers might help. You'll find writing prompts from a variety of sources, student essays to inspire you, and a number of essay writing collections.
Essay Writing Prompts
"50 Argumentative Essay Topics" (ThoughtCo)
Take a look at this list and the others ThoughtCo has curated for different kinds of essays. As the author notes, "a number of these topics are controversial and that's the point."
"401 Prompts for Argumentative Writing" ( New York Times )
This list (and the linked lists to persuasive and narrative writing prompts), besides being impressive in length, is put together by actual high school English teachers.
"SAT Sample Essay Prompts" (College Board)
If you're a student in the U.S., your classroom essay prompts are likely modeled on the prompts in U.S. college entrance exams. Take a look at these official examples from the SAT.
"Popular College Application Essay Topics" (Princeton Review)
This page from the Princeton Review dissects recent Common Application essay topics and discusses strategies for answering them.
Example Student Essays
"501 Writing Prompts" (DePaul Univ.)
This nearly 200-page packet, compiled by the LearningExpress Skill Builder in Focus Writing Team, is stuffed with writing prompts, example essays, and commentary.
"Topics in English" (Kibin)
Kibin is a for-pay essay help website, but its example essays (organized by topic) are available for free. You'll find essays on everything from A Christmas Carol to perseverance.
"Student Writing Models" (Thoughtful Learning)
Thoughtful Learning, a website that offers a variety of teaching materials, provides sample student essays on various topics and organizes them by grade level.
"Five-Paragraph Essay" (ThoughtCo)
In this blog post by a former professor of English and rhetoric, ThoughtCo brings together examples of five-paragraph essays and commentary on the form.
The Best Essay Writing Collections
The Best American Essays of the Century by Joyce Carol Oates (Amazon)
This collection of American essays spanning the twentieth century was compiled by award winning author and Princeton professor Joyce Carol Oates.
The Best American Essays 2017 by Leslie Jamison (Amazon)
Leslie Jamison, the celebrated author of essay collection The Empathy Exams , collects recent, high-profile essays into a single volume.
The Art of the Personal Essay by Phillip Lopate (Amazon)
Documentary writer Phillip Lopate curates this historical overview of the personal essay's development, from the classical era to the present.
The White Album by Joan Didion (Amazon)
This seminal essay collection was authored by one of the most acclaimed personal essayists of all time, American journalist Joan Didion.
Consider the Lobster by David Foster Wallace (Amazon)
Read this famous essay collection by David Foster Wallace, who is known for his experimentation with the essay form. He pushed the boundaries of personal essay, reportage, and political polemic.
"50 Successful Harvard Application Essays" (Staff of the The Harvard Crimson )
If you're looking for examples of exceptional college application essays, this volume from Harvard's daily student newspaper is one of the best collections on the market.
Are you an instructor looking for the best resources for teaching essay writing? This section contains resources for developing in-class activities and student homework assignments. You'll find content from both well-known university writing centers and online writing labs.
Essay Writing Classroom Activities for Students
"In-class Writing Exercises" (Univ. of North Carolina Writing Center)
This page lists exercises related to brainstorming, organizing, drafting, and revising. It also contains suggestions for how to implement the suggested exercises.
"Teaching with Writing" (Univ. of Minnesota Center for Writing)
Instructions and encouragement for using "freewriting," one-minute papers, logbooks, and other write-to-learn activities in the classroom can be found here.
"Writing Worksheets" (Berkeley Student Learning Center)
Berkeley offers this bank of writing worksheets to use in class. They are nested under headings for "Prewriting," "Revision," "Research Papers" and more.
"Using Sources and Avoiding Plagiarism" (DePaul University)
Use these activities and worksheets from DePaul's Teaching Commons when instructing students on proper academic citation practices.
Essay Writing Homework Activities for Students
"Grammar and Punctuation Exercises" (Aims Online Writing Lab)
These five interactive online activities allow students to practice editing and proofreading. They'll hone their skills in correcting comma splices and run-ons, identifying fragments, using correct pronoun agreement, and comma usage.
"Student Interactives" (Read Write Think)
Read Write Think hosts interactive tools, games, and videos for developing writing skills. They can practice organizing and summarizing, writing poetry, and developing lines of inquiry and analysis.
This free website offers writing and grammar activities for all grade levels. The lessons are designed to be used both for large classes and smaller groups.
"Writing Activities and Lessons for Every Grade" (Education World)
Education World's page on writing activities and lessons links you to more free, online resources for learning how to "W.R.I.T.E.": write, revise, inform, think, and edit.
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- If you are writing in a new discipline, you should always make sure to ask about conventions and expectations for introductions, just as you would for any other aspect of the essay. For example, while it may be acceptable to write a two-paragraph (or longer) introduction for your papers in some courses, instructors in other disciplines, such as those in some Government courses, may expect a shorter introduction that includes a preview of the argument that will follow.
- In some disciplines (Government, Economics, and others), itâs common to offer an overview in the introduction of what points you will make in your essay. In other disciplines, you will not be expected to provide this overview in your introduction.
- Avoid writing a very general opening sentence. While it may be true that âSince the dawn of time, people have been telling love stories,â it wonât help you explain whatâs interesting about your topic.
- Avoid writing a âfunnelâ introduction in which you begin with a very broad statement about a topic and move to a narrow statement about that topic. Broad generalizations about a topic will not add to your readersâ understanding of your specific essay topic.
- Avoid beginning with a dictionary definition of a term or concept you will be writing about. If the concept is complicated or unfamiliar to your readers, you will need to define it in detail later in your essay. If itâs not complicated, you can assume your readers already know the definition.
- Avoid offering too much detail in your introduction that a reader could better understand later in the paper.
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- 40 Useful Words and Phrases for Top-Notch Essays
To be truly brilliant, an essay needs to utilise the right language. You could make a great point, but if itâs not intelligently articulated, you almost neednât have bothered.
Developing the language skills to build an argument and to write persuasively is crucial if youâre to write outstanding essays every time. In this article, weâre going to equip you with the words and phrases you need to write a top-notch essay, along with examples of how to utilise them.
Itâs by no means an exhaustive list, and there will often be other ways of using the words and phrases we describe that we wonât have room to include, but there should be more than enough below to help you make an instant improvement to your essay-writing skills.
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General explaining
Letâs start by looking at language for general explanations of complex points.
1. In order to
Usage: âIn order toâ can be used to introduce an explanation for the purpose of an argument. Example: âIn order to understand X, we need first to understand Y.â
2. In other words
Usage: Use âin other wordsâ when you want to express something in a different way (more simply), to make it easier to understand, or to emphasise or expand on a point. Example: âFrogs are amphibians. In other words, they live on the land and in the water.â
3. To put it another way
Usage: This phrase is another way of saying âin other wordsâ, and can be used in particularly complex points, when you feel that an alternative way of wording a problem may help the reader achieve a better understanding of its significance. Example: âPlants rely on photosynthesis. To put it another way, they will die without the sun.â
4. That is to say
Usage: âThat isâ and âthat is to sayâ can be used to add further detail to your explanation, or to be more precise. Example: âWhales are mammals. That is to say, they must breathe air.â
5. To that end
Usage: Use âto that endâ or âto this endâ in a similar way to âin order toâ or âsoâ. Example: âZoologists have long sought to understand how animals communicate with each other. To that end, a new study has been launched that looks at elephant sounds and their possible meanings.â
Adding additional information to support a point
Students often make the mistake of using synonyms of âandâ each time they want to add further information in support of a point theyâre making, or to build an argument . Here are some cleverer ways of doing this.
6. Moreover
Usage: Employ âmoreoverâ at the start of a sentence to add extra information in support of a point youâre making. Example: âMoreover, the results of a recent piece of research provide compelling evidence in support ofâŚâ
7. Furthermore
Usage:This is also generally used at the start of a sentence, to add extra information. Example: âFurthermore, there is evidence to suggest thatâŚâ
8. Whatâs more
Usage: This is used in the same way as âmoreoverâ and âfurthermoreâ. Example: âWhatâs more, this isnât the only evidence that supports this hypothesis.â
9. Likewise
Usage: Use âlikewiseâ when you want to talk about something that agrees with what youâve just mentioned. Example: âScholar A believes X. Likewise, Scholar B argues compellingly in favour of this point of view.â
10. Similarly
Usage: Use âsimilarlyâ in the same way as âlikewiseâ. Example: âAudiences at the time reacted with shock to Beethovenâs new work, because it was very different to what they were used to. Similarly, we have a tendency to react with surprise to the unfamiliar.â
11. Another key thing to remember
Usage: Use the phrase âanother key point to rememberâ or âanother key fact to rememberâ to introduce additional facts without using the word âalsoâ. Example: âAs a Romantic, Blake was a proponent of a closer relationship between humans and nature. Another key point to remember is that Blake was writing during the Industrial Revolution, which had a major impact on the world around him.â
12. As well as
Usage: Use âas well asâ instead of âalsoâ or âandâ. Example: âScholar A argued that this was due to X, as well as Y.â
13. Not only⌠but also
Usage: This wording is used to add an extra piece of information, often something thatâs in some way more surprising or unexpected than the first piece of information. Example: âNot only did Edmund Hillary have the honour of being the first to reach the summit of Everest, but he was also appointed Knight Commander of the Order of the British Empire.â
14. Coupled with
Usage: Used when considering two or more arguments at a time. Example: âCoupled with the literary evidence, the statistics paint a compelling view ofâŚâ
15. Firstly, secondly, thirdlyâŚ
Usage: This can be used to structure an argument, presenting facts clearly one after the other. Example: âThere are many points in support of this view. Firstly, X. Secondly, Y. And thirdly, Z.
16. Not to mention/to say nothing of
Usage: âNot to mentionâ and âto say nothing ofâ can be used to add extra information with a bit of emphasis. Example: âThe war caused unprecedented suffering to millions of people, not to mention its impact on the countryâs economy.â
Words and phrases for demonstrating contrast
When youâre developing an argument, you will often need to present contrasting or opposing opinions or evidence â âit could show this, but it could also show thisâ, or âX says this, but Y disagreesâ. This section covers words you can use instead of the âbutâ in these examples, to make your writing sound more intelligent and interesting.
17. However
Usage: Use âhoweverâ to introduce a point that disagrees with what youâve just said. Example: âScholar A thinks this. However, Scholar B reached a different conclusion.â
18. On the other hand
Usage: Usage of this phrase includes introducing a contrasting interpretation of the same piece of evidence, a different piece of evidence that suggests something else, or an opposing opinion. Example: âThe historical evidence appears to suggest a clear-cut situation. On the other hand, the archaeological evidence presents a somewhat less straightforward picture of what happened that day.â
19. Having said that
Usage: Used in a similar manner to âon the other handâ or âbutâ. Example: âThe historians are unanimous in telling us X, an agreement that suggests that this version of events must be an accurate account. Having said that, the archaeology tells a different story.â
20. By contrast/in comparison
Usage: Use âby contrastâ or âin comparisonâ when youâre comparing and contrasting pieces of evidence. Example: âScholar Aâs opinion, then, is based on insufficient evidence. By contrast, Scholar Bâs opinion seems more plausible.â
21. Then again
Usage: Use this to cast doubt on an assertion. Example: âWriter A asserts that this was the reason for what happened. Then again, itâs possible that he was being paid to say this.â
22. That said
Usage: This is used in the same way as âthen againâ. Example: âThe evidence ostensibly appears to point to this conclusion. That said, much of the evidence is unreliable at best.â
Usage: Use this when you want to introduce a contrasting idea. Example: âMuch of scholarship has focused on this evidence. Yet not everyone agrees that this is the most important aspect of the situation.â
Adding a proviso or acknowledging reservations
Sometimes, you may need to acknowledge a shortfalling in a piece of evidence, or add a proviso. Here are some ways of doing so.
24. Despite this
Usage: Use âdespite thisâ or âin spite of thisâ when you want to outline a point that stands regardless of a shortfalling in the evidence. Example: âThe sample size was small, but the results were important despite this.â
25. With this in mind
Usage: Use this when you want your reader to consider a point in the knowledge of something else. Example: âWeâve seen that the methods used in the 19th century study did not always live up to the rigorous standards expected in scientific research today, which makes it difficult to draw definite conclusions. With this in mind, letâs look at a more recent study to see how the results compare.â
26. Provided that
Usage: This means âon condition thatâ. You can also say âproviding thatâ or just âprovidingâ to mean the same thing. Example: âWe may use this as evidence to support our argument, provided that we bear in mind the limitations of the methods used to obtain it.â
27. In view of/in light of
Usage: These phrases are used when something has shed light on something else. Example: âIn light of the evidence from the 2013 study, we have a better understanding ofâŚâ
28. Nonetheless
Usage: This is similar to âdespite thisâ. Example: âThe study had its limitations, but it was nonetheless groundbreaking for its day.â
29. Nevertheless
Usage: This is the same as ânonethelessâ. Example: âThe study was flawed, but it was important nevertheless.â
30. Notwithstanding
Usage: This is another way of saying ânonethelessâ. Example: âNotwithstanding the limitations of the methodology used, it was an important study in the development of how we view the workings of the human mind.â
Giving examples
Good essays always back up points with examples, but itâs going to get boring if you use the expression âfor exampleâ every time. Here are a couple of other ways of saying the same thing.
31. For instance
Example: âSome birds migrate to avoid harsher winter climates. Swallows, for instance, leave the UK in early winter and fly southâŚâ
32. To give an illustration
Example: âTo give an illustration of what I mean, letâs look at the case ofâŚâ
Signifying importance
When you want to demonstrate that a point is particularly important, there are several ways of highlighting it as such.
33. Significantly
Usage: Used to introduce a point that is loaded with meaning that might not be immediately apparent. Example: âSignificantly, Tacitus omits to tell us the kind of gossip prevalent in Suetoniusâ accounts of the same period.â
34. Notably
Usage: This can be used to mean âsignificantlyâ (as above), and it can also be used interchangeably with âin particularâ (the example below demonstrates the first of these ways of using it). Example: âActual figures are notably absent from Scholar Aâs analysis.â
35. Importantly
Usage: Use âimportantlyâ interchangeably with âsignificantlyâ. Example: âImportantly, Scholar A was being employed by X when he wrote this work, and was presumably therefore under pressure to portray the situation more favourably than he perhaps might otherwise have done.â
Summarising
Youâve almost made it to the end of the essay, but your work isnât over yet. You need to end by wrapping up everything youâve talked about, showing that youâve considered the arguments on both sides and reached the most likely conclusion. Here are some words and phrases to help you.
36. In conclusion
Usage: Typically used to introduce the concluding paragraph or sentence of an essay, summarising what youâve discussed in a broad overview. Example: âIn conclusion, the evidence points almost exclusively to Argument A.â
37. Above all
Usage: Used to signify what you believe to be the most significant point, and the main takeaway from the essay. Example: âAbove all, it seems pertinent to remember thatâŚâ
38. Persuasive
Usage: This is a useful word to use when summarising which argument you find most convincing. Example: âScholar Aâs point â that Constanze Mozart was motivated by financial gain â seems to me to be the most persuasive argument for her actions following Mozartâs death.â
39. Compelling
Usage: Use in the same way as âpersuasiveâ above. Example: âThe most compelling argument is presented by Scholar A.â
40. All things considered
Usage: This means âtaking everything into accountâ. Example: âAll things considered, it seems reasonable to assume thatâŚâ
How many of these words and phrases will you get into your next essay? And are any of your favourite essay terms missing from our list? Let us know in the comments below, or get in touch here to find out more about courses that can help you with your essays.
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How to Write the Perfect Essay
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You can keep adding to this plan, crossing bits out and linking the different bubbles when you spot connections between them. Even though you wonât have time to make a detailed plan under exam conditions, it can be helpful to draft a brief one, including a few key words, so that you donât panic and go off topic when writing your essay.
If you donât like the mind map format, there are plenty of others to choose from: you could make a table, a flowchart, or simply a list of bullet points.
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Thanks for signing up, step 2: have a clear structure.
Think about this while you’re planning: your essay is like an argument or a speech. It needs to have a logical structure, with all your points coming together to answer the question.
Start with the basics! It’s best to choose a few major points which will become your main paragraphs. Three main paragraphs is a good number for an exam essay, since you’ll be under time pressure.Â
If you agree with the question overall, it can be helpful to organise your points in the following pattern:
- YES (agreement with the question)
- AND (another YES point)
- BUT (disagreement or complication)
If you disagree with the question overall, try:
- AND (another BUT point)
For example, you could structure the Of Mice and Men sample question, “To what extent is Curleyâs wife portrayed as a victim in Of Mice and Men ?”, as follows:
- YES (descriptions of her appearance)
- AND (other people’s attitudes towards her)
- BUT (her position as the only woman on the ranch gives her power as she uses her femininity to her advantage)
If you wanted to write a longer essay, you could include additional paragraphs under the YES/AND categories, perhaps discussing the ways in which Curleyâs wife reveals her vulnerability and insecurities, and shares her dreams with the other characters. Alternatively, you could also lengthen your essay by including another BUT paragraph about her cruel and manipulative streak.
Of course, this is not necessarily the only right way to answer this essay question â as long as you back up your points with evidence from the text, you can take any standpoint that makes sense.
Step 3: Back up your points with well-analysed quotations
You wouldnât write a scientific report without including evidence to support your findings, so why should it be any different with an essay? Even though you arenât strictly required to substantiate every single point you make with a quotation, thereâs no harm in trying.
A close reading of your quotations can enrich your appreciation of the question and will be sure to impress examiners. When selecting the best quotations to use in your essay, keep an eye out for specific literary techniques. For example, you could highlight Curleyâs wifeâs use of a rhetorical question when she says, a”nâ what am I doinâ? Standinâ here talking to a bunch of bindle stiffs.” This might look like:
The rhetorical question âanâ what am I doinâ?â signifies that Curleyâs wife is very insecure; she seems to be questioning her own life choices. Moreover, she does not expect anyone to respond to her question, highlighting her loneliness and isolation on the ranch.
Other literary techniques to look out for include:
- Tricolon â a group of three words or phrases placed close together for emphasis
- Tautology â using different words that mean the same thing: e.g. “frightening” and “terrifying”
- Parallelism â ABAB structure, often signifying movement from one concept to another
- Chiasmus â ABBA structure, drawing attention to a phrase
- Polysyndeton â many conjunctions in a sentence
- Asyndeton â lack of conjunctions, which can speed up the pace of a sentence
- Polyptoton â using the same word in different forms for emphasis: e.g. “done” and “doing”
- Alliteration â repetition of the same sound, including assonance (similar vowel sounds), plosive alliteration (“b”, “d” and “p” sounds) and sibilance (“s” sounds)
- Anaphora â repetition of words, often used to emphasise a particular point
Donât worry if you canât locate all of these literary devices in the work youâre analysing. You can also discuss more obvious techniques, like metaphor, simile and onomatopoeia. Itâs not a problem if you canât remember all the long names; itâs far more important to be able to confidently explain the effects of each technique and highlight its relevance to the question.
Step 4: Be creative and original throughout
Anyone can write an essay using the tips above, but the thing that really makes it “perfect” is your own unique take on the topic. If youâve noticed something intriguing or unusual in your reading, point it out â if you find it interesting, chances are the examiner will too!
Creative writing and essay writing are more closely linked than you might imagine. Keep the idea that youâre writing a speech or argument in mind, and youâre guaranteed to grab your readerâs attention.
Itâs important to set out your line of argument in your introduction, introducing your main points and the general direction your essay will take, but donât forget to keep something back for the conclusion, too. Yes, you need to summarise your main points, but if youâre just repeating the things you said in your introduction, the body of the essay is rendered pointless.
Think of your conclusion as the climax of your speech, the bit everything else has been leading up to, rather than the boring plenary at the end of the interesting stuff.
To return to Of Mice and Men once more, here’s an example of the ideal difference between an introduction and a conclusion:
Introduction
In John Steinbeckâs Of Mice and Men , Curleyâs wife is portrayed as an ambiguous character. She could be viewed either as a cruel, seductive temptress or a lonely woman who is a victim of her societyâs attitudes. Though she does seem to wield a form of sexual power, it is clear that Curleyâs wife is largely a victim. This interpretation is supported by Steinbeckâs description of her appearance, other peopleâs attitudes, her dreams, and her evident loneliness and insecurity.
Overall, it is clear that Curleyâs wife is a victim and is portrayed as such throughout the novel in the descriptions of her appearance, her dreams, other peopleâs judgemental attitudes, and her loneliness and insecurities. However, a character who was a victim and nothing else would be one-dimensional and Curleyâs wife is not. Although she suffers in many ways, she is shown to assert herself through the manipulation of her femininity â a small rebellion against the victimisation she experiences.
Both refer back consistently to the question and summarise the essayâs main points. However, the conclusion adds something new which has been established in the main body of the essay and complicates the simple summary which is found in the introduction.
Hannah is an undergraduate English student at Somerville College, University of Oxford, and has a particular interest in postcolonial literature and the Gothic. She thinks literature is a crucial way of developing empathy and learning about the wider world. When she isn’t writing about 17th-century court masques, she enjoys acting, travelling and creative writing.Â
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What is an essay?
Generally speaking, an essay designates a literary work in which the author defends a point of view or a personal conviction, using logical arguments and literary devices in order to inform and convince the reader.
So â although essays can be broadly split into four categories: argumentative, expository, narrative, and descriptive â an essay can simply be described as a focused piece of writing designed to inform or persuade. đ¤
The purpose of an essay is to present a coherent argument in response to a stimulus or question and to persuade the reader that your position is credible, believable and reasonable. đ
So, a âgoodâ essay relies on a confident writing style â itâs clear, well-substantiated, focussed, explanatory and descriptive . The structure follows a logical progression and above all, the body of the essay clearly correlates to the tile â answering the question where one has been posed.
But, how do you go about making sure that you tick all these boxes and keep within a specified word count? Read on for the answer as well as an example essay structure to follow and a handy step-by-step guide to writing the perfect essay â hooray. đ
Sometimes, it is helpful to think about your essay like it is a well-balanced argument or a speech â it needs to have a logical structure, with all your points coming together to answer the question in a coherent manner. âď¸
Of course, essays can vary significantly in length but besides that, they all follow a fairly strict pattern or structure made up of three sections. Lean into this predictability because it will keep you on track and help you make your point clearly. Letâs take a look at the typical essay structure:
#1 Introduction
Start your introduction with the central claim of your essay. Let the reader know exactly what you intend to say with this essay. Communicate what youâre going to argue, and in what order. The final part of your introduction should also say what conclusions youâre going to draw â it sounds counter-intuitive but itâs not â more on that below. 1ď¸âŁ
Make your point, evidence it and explain it. This part of the essay â generally made up of three or more paragraphs depending on the length of your essay â is where you present your argument. The first sentence of each paragraph â much like an introduction to an essay â should summarise what your paragraph intends to explain in more detail. 2ď¸âŁ
#3 Conclusion
This is where you affirm your argument â remind the reader what you just proved in your essay and how you did it. This section will sound quite similar to your introduction but â having written the essay â youâll be summarising rather than setting out your stall. 3ď¸âŁ
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#1 Make sure you understand the question
#2 complete background reading.
#3 Make a detailed plan
#4 Write your opening sentences
#5 flesh out your essay in a rough draft, #6 evidence your opinion, #7 final proofread and edit.
Now that you have familiarised yourself with the 7 steps standing between you and the perfect essay, letâs take a closer look at each of those stages so that you can get on with crafting your written arguments with confidence .
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Unless you are writing under exam conditions , you will most likely have been working towards this essay for some time, by doing thorough background reading. Re-read relevant chapters and sections, highlight pertinent material and maybe even stray outside the designated reading list, this shows genuine interest and extended knowledge. đ
#3 Make a detailed plan
Following the handy structure we shared with you above, now is the time to create the âskeleton structureâ or essay plan. Working from your essay title, plot out what you want your paragraphs to cover and how that information is going to flow. You donât need to start writing any full sentences yet but it might be useful to think about the various quotes you plan to use to substantiate each section. đ
Having mapped out the overall trajectory of your essay, you can start to drill down into the detail. First, write the opening sentence for each of the paragraphs in the body section of your essay. Remember â each paragraph is like a mini-essay â the opening sentence should summarise what the paragraph will then go on to explain in more detail. đď¸
Next, it's time to write the bulk of your words and flesh out your arguments. Follow the âpoint, evidence, explainâ method. The opening sentences â already written â should introduce your âpointsâ, so now you need to âevidenceâ them with corroborating research and âexplainâ how the evidence youâve presented proves the point youâre trying to make. âď¸
With a rough draft in front of you, you can take a moment to read what you have written so far. Are there any sections that require further substantiation? Have you managed to include the most relevant material you originally highlighted in your background reading? Now is the time to make sure you have evidenced all your opinions and claims with the strongest quotes, citations and material. đ
This is your final chance to re-read your essay and go over it with a fine-toothed comb before pressing âsubmitâ. We highly recommend leaving a day or two between finishing your essay and the final proofread if possible â youâll be amazed at the difference this makes, allowing you to return with a fresh pair of eyes and a more discerning judgment. đ¤
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100+ Useful Words and Phrases to Write a Great Essay
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How to Write a Great Essay in English! This lesson provides 100+ useful words, transition words and expressions used in writing an essay. Let’s take a look!
The secret to a successful essay doesn’t just lie in the clever things you talk about and the way you structure your points.
Useful Words and Phrases to Write a Great Essay
Overview of an essay.
Useful Phrases for Proficiency Essays
Developing the argument
- The first aspect to point out is that…
- Let us start by considering the facts.
- The novel portrays, deals with, revolves around…
- Central to the novel is…
- The character of xxx embodies/ epitomizes…
The other side of the argument
- It would also be interesting to see…
- One should, nevertheless, consider the problem from another angle.
- Equally relevant to the issue are the questions of…
- The arguments we have presented… suggest that…/ prove that…/ would indicate that…
- From these arguments one must…/ could…/ might… conclude that…
- All of this points to the conclusion that…
- To conclude…
Ordering elements
- Firstly,…/ Secondly,…/ Finally,… (note the comma after all these introductory words.)
- As a final point…
- On the one hand, …. on the other hand…
- If on the one hand it can be said that… the same is not true for…
- The first argument suggests that… whilst the second suggests that…
- There are at least xxx points to highlight.
Adding elements
- Furthermore, one should not forget that…
- In addition to…
- Moreover…
- It is important to add that…
Accepting other points of view
- Nevertheless, one should accept that…
- However, we also agree that…
Personal opinion
- We/I personally believe that…
- Our/My own point of view is that…
- It is my contention that…
- I am convinced that…
- My own opinion is…
Others’ opinions
- According to some critics… Critics:
- believe that
- suggest that
- are convinced that
- point out that
- emphasize that
- contend that
- go as far as to say that
- argue for this
Introducing examples
- For example…
- For instance…
- To illustrate this point…
Introducing facts
- It is… true that…/ clear that…/ noticeable that…
- One should note here that…
Saying what you think is true
- This leads us to believe that…
- It is very possible that…
- In view of these facts, it is quite likely that…
- Doubtless,…
- One cannot deny that…
- It is (very) clear from these observations that…
- All the same, it is possible that…
- It is difficult to believe that…
Accepting other points to a certain degree
- One can agree up to a certain point with…
- Certainly,… However,…
- It cannot be denied that…
Emphasizing particular points
- The last example highlights the fact that…
- Not only… but also…
- We would even go so far as to say that…
Moderating, agreeing, disagreeing
- By and large…
- Perhaps we should also point out the fact that…
- It would be unfair not to mention the fact that…
- One must admit that…
- We cannot ignore the fact that…
- One cannot possibly accept the fact that…
Consequences
- From these facts, one may conclude that…
- That is why, in our opinion, …
- Which seems to confirm the idea that…
- Thus,…/ Therefore,…
- Some critics suggest…, whereas others…
- Compared to…
- On the one hand, there is the firm belief that… On the other hand, many people are convinced that…
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Phrases For Balanced Arguments
Introduction
- It is often said that…
- It is undeniable that…
- It is a well-known fact that…
- One of the most striking features of this text is…
- The first thing that needs to be said is…
- First of all, let us try to analyze…
- One argument in support of…
- We must distinguish carefully between…
- The second reason for…
- An important aspect of the text is…
- It is worth stating at this point that…
- On the other hand, we can observe that…
- The other side of the coin is, however, that…
- Another way of looking at this question is to…
- What conclusions can be drawn from all this?
- The most satisfactory conclusion that we can come to is…
- To sum up… we are convinced that…/ …we believe that…/ …we have to accept that…
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What Makes a Good Essay?
By stephanie whetstone.
The deadline for this year’s Princeton Writes Prize Staff Essay Contest has been set (March 1, 2020)! We hope you are already hard at work polishing your prose, but in case you are struggling to get started, let’s consider what makes a “good” essay.
Dictionary.com defines the essay as âa short literary composition on a particular theme or subject, usually in prose and generally analytic, speculative, or interpretative.â This leaves a lot of room for creativity. For a personal essay, focus on the personal part. Why are you writing about this subject? Why now? How does your experience connect with your audienceâs? A personal essay is not self-indulgent; rather, it is a means of connecting with others through the common experience of being human.
The winners of the Princeton Writes Prize have written about New South, travels in Japan, a timeworn stone step, and a dining room table. None of these subjects is inherently gripping, but they became so when connected to the writerâs thoughtful, heartfelt experience.
Write as specifically as you can about what is important to you, what excites you, what connects you to the world, or what you canât seem to get off your mind. So how do you start? Think about your purpose: is it to entertain, to explain, to argue, to compare, or to reveal? It can also be a combination of these things.
At Princeton, we are lucky to have one of the great essay writers of our time, John McPhee, on faculty. In his wonderful essay, âSearching for Marvin Gardens,â McPhee has a few stories going at once: the âreal timeâ experience of playing monopoly with a friend, his walk through the streets of Atlantic City, the history of the creation of the game of Monopoly, and a commentary about the economic and social realities of the time in which the essay was written. It begins:
âGo. I roll the diceâa six and a two. Through the air I move my token, the flatiron, to Vermont Avenue, where dog packs range.
âThe dogs are moving (some are limping) through ruins, rubble, fire damÂage, open garbage. Doorways are gone. Lath is visible in the crumbling walls of the buildings. The street sparkles with shattered glass. I have never seen, anywhere, so many broken windows. A signâ”Slow, Children at Play”âhas been bent backward by an automobile. At the farmhouse, the dogs turn up Pacific and disappear.”
The primary action puts the reader immediately into the world the writer has created and follows âcharactersâ through a plot. The connecting paragraphs provide context and place the experience in the broader world. You may want to tell your story straight through or, like McPhee, stray from a linear structureânot just beginning, middle, endâmoving back and forth in time.
Begin your story at the last possible moment you can without losing important information. If you are writing about the birth of a child, for example, you might want to start in the hospital in the midst of labor, rather than months before.
To shift in time, make sure you have an object or experience to âtriggerâ the shift, such as McPheeâs dogs. You need not be as accomplished as he to write your own essay, but reading his work and the work of other writers can provide guidance and inspiration.
Remember that an essay is a story, so even though it is nonfiction, it will benefit from the elements of a story: characters, plot, setting, dialogue, point of view, and tone. Is your story funny, sad, contemplative, nostalgic, magical, or a combination of these?
Your job as a writer is to help the reader imagine what you see in your mindâs eye. That requires sensory detail. Be sure to write about sounds, sights, smells, textures, and tastes. Remember, too, that your work will be read by a wide audience, so you need to determine how much of yourself and your intimate experience you are comfortable sharing.
Another great Princeton writer, Joyce Carol Oates, writes with exquisite sensory detail in her essay, âThey All Just Went Away.â
âTo push open a door into such silence: the absolute emptiness of a house whose occupants have departed. Often, the crack of broken glass underfoot. A startled buzzing of flies, hornets. The slithering, ticklish sensation of a garter snake crawling across floorboards.
âLeft behind, as if in haste, were remnants of a lost household. A broken toy on the floor, a babyâs bottle. A rain-soaked sofa, looking as if it had been gutted with a hunterâs skilled knife. Strips of wallpaper like shredded skin. Smashed crockery, piles of tin cans; soda, beer, whiskey bottles. An icebox, its door yawning open. Once, on a counter, a dirt-stiffened rag that, unfolded like precious cloth, revealed itself to be a womanâs cheaply glamorous âsee-throughâ blouse, threaded with glitter-strips of gold.”
No matter what you choose to write about, forgive your first draft if it’s terrible. You will improve it in the editing. And finally, read each draft aloud: tell the story first to yourself.
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If you grow up to be a professional writer, everything you write will first go through an editor before being published. This is because the process of writing is really a process of re-writing âof rethinking and reexamining your work, usually with the help of someone else. So what does this mean for your student writing? And in particular, what does it mean for very important, but nonprofessional writing like your college essay? Should you ask your parents to look at your essay? Pay for an essay service?
If you are wondering what kind of help you can, and should, get with your personal statement, you've come to the right place! In this article, I'll talk about what kind of writing help is useful, ethical, and even expected for your college admission essay . I'll also point out who would make a good editor, what the differences between editing and proofreading are, what to expect from a good editor, and how to spot and stay away from a bad one.
Table of Contents
What Kind of Help for Your Essay Can You Get?
What's Good Editing?
What should an editor do for you, what kind of editing should you avoid, proofreading, what's good proofreading, what kind of proofreading should you avoid.
What Do Colleges Think Of You Getting Help With Your Essay?
Who Can/Should Help You?
Advice for editors.
Should You Pay Money For Essay Editing?
The Bottom Line
What's next, what kind of help with your essay can you get.
Rather than talking in general terms about "help," let's first clarify the two different ways that someone else can improve your writing . There is editing, which is the more intensive kind of assistance that you can use throughout the whole process. And then there's proofreading, which is the last step of really polishing your final product.
Let me go into some more detail about editing and proofreading, and then explain how good editors and proofreaders can help you."
Editing is helping the author (in this case, you) go from a rough draft to a finished work . Editing is the process of asking questions about what you're saying, how you're saying it, and how you're organizing your ideas. But not all editing is good editing . In fact, it's very easy for an editor to cross the line from supportive to overbearing and over-involved.
Ability to clarify assignments. A good editor is usually a good writer, and certainly has to be a good reader. For example, in this case, a good editor should make sure you understand the actual essay prompt you're supposed to be answering.
Open-endedness. Good editing is all about asking questions about your ideas and work, but without providing answers. It's about letting you stick to your story and message, and doesn't alter your point of view.
Think of an editor as a great travel guide. It can show you the many different places your trip could take you. It should explain any parts of the trip that could derail your trip or confuse the traveler. But it never dictates your path, never forces you to go somewhere you don't want to go, and never ignores your interests so that the trip no longer seems like it's your own. So what should good editors do?
Help Brainstorm Topics
Sometimes it's easier to bounce thoughts off of someone else. This doesn't mean that your editor gets to come up with ideas, but they can certainly respond to the various topic options you've come up with. This way, you're less likely to write about the most boring of your ideas, or to write about something that isn't actually important to you.
If you're wondering how to come up with options for your editor to consider, check out our guide to brainstorming topics for your college essay .
Help Revise Your Drafts
Here, your editor can't upset the delicate balance of not intervening too much or too little. It's tricky, but a great way to think about it is to remember: editing is about asking questions, not giving answers .
Revision questions should point out:
- Places where more detail or more description would help the reader connect with your essay
- Places where structure and logic don't flow, losing the reader's attention
- Places where there aren't transitions between paragraphs, confusing the reader
- Moments where your narrative or the arguments you're making are unclear
But pointing to potential problems is not the same as actually rewritingâeditors let authors fix the problems themselves.
Bad editing is usually very heavy-handed editing. Instead of helping you find your best voice and ideas, a bad editor changes your writing into their own vision.
You may be dealing with a bad editor if they:
- Add material (examples, descriptions) that doesn't come from you
- Use a thesaurus to make your college essay sound "more mature"
- Add meaning or insight to the essay that doesn't come from you
- Tell you what to say and how to say it
- Write sentences, phrases, and paragraphs for you
- Change your voice in the essay so it no longer sounds like it was written by a teenager
Colleges can tell the difference between a 17-year-old's writing and a 50-year-old's writing. Not only that, they have access to your SAT or ACT Writing section, so they can compare your essay to something else you wrote. Writing that's a little more polished is great and expected. But a totally different voice and style will raise questions.
Where's the Line Between Helpful Editing and Unethical Over-Editing?
Sometimes it's hard to tell whether your college essay editor is doing the right thing. Here are some guidelines for staying on the ethical side of the line.
- An editor should say that the opening paragraph is kind of boring, and explain what exactly is making it drag. But it's overstepping for an editor to tell you exactly how to change it.
- An editor should point out where your prose is unclear or vague. But it's completely inappropriate for the editor to rewrite that section of your essay.
- An editor should let you know that a section is light on detail or description. But giving you similes and metaphors to beef up that description is a no-go.
Proofreading (also called copy-editing) is checking for errors in the last draft of a written work. It happens at the end of the process and is meant as the final polishing touch. Proofreading is meticulous and detail-oriented, focusing on small corrections. It sands off all the surface rough spots that could alienate the reader.
Because proofreading is usually concerned with making fixes on the word or sentence level, this is the only process where someone else can actually add to or take away things from your essay . This is because what they are adding or taking away tends to be one or two misplaced letters.
Laser focus. Proofreading is all about the tiny details, so the ability to really concentrate on finding small slip-ups is a must.
Excellent grammar and spelling skills. Proofreaders need to dot every "i" and cross every "t." Good proofreaders should correct spelling, punctuation, capitalization, and grammar. They should put foreign words in italics and surround quotations with quotation marks. They should check that you used the correct college's name, and that you adhered to any formatting requirements (name and date at the top of the page, uniform font and size, uniform spacing).
Limited interference. A proofreader needs to make sure that you followed any word limits. But if cuts need to be made to shorten the essay, that's your job and not the proofreader's.
A bad proofreader either tries to turn into an editor, or just lacks the skills and knowledge necessary to do the job.
Some signs that you're working with a bad proofreader are:
- If they suggest making major changes to the final draft of your essay. Proofreading happens when editing is already finished.
- If they aren't particularly good at spelling, or don't know grammar, or aren't detail-oriented enough to find someone else's small mistakes.
- If they start swapping out your words for fancier-sounding synonyms, or changing the voice and sound of your essay in other ways. A proofreader is there to check for errors, not to take the 17-year-old out of your writing.
What Do Colleges Think of Your Getting Help With Your Essay?
Admissions officers agree: light editing and proofreading are goodâeven required ! But they also want to make sure you're the one doing the work on your essay. They want essays with stories, voice, and themes that come from you. They want to see work that reflects your actual writing ability, and that focuses on what you find important.
On the Importance of Editing
Get feedback. Have a fresh pair of eyes give you some feedback. Don't allow someone else to rewrite your essay, but do take advantage of others' edits and opinions when they seem helpful. ( Bates College )
Read your essay aloud to someone. Reading the essay out loud offers a chance to hear how your essay sounds outside your head. This exercise reveals flaws in the essay's flow, highlights grammatical errors and helps you ensure that you are communicating the exact message you intended. ( Dickinson College )
On the Value of Proofreading
Share your essays with at least one or two people who know you wellâsuch as a parent, teacher, counselor, or friendâand ask for feedback. Remember that you ultimately have control over your essays, and your essays should retain your own voice, but others may be able to catch mistakes that you missed and help suggest areas to cut if you are over the word limit. ( Yale University )
Proofread and then ask someone else to proofread for you. Although we want substance, we also want to be able to see that you can write a paper for our professors and avoid careless mistakes that would drive them crazy. ( Oberlin College )
On Watching Out for Too Much Outside Influence
Limit the number of people who review your essay. Too much input usually means your voice is lost in the writing style. ( Carleton College )
Ask for input (but not too much). Your parents, friends, guidance counselors, coaches, and teachers are great people to bounce ideas off of for your essay. They know how unique and spectacular you are, and they can help you decide how to articulate it. Keep in mind, however, that a 45-year-old lawyer writes quite differently from an 18-year-old student, so if your dad ends up writing the bulk of your essay, we're probably going to notice. ( Vanderbilt University )
Now let's talk about some potential people to approach for your college essay editing and proofreading needs. It's best to start close to home and slowly expand outward. Not only are your family and friends more invested in your success than strangers, but they also have a better handle on your interests and personality. This knowledge is key for judging whether your essay is expressing your true self.
Parents or Close Relatives
Your family may be full of potentially excellent editors! Parents are deeply committed to your well-being, and family members know you and your life well enough to offer details or incidents that can be included in your essay. On the other hand, the rewriting process necessarily involves criticism, which is sometimes hard to hear from someone very close to you.
A parent or close family member is a great choice for an editor if you can answer "yes" to the following questions. Is your parent or close relative a good writer or reader? Do you have a relationship where editing your essay won't create conflict? Are you able to constructively listen to criticism and suggestion from the parent?
One suggestion for defusing face-to-face discussions is to try working on the essay over email. Send your parent a draft, have them write you back some comments, and then you can pick which of their suggestions you want to use and which to discard.
Teachers or Tutors
A humanities teacher that you have a good relationship with is a great choice. I am purposefully saying humanities, and not just English, because teachers of Philosophy, History, Anthropology, and any other classes where you do a lot of writing, are all used to reviewing student work.
Moreover, any teacher or tutor that has been working with you for some time, knows you very well and can vet the essay to make sure it "sounds like you."
If your teacher or tutor has some experience with what college essays are supposed to be like, ask them to be your editor. If not, then ask whether they have time to proofread your final draft.
Guidance or College Counselor at Your School
The best thing about asking your counselor to edit your work is that this is their job. This means that they have a very good sense of what colleges are looking for in an application essay.
At the same time, school counselors tend to have relationships with admissions officers in many colleges, which again gives them insight into what works and which college is focused on what aspect of the application.
Unfortunately, in many schools the guidance counselor tends to be way overextended. If your ratio is 300 students to 1 college counselor, you're unlikely to get that person's undivided attention and focus. It is still useful to ask them for general advice about your potential topics, but don't expect them to be able to stay with your essay from first draft to final version.
Friends, Siblings, or Classmates
Although they most likely don't have much experience with what colleges are hoping to see, your peers are excellent sources for checking that your essay is you .
Friends and siblings are perfect for the read-aloud edit. Read your essay to them so they can listen for words and phrases that are stilted, pompous, or phrases that just don't sound like you.
You can even trade essays and give helpful advice on each other's work.
If your editor hasn't worked with college admissions essays very much, no worries! Any astute and attentive reader can still greatly help with your process. But, as in all things, beginners do better with some preparation.
First, your editor should read our advice about how to write a college essay introduction , how to spot and fix a bad college essay , and get a sense of what other students have written by going through some admissions essays that worked .
Then, as they read your essay, they can work through the following series of questions that will help them to guide you.
Introduction Questions
- Is the first sentence a killer opening line? Why or why not?
- Does the introduction hook the reader? Does it have a colorful, detailed, and interesting narrative? Or does it propose a compelling or surprising idea?
- Can you feel the author's voice in the introduction, or is the tone dry, dull, or overly formal? Show the places where the voice comes through.
Essay Body Questions
- Does the essay have a through-line? Is it built around a central argument, thought, idea, or focus? Can you put this idea into your own words?
- How is the essay organized? By logical progression? Chronologically? Do you feel order when you read it, or are there moments where you are confused or lose the thread of the essay?
- Does the essay have both narratives about the author's life and explanations and insight into what these stories reveal about the author's character, personality, goals, or dreams? If not, which is missing?
- Does the essay flow? Are there smooth transitions/clever links between paragraphs? Between the narrative and moments of insight?
Reader Response Questions
- Does the writer's personality come through? Do we know what the speaker cares about? Do we get a sense of "who he or she is"?
- Where did you feel most connected to the essay? Which parts of the essay gave you a "you are there" sensation by invoking your senses? What moments could you picture in your head well?
- Where are the details and examples vague and not specific enough?
- Did you get an "a-ha!" feeling anywhere in the essay? Is there a moment of insight that connected all the dots for you? Is there a good reveal or "twist" anywhere in the essay?
- What are the strengths of this essay? What needs the most improvement?
Should You Pay Money for Essay Editing?
One alternative to asking someone you know to help you with your college essay is the paid editor route. There are two different ways to pay for essay help: a private essay coach or a less personal editing service , like the many proliferating on the internet.
My advice is to think of these options as a last resort rather than your go-to first choice. I'll first go through the reasons why. Then, if you do decide to go with a paid editor, I'll help you decide between a coach and a service.
When to Consider a Paid Editor
In general, I think hiring someone to work on your essay makes a lot of sense if none of the people I discussed above are a possibility for you.
If you can't ask your parents. For example, if your parents aren't good writers, or if English isn't their first language. Or if you think getting your parents to help is going create unnecessary extra conflict in your relationship with them (applying to college is stressful as it is!)
If you can't ask your teacher or tutor. Maybe you don't have a trusted teacher or tutor that has time to look over your essay with focus. Or, for instance, your favorite humanities teacher has very limited experience with college essays and so won't know what admissions officers want to see.
If you can't ask your guidance counselor. This could be because your guidance counselor is way overwhelmed with other students.
If you can't share your essay with those who know you. It might be that your essay is on a very personal topic that you're unwilling to share with parents, teachers, or peers. Just make sure it doesn't fall into one of the bad-idea topics in our article on bad college essays .
If the cost isn't a consideration. Many of these services are quite expensive, and private coaches even more so. If you have finite resources, I'd say that hiring an SAT or ACT tutor (whether it's PrepScholar or someone else) is better way to spend your money . This is because there's no guarantee that a slightly better essay will sufficiently elevate the rest of your application, but a significantly higher SAT score will definitely raise your applicant profile much more.
Should You Hire an Essay Coach?
On the plus side, essay coaches have read dozens or even hundreds of college essays, so they have experience with the format. Also, because you'll be working closely with a specific person, it's more personal than sending your essay to a service, which will know even less about you.
But, on the minus side, you'll still be bouncing ideas off of someone who doesn't know that much about you . In general, if you can adequately get the help from someone you know, there is no advantage to paying someone to help you.
If you do decide to hire a coach, ask your school counselor, or older students that have used the service for recommendations. If you can't afford the coach's fees, ask whether they can work on a sliding scale âmany do. And finally, beware those who guarantee admission to your school of choiceâessay coaches don't have any special magic that can back up those promises.
Should You Send Your Essay to a Service?
On the plus side, essay editing services provide a similar product to essay coaches, and they cost significantly less . If you have some assurance that you'll be working with a good editor, the lack of face-to-face interaction won't prevent great results.
On the minus side, however, it can be difficult to gauge the quality of the service before working with them . If they are churning through many application essays without getting to know the students they are helping, you could end up with an over-edited essay that sounds just like everyone else's. In the worst case scenario, an unscrupulous service could send you back a plagiarized essay.
Getting recommendations from friends or a school counselor for reputable services is key to avoiding heavy-handed editing that writes essays for you or does too much to change your essay. Including a badly-edited essay like this in your application could cause problems if there are inconsistencies. For example, in interviews it might be clear you didn't write the essay, or the skill of the essay might not be reflected in your schoolwork and test scores.
Should You Buy an Essay Written by Someone Else?
Let me elaborate. There are super sketchy places on the internet where you can simply buy a pre-written essay. Don't do this!
For one thing, you'll be lying on an official, signed document. All college applications make you sign a statement saying something like this:
I certify that all information submitted in the admission processâincluding the application, the personal essay, any supplements, and any other supporting materialsâis my own work, factually true, and honestly presented... I understand that I may be subject to a range of possible disciplinary actions, including admission revocation, expulsion, or revocation of course credit, grades, and degree, should the information I have certified be false. (From the Common Application )
For another thing, if your academic record doesn't match the essay's quality, the admissions officer will start thinking your whole application is riddled with lies.
Admission officers have full access to your writing portion of the SAT or ACT so that they can compare work that was done in proctored conditions with that done at home. They can tell if these were written by different people. Not only that, but there are now a number of search engines that faculty and admission officers can use to see if an essay contains strings of words that have appeared in other essaysâyou have no guarantee that the essay you bought wasn't also bought by 50 other students.
- You should get college essay help with both editing and proofreading
- A good editor will ask questions about your idea, logic, and structure, and will point out places where clarity is needed
- A good editor will absolutely not answer these questions, give you their own ideas, or write the essay or parts of the essay for you
- A good proofreader will find typos and check your formatting
- All of them agree that getting light editing and proofreading is necessary
- Parents, teachers, guidance or college counselor, and peers or siblings
- If you can't ask any of those, you can pay for college essay help, but watch out for services or coaches who over-edit you work
- Don't buy a pre-written essay! Colleges can tell, and it'll make your whole application sound false.
Ready to start working on your essay? Check out our explanation of the point of the personal essay and the role it plays on your applications and then explore our step-by-step guide to writing a great college essay .
Using the Common Application for your college applications? We have an excellent guide to the Common App essay prompts and useful advice on how to pick the Common App prompt that's right for you . Wondering how other people tackled these prompts? Then work through our roundup of over 130 real college essay examples published by colleges .
Stressed about whether to take the SAT again before submitting your application? Let us help you decide how many times to take this test . If you choose to go for it, we have the ultimate guide to studying for the SAT to give you the ins and outs of the best ways to study.
Anna scored in the 99th percentile on her SATs in high school, and went on to major in English at Princeton and to get her doctorate in English Literature at Columbia. She is passionate about improving student access to higher education.
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The Best College Is One Where You Donât Fit In
By Michael S. Roth
Mr. Roth is the president of Wesleyan University.
This time of year, college campuses like the one where I live fill up with high school seniors preparing to make what feels like a momentous choice. The first imperative is to find a school that they can afford, but beyond that, many students have been advised to find one where they can see themselves. Too often, they take this to mean finding a place with students like them, even students who look like them â a place where they will feel comfortable. I canât tell you how many families have described driving many hours to a campus somewhere and having their daughter or son say something like: âWe donât need to get out. I can tell already this isnât for me.â
âHow about the info session?â the patient parent asks.
Choosing a college based on where you feel comfortable is a mistake. The most rewarding forms of education make you feel very uncomfortable, not least because they force you to recognize your own ignorance. Students should hope to encounter ideas and experience cultural forms that push them beyond their current opinions and tastes. Sure, revulsion is possible (and one can learn from that), but so is the discovery that your filtered ways of taking in the world had blocked out things in which you now delight. One learns from that, too.
Either way, a college education should enable you to discover capabilities you didnât even know you had while deepening those that provide you with meaning and direction. To discover these capabilities is to practice freedom, the opposite of trying to figure out how to conform to the world as it is. Tomorrow the world will be different anyway. Education should help you find ways of shaping change, not just ways of coping with it.
These days, the first thing that campus visitors may notice are protests over the war in Gaza. These will be attractive to some who see in them an admirable commitment to principle and off-putting to those who see evidence of groupthink or intimidation. Any campus should be a â safe enough space ,â one free of harassment and intimidation, but not one where identities and beliefs are just reinforced. Thatâs why itâs profoundly disturbing to hear of Jewish students afraid to move about because of the threat of verbal and physical abuse. And thatâs why itâs inspiring to see Muslim and Jewish students camped out together to protest a war they think is unjust.
Refusing to conform can mean being rebellious, but it can also mean just going against the grain, like being unabashedly religious in a very secular institution or being the conservative or libertarian voice in classes filled with progressives. I recently asked one such student if he perceived any faculty bias. âDonât worry about me,â he replied. âMy professors find me fascinating.â Some of the military veterans whoâve attended my liberal arts university have disrupted the easy prejudices of their progressive peers while finding themselves working in areas theyâd never expected to be interested in.
Over the years, Iâve found nonconformists to be the most interesting people to have in my classes; Iâve also found that they often turn out to be the people who add the greatest value to the organizations in which they work. Iâm thinking of Kendall, a computer science major I had in a philosophy class whom I saw on campus recently because she was directing an ambitious musical. When I expressed my admiration at her unlikely combination of interests, she was almost insulted by my surprise and enthusiasm. Had I really stereotyped her as someone not interested in the arts just because she excels in science?
Or take the student activist (please!) who a couple of years after leading a demonstration to the presidentâs office made an appointment to meet with me. I was worried about new political demands, but she had something else in mind: getting a recommendation for law school. I could, she reminded me with a smile, write about her leadership abilities on campus. And I did.
Of course, even students who refuse to fall in with the herd should learn how to listen and speak to it and to various groups different from their own. Thatâs an increasingly valuable capacity, and it will help them make their way in the world, whatever school they attend, whatever their major.
Side by side, students should learn how to be full human beings, not mere appendages, and this means continually questioning what they are doing and learning from one another. âTruly speaking,â Ralph Waldo Emerson said about a century ago, âit is not instruction, but provocation, that I can receive from another soul.â Thatâs why the colleges â large public institutions or small faith-based colleges or anything in between â that nurture and respond to the energies of their students are the ones that feel most intellectually alive.
So, what makes a school the right one? Itâs not the prestige of a name or the campus amenities. First and foremost, itâs the teachers. Great teachers help make a college great because they themselves are never done being students. Sure, there are plenty of schools filled with faculty members who think alike, who relish the bubble of fellowship in received opinion. A college can make being weird or radical into adolescent orthodoxy. These places should be avoided. By contrast, there are colleges with great teachers who practice freedom by activating wonder, a capacity for appreciation and a taste for inquiry â and who do so because they themselves seek out these broadening experiences. You can feel their own nonconformity as they try to provoke their students away from the various forms of received opinion.
Finding the right college will often mean finding these kinds of people â classmates and mentors, perpetual students who seek open-ended learning that brings joy and meaning. Thatâs what young people checking out schools should really be looking for: not a place merely to fit in but a place to practice freedom in good company.
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Oprah Winfrey: a Force for Good in Media and Beyond
This essay about Oprah Winfrey examines her multifaceted impact on the media, literature, and philanthropy. It outlines her beginnings with the influential “The Oprah Winfrey Show,” which redefined daytime television by addressing complex societal issues with empathy. The essay also highlights Oprah’s role in the literary world through her book club, which significantly influenced American reading habits by turning selected books into bestsellers. Furthermore, it discusses her contributions to entertainment through her production company, Harpo Productions, and her extensive philanthropic work, particularly the Oprah Winfrey Leadership Academy for Girls in South Africa. Oprah’s personal struggles and triumphs are woven throughout, illustrating how her experiences have fueled her efforts to empower others and effect social change. The essay portrays Oprah as not just a media mogul, but as a committed activist and a beacon of resilience and generosity.
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Oprah Winfreyâs global fame stems not just from her innovative talk show but also from her sincere impact on literature, the media, and charitable giving. Her story of rising from modest beginnings to become a global superstar captures her heart and tenacity and resonates with millions of people around the world.
Starting with television, Oprahâs legacy began with the transformative âThe Oprah Winfrey Show,â which redefined what a talk show could be. Launched in 1986, it remained a dominant force in daytime TV for over two decades, tackling issues others shied away from.
Oprah didnât just host a show; she created a space for deep, meaningful conversations about lifeâs critical issuesâfrom personal struggles to broader societal problemsâmaking her audience feel seen and heard.
Oprahâs magic touch extended into the world of books with Oprahâs Book Club. Her book picks often turned into bestsellers, thanks to her knack for choosing compelling stories that sparked conversations nationwide. This âOprah Effectâ elevated authors from obscurity and reinvigorated the American reading culture.
In entertainment, Oprah continued to leave her mark through Harpo Productions, her own company that produced content often centered around important narratives that need more attention. Her projects, including the movie âSelmaâ and the series âGreenleaf,â highlight her commitment to storytelling that educates and inspires.
Philanthropy is another arena where Oprah shines. Through her personal charities, the Oprah Winfrey Foundation and the Oprah Winfrey Operating Foundation, she has poured millions into programs that empower women, children, and communities. The Oprah Winfrey Leadership Academy for Girls in South Africa stands out as a beacon of her dedication to education and leadership for those who need it most, providing young girls with the tools to change their destinies and the world.
Oprahâs personal story of overcoming adversityâbattling through poverty, abuse, and systemic racismâhas not only shaped her but also taught her the power of resilience and speaking out. Her openness about her challenges connects her with others in a profound way, making her achievements even more impactful.
Oprahâs approach to life and business teaches us the power of taking action and leading with empathy. Her work across different platformsâwhether on screen, through the pages of a book, or in the field of philanthropyâshows that one individual can make a difference. Her ongoing efforts to advocate for justice and equality continue to inspire and push for societal progress.
Looking at Oprah Winfreyâs life and career, we see more than just an entertainment mogul; we see a compassionate, determined individual dedicated to lifting others up. Her influence stretches beyond the flashy glamour of Hollywood, reaching into the lives of those who need it most. As Oprah continues to forge her path, she stands as a living testament to the impact of hard work, kindness, and a relentless commitment to bettering the world.
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Roger Ebertâs Essay on Death and Dying: âGo Gentle Into That Good Nightâ
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Ebertâs prefix âGo gentleâ and Thomasâs âDo not go gentleâ suggest contrary approaches to death, but Ebert isnât as contrarian as his essay seems. Ebert feigns indifference to life, as if his life is as inconsequential as his death. He seems to ask: Why fight for life or defy death? If he was âperfectly contentâ before his birth, heâll be no different after his death. Good fortune seems to be a part of this.
Most people assume that, if born poor, one would want more during life and hold it dearly. Yet the poor man canât fear losing what he doesnât have. The more the rich man appreciates the treasure he has in life, the more he dreads losing it. It isnât the beggar who dreads dying with nothingâa zero balance, so to speakâitâs the billionaire.
The value placed on life decides how one will part with it. Death may be inevitable, but that doesnât mean itâs as desirable as life. Refusing to resignedly accept annihilation is the most articulate argument for more life, not less. Itâs a farewell vote, cast in favor of another baby being born somewhere else, to someone else. Itâs a final act of sharing, even when one is lulled into believing that thereâs nothing left to share. To âgo gentle,â then, is to abjectly agree that if there were a little less of life, it wouldnât matter; it is to meekly admit that were someone else not offered the chance to live, it would be fine.
Ebert claims he doesnât fear death; he claims thereâs ânothing on the other side to fear.â But those who love life deeply always die or greet someone elseâs death with a bit of fear, and a bit of reluctance because they value what they or others are going to be denied.
The Gift of Life
We may live long enough to find some truths, but not long enough to find others. Does that mean these truths donât exist, or merely that theyâve not been discovered yet? That Ebert found some truths late in life suggests that, had he lived longer, he may have discovered even more truths.
Without his saying so, Ebert is admitting that itâs not we who discover truth, but it is truth that, through living and dying, reveals itself to us. As his colleagues admiringly acknowledged, Ebertâs discoveries transformed him from the haughty young man he was, to his gentler, sweeter, older self.
Little Commandments
But for someone who smarts at insistence, Ebert is awfully insistent himself. He says to a woman he has long known: âYou'd better cry at my memorial service.â On faith, he insists itâs neutral: âAll depends on what is believed in.â On happiness, he declares: âTo make others less happy is a crime. To make ourselves unhappy is where all crime starts.â By whose law? He doesnât say.
Contradictions and Uncertainties
The empathy machine.
True empathy, not the easy, performative kind for photo ops, is the defiance of the lazy embrace of only those we agree with. It embraces the personâflaws and allâto understand, not judge. The lives of good people are well-lived, not because they didnât do bad thingsâall too many didâand not because they won or lost, but because they acted. Their âfierce tearsâ and âfrail deedsâ (Thomasâs words) chose, not to curse, but to bless and embrace someone elseâs.
Ebert once wrote that the movies he liked best were about âgood people,â whether they ended up happy or sad, did bad things or good things, or won or lost. Thatâs where Ebert comes into his own and applauds Thomasâs defiance.
Thatâs Ebert, with Chazâs prayerful help, echoing Thomas, âDo not go gentle into that good night. ... Rage, rage against the dying of the light.â If we see life, as Ebert did, as one big opportunity to be kind, and to make ourselves and others happy, the scope for goodness also expands severalfold with each new baby born. Ebert ends up saluting Thomas, whose hope and love of life, has its own excuse to defy death.
Thomas wouldâve been proud. Ebertâs essay here is, after all, more a side path to the same destination than a road to a different place. Both essay and poem ponder death and dying, but their gaze is firmly on life and living.
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Product Leader Yue Zhao
These days, Yue spends her time in Barcelona as a career coach, mentoring Senior and Director-level product managers to lift them to the C-Suite, especially for those from underrepresented backgrounds. She wrote The Uncommon Executive about her work helping such managers break into executive roles, and it brings meaning to her everyday life to be able to help others reach their potential. But Yue was not always a career coach; she got where she is today by leading product at Thumbtack, Meta, and as Chief Product and Technology Officer at Fuzzy Pet Health.
In this interview, Yue shares an example of how she leveraged behavioral design in her work at Thumbtack through the design of an onboarding questionnaire. And she found, perhaps surprisingly, that adding friction to the process in the form of additional questions actually led to higher conversion.
Tell me something I donât know. (Anything!)
The cobblestone designs of the sidewalks in Barcelona are of flowers.
Which fiction book would you recommend to product leaders? Why?
The Boy, the Mole, the Fox and the Horse by Charlie Mackesy. So many important life lessons. It is easy to lose your priorities in life when leading and building products as it is so fast paced, ever-changing, and complex. It's important not to lose sight of some of the perhaps more important things in life like family and friends.
How have you leveraged behavioral design in your work? What was the result?
When I worked at Thumbtack, one of the most critical elements of the customer experience, and the first touch point, was the request form. This is where customers answered a series of questions about their project and the type of service they were looking for (like TV mounting, piano lessons, or interior painting).
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We found that, contrary to popular belief, conversion â the number of people finishing the questionnaire â increased as the form got longer and more detailed (approx +15% from 5 to 12 questions), and still did not decrease when we added more questions (from 12 to 20). This was because the longer form signaled expertise on Thumbtack's side in understanding what was important in finding a great service for the project. The customer may not have thought through all the details required to find the best bedroom painter, for example, so prompting them to think through these aspects (like which areas to paint, type of paint, color, budget, and so on) led them to appreciate the service to a higher degree.
We also found that many users experienced the multiple choice questionnaire as an enjoyable process, particularly for more creative services like finding a wedding florist or interior painter. And finally, users put in a greater investment with the longer questionnaire, leading them to be more likely to continue due to the sunk cost effect.
Whatâs your biggest barrier to getting things done as a product leader?
The caliber of my team.
What gap do you see in typical product strategy that behavioral insights can fill?
Typical product strategies contain "data and research," but few dive deep into the nuances of behavior in a way that truly understands the mind of the user in that moment. We don't dive deep enough into the "why" before we start posing potential solutions. It is starting with behavioral insights that we can more quickly get to a solution that produces the desired user behavior.
How do you see product management evolving over the next 5 years? What are your hopes for the practice?
Creativity and empathy will become much more critical traits for great product leaders. As the project management (and to some extent generic strategy generation) become commoditized by AI, product managers will be increasingly assessed on their ability to refine and tailor strategies and solutions based on core customer needs in a way that resonates.
I've always considered it important for product leaders to also understand the business and how it makes sense. Therefore, I hope future product leaders are increasingly also P&L owners of the business.
What advice would you give product leaders hoping to design for humans?
Visit your humans in their native habitat during different times of the day, and observe carefully. Ask a lot of "why" questions like a three year old, and listen.
Yue Zhao is a career coach for senior managers and directors. She has coached hundreds of aspiring executives and helped them breakthrough and unstick their careers.
Separately, Yue is a venture partner with LifeX Ventures, an $100M early-stage fund investing in Healthtech and Climatech. Prior she was the Chief Product & Technology officer at Fuzzy Pet Health (Series C, Matrix, Greycroft), PM manager at Meta, and first PM at Thumbtack (Series I, Sequoia, Google Ventures).
Yue started her career with McKinsey and Company and dabbled in entrepreneurship with a failed wine startup. She has an MBA from Harvard Business School and Bachelors from University of California Berkeley in Biomedical Engineering.
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The Impact of Professional Scholarship Essay Writing Services on Academic Success
I tâs hard to overestimate the usefulness of writing services for someone who needs a good essay for a scholarship application. At the same time, there are some concerns about the probable negative impact of writing services on academic success. Letâs consider both the potential negative and positive impact of a scholarship essay writing service to decide whatâs stronger.
One of the most widespread concerns about the impact of essay writing services is the ethical side of use. Evidently, it is improper if people will provide someoneâs work as their own. Even though such concern cannot be called groundless, itâs a matter of choice. Writing service is a tool, and itâs only the customer's choice how to use it. A person can buy a knife to cut fruits and vegetables or to take someone's life. This is not about the tool but about the ethics and decisions of the particular person who uses the tool.
Another concern is related to the dependency. When people overuse writing services and outsource their own tasks to other experts, it rather decreases their own skills that ought to be developed with the assignments. Itâs once again about human conscience and ethics. In this context, it can be useful to compare writing services with coffee. Sometimes, this drink can be very useful to help you wake up or not fall asleep for longer. However, with excessive use, it can be harmful to health and be addictive. And, if you are regularly using coffee to wake yourself up or to stay awake, you probably have to reconsider your time management.
One more concern is about the money. Writing services obviously donât provide their help for free. Hence, the frequent use of it can cause a financial burden for people who use such services. Thinking this way, one can assume that any type of purchase can cause a financial burden. Most writing services insist on price transparency and the absence of any hidden additional increase in the price. One can see the price before placing an order and deciding whether this money will harm the budget.
As you can see, although the concerns about writing services arenât baseless, theyâre more about the weakness of human nature than about the negative impact of writing services themselves. People who can act unethically will find their way with or without writing services. And if a person has trouble managing money it will be evident from the different aspects of life, not only the use of writing services. You can be careful using writing services, but not more careful than with anything else in life.
Except for the concerns considered above, writing services can also positively impact academic success when used properly. A person who needs to write a scholarship essay often faces the problem of procrastination and blank page syndrome. In such a case, help from a writing service can be incredibly useful to overcome the problems. A person can use the paper from the writing service as an example to follow or, in contrast, decide that everything must be written differently. Most importantly, one will start working on the scholarship essay instead of waiting for inspiration or being lost in anxiety.
- The positive impact on mental health comes from the previous advantage. Applying for the scholarship is a stressful process. A person is concerned about all the papers that must be gathered and forms to be filled out in the proper way, about the future if the scholarship will be obtained, and about the development of the events if not. Writing services that provide personalized examples of scholarship essays can help reduce stress and anxiety and, hence, have at least a small positive impact on mental health.
- Expert guidance can be crucial for a person who needs a scholarship. Yes, you can find free examples of scholarship essays on the web, but you might not be sure which is most suitable for your particular case. Writing services have professionals who often write scholarship essays and know their specifics. In addition, a personalized example is the most useful one to understand what and how you can write to succeed.
- Time management is the last but not the least point in this list. Writing services have short deadlines of just a few hours, which allows a person to get a ready example on the same day it was ordered. This saves time that a person might spend reading and understanding the nuances of the scholarship essay. Instead of that, one can take this time for other no less essential papers or activities related to getting a scholarship.
Final words
As one can see, scholarship essay writing services can potentially negatively and positively impact academic success. Such services can be a powerful tool to save time, avoid stress, and get a well-written personalized example of a scholarship essay. However, as well as in the case of any tool, it must be used wisely and ethically.
Why âgood enoughâ can be better for your decisions and mental health
The constant pursuit of âperfectâ choices can make you less happy and more anxious.
Iâm driving my 3-year-old daughter, Penny, to preschool. She asks me a question, but Iâm distracted. Iâm pondering whether I should try a new drink at Starbucks after I drop her off, or stick with my go-to soy latte. Then, I think about the conversation my husband and I had the night before about whether to send our kids to private or public school.
âCan we have Mommy-Penny time when you pick me up from school?â she repeats, a reference to the special time we sometimes spend together without her little sister. If I hadnât been so preoccupied, I could have heard her sweet request the first time around.
Each day, we are inundated with choices. Some are small â like our morning coffee order â while others are big, such as where to send our children to school. With an abundance of options and information at our fingertips today, it would make sense that the best decisions come from thorough, detailed analysis, right?
Decadesâ worth of psychological research suggests the opposite. In fact, people who make âgood enoughâ decisions, instead of âperfectâ ones, are often happier.
âThe human mind just doesnât have enough capacity toâ make a perfect decision in every case. â Valerie Reyna, a professor and co-director of the Center for Behavioral Economics and Decision Research at Cornell University
It has been estimated that American adults make thousands of choices a day. In a world of near-endless options and information, itâs clear that humans donât have the time or cognitive resources to make a perfect decision in every case.
âThe human mind just doesnât have enough capacity to do that,â says Valerie Reyna, a professor and co-director of the Center for Behavioral Economics and Decision Research at Cornell University.
When it comes to making decisions, people often take one of two approaches: maximizing, or âsatisficing,â a term coined by political scientist Herbert Simon that combines âsatisfyâ and âsuffice.â
âMaximizers want to make the best decision,â says Ayelet Fishbach, a professor of behavioral science and marketing at the University of Chicago Booth School of Business. âSatisficers want to make the âgood enoughâ decision.â
What does âgood enoughâ look like?
âGood enoughâ decisions arenât haphazard, but they strike a key balance. Bad, poorly thought-out decisions are often rushed or emotionally driven. âMaximizedâ decisions, at the other extreme, are often time-consuming and draining, to the point where they lead to rumination or regret.
Good enough decisions are thought-out. But once something clearly meets your needs, you decide thatâs good enough and call it a day.
A maximizer, for example, might spend two hours looking for the perfect pair of headphones online. Theyâll meticulously scan the reviews and compare features. A satisficer simply clicks âbuyâ once theyâve found a pair that meets their needs.
âIn a world with essentially unlimited options, the satisficer can pull the trigger,â says Barry Schwartz, author of âThe Paradox of Choice: Why More Is Less.â âThe maximizer canât pull the trigger until every option has been examined.â
Maximizers tend to be less satisfied with their lives, less optimistic and more depressed than satisficers, according to Schwartzâs research. Maximizers also take longer to recover from bad decisions, they ruminate more, they savor positive events less, they donât cope as well with negative events, and theyâre more prone to regret.
When we choose from a limited set of options, say three pairs of socks, we can feel like we did the best we could, Schwartz says. But when the option set becomes seemingly unlimited (a quick Amazon search for socks produces 80,000 results), itâs harder, especially when there are options you didnât examine, he says. This is why maximizers, who are so focused on finding the best option, often feel more regret than satisficers.
Maximizers may also experience âanalysis paralysis,â says Thea Gallagher, a clinical psychologist and associate professor at NYU Langone Health.
For example, someone might spend hours looking at flights, then not buy a ticket because they think a better option might show up the next day. âThen, youâre not even doing the thing you need to do, which ends up causing more stress and anxiety,â Gallagher says.
Thereâs a point at which the number of choices available to us becomes detrimental instead of beneficial, Schwartz says.
In one study , Stanford University researchers gave people either six or 24 jam samples to pick from at a high-end grocery store. Those shown 24 samples made a purchase only 3 percent of the time. Those given six options made a purchase nearly 30 percent of the time.
A study âshowed that when you give people too many choices, it doesnât liberate them, it paralyzes them.â â Barry Schwartz, author of âThe Paradox of Choice: Why More Is Less.â
The study âshowed that when you give people too many choices, it doesnât liberate them,â says Schwartz, who is a visiting professor at the University of California at Berkeley. âIt paralyzes them.â
5 tips for better decision-making
Some decisions â like which school to send our children to â are worth our time and deliberation. But others are not. Hereâs some guidance on how to make decisions more easily.
Go all in. If you think a decision is reversible, you wonât do the work required to feel content with it, Schwartz says.
- Letâs say you bought a dress you canât return. Youâll likely make yourself find things to like about it. âI donât think this is something people do consciously or deliberately, [but] when thereâs no going back, you make the best of what you have,â Schwartz says. âWhen there is going back, you go back.â
Find your niche. You donât need to be a satisficer for every decision. Maximizing occasionally is okay, so long as itâs something youâre passionate about.
- âIf there are certain things you really love to get elbow-deep in, thatâs fine,â Schwartz says. âJust donât do that with everything, because thatâs a recipe for paralysis and misery.â
Automate parts of your day. Most little decisions are relatively insignificant, yet they take up mental energy that could be spent on more worthwhile pursuits.
- Reduce your total number of daily decisions. Reyna recommends making what she called âpolicy decisions for yourself.â Instead of debating whether to exercise each morning, for instance, decide to always run at 6:30 a.m. on weekdays.
Set limits. Those who lean toward maximizing can benefit from setting constraints on their decision-making, Gallagher says.
- For example, give yourself only 15 minutes to search for a new pair of headphones online. Or, find a resource you trust and always research products there.
Donât get lost in the weeds. Research has shown that, in addition to quantity of information analyzed, the quality of your insights is crucial.
- Reyna and her colleagues developed â fuzzy-trace theory ,â which found that people who are able to get the gist, or essence, of information often make better decisions than those who spend a lot of time and energy analyzing surface details. âWhat weâve shown is that a lot of very healthy decisions are made using the gist over the details,â Reyna says. â
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Here are 10 sentences I try to use every single day to keep my relationships thriving and put what I've learned about happiness into practice. 1. 'How are you feeling, really?'. Even in our ...
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A thesis statement summarizes the central points of your essay. It is a signpost telling the reader what the essay will argue and why. The best thesis statements are: Concise: A good thesis statement is short and sweetâdon't use more words than necessary. State your point clearly and directly in one or two sentences.
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Why 'good enough' can be better for your decisions and mental health. The constant pursuit of 'perfect' choices can make you less happy and more anxious. By Jamie Friedlander Serrano. May ...
Step 1: Return to your thesis. To begin your conclusion, signal that the essay is coming to an end by returning to your overall argument. Don't just repeat your thesis statementâinstead, try to rephrase your argument in a way that shows how it has been developed since the introduction.. Example: Returning to the thesis Braille paved the way for dramatic cultural changes in the way blind ...