impressive initiative.
The beauty of the English language is that there’s an endless number of ways to say something and still be grammatically correct as long as you know what makes a proper sentence. If you don’t, review §4.3.1 and §4.3.2 till you can spot the main subject noun and verb in any sentence, as well as tell if they’re missing. For more on fragments, see the following resources:
For exercises in spotting and fixing comma splices, run-ons, and fragments, see the digital activities at the bottom of the Guide to Grammar and Writing pages linked above (Purdue OWL, n.d.), as well as Exercise: Run-ons, Comma Splices, and Fused Sentences (Purdue OWL, n.d.).
Let’s focus on some of the most common grammar errors in college and professional writing:
Perhaps the most common grammatical error is subject-verb disagreement, which is when you pair a singular subject noun with a plural verb (usually ending without an s) instead of a singular one (usually ending with an s) or vice versa. Spotting such disagreements of number requires being able to identify the subject noun and main verb of every sentence and hence knowledge of sentence structure. The search for the main subject noun and verb is complicated by the fact that many other nouns and verbs in various phrase types can crowd into a sentence. The following subject-verb agreement (abbreviated “Subj-v Agr.”) rules help you know what to look for.
Click on the rules below to see further explanations, examples, advice on what to look for when proofreading, and demonstrations of how to correct common subject-verb disagreement errors associated with each one.
Singular subjects take singular verbs.
The first of many cuts is going to be the deepest.
The indefinite pronouns each, either, and neither , and those ending with -body or -one take a singular verb.
If each of you chooses wisely, someone is going to win the prize, but everybody wins because neither really loses .
Collective nouns and some irregular nouns with plural endings are singular and take a singular verb.
The band is n’t going on stage until the news about the stage lighting is more positive.
Plural noun, compound noun, and plural indefinite pronoun subjects take plural verbs.
The rights of the majority usually trump those of minority groups, except when money and politics conspire , and both usually do .
Compound subjects joined by or or nor take verbs that agree in number with the nouns closest to them.
Neither your lawyers nor the justice system is going to be able to adequately punish this type of crime.
The verb in clauses beginning with there or here agrees with the subject noun following the verb.
There are two types of people in the world, and here comes one of them now.
Subj-v agr. rule 1.1: singular subjects take singular verbs..
When the subject of the sentence—the doer of the action—is a singular subject (i.e., one doer), the verb (the action it performs) is always singular. Watch out, though: this rule holds even if phrases modifying the subject or intervening parenthetical elements are plural. You just have to be able to tell that those phrases and parenthetical elements aren’t the main subject and therefore don’t count when determining the number of the verb.
Our investment is paying off nicely.
Why it’s correct: The singular subject “investment” takes the singular verb “is,” which is the third-person singular form of the verb to be .
The source of all our network errors disappears whenever you do a system restart.
Why it’s correct: The singular subject “source” takes the singular main verb “disappears”; the plural noun “errors” immediately before the verb is just the last word in a prepositional phrase (“of . . .”) modifying the subject.
Stalling for time to think of better responses does n’t work in a job interview.
Why it’s correct: The singular subject “stalling,” a gerund (action noun), takes the singular main verb “does”; the plural noun “responses” immediately before the verb is just the last word in a prepositional phrase (“of . . .”) embedded in an infinitive phrase (“to think . . .”) embedded in another prepositional phrase (“for . . .”).
The singer-songwriter , along with new additions to her five-piece backup band, arrives at the press conference at 1:30 p.m.
Why it’s correct: Despite the parenthetical addition of other actors, the grammatical subject (“singer-songwriter”) is still singular and takes a singular verb.
Following this rule helps the reader connect the doer of the action with the main action itself, especially when a variety of phrases, including nouns of different number, intervene between the subject noun and main verb.
Look for subject nouns (the main doers of the action) and the main verbs that the subject noun takes, then ensure that both are singular. Look out especially for verbs that are wrongly plural in form because the nouns immediately preceding them are plural despite the fact that they are only part of phrases modifying the main subject noun.
The best vodka in the opinion of all the experts at international competitions are surprisingly the bottom-shelf Alberta Pure.
The best vodka in the opinion of all the experts at international competitions is surprisingly the bottom-shelf Alberta Pure.
The lucky winner , as well as three of their best friends, are going on an all-expenses-paid trip to beautiful Cornwall, Ontario!
The lucky winner , as well as three of their best friends, is going on an all-expenses-paid trip to beautiful Cornwall, Ontario!
In the first incorrect example sentence above, the proximity of the plural nouns “experts” and “competitions” to the main verb (form of to be ) probably made the writer think that the verb had to be plural, too. The true subject noun of the sentence, however, is “vodka,” which is singular and therefore takes the singular verb “is” no matter what comes between them. In the second incorrect sentence, the grammatical subject is the singular “winner,” so the main verb should be the singular “is,” not the plural “are.” A parenthetical interjection between the subject and the verb, even if it appears to pluralize the subject with “as well as,” “along with,” “plus,” or the like, technically doesn’t make a compound subject (see Subj-v Agr. Rule 2 below for more on compounds).
When the subject noun of the sentence is the indefinite pronoun either, neither, each, anybody, everybody, nobody, somebody, anyone, everyone, someone, no one , or none (see Table 4.4.2a above on pronouns), it is singular and takes a singular verb.
Each has enough personal finance know-how to handle her own taxes.
Why it’s correct: The subject pronoun “Each” can be thought of as the singular “Each one” and therefore takes a singular verb. In this case the verb is “has” rather than the plural “have” that would be appropriate if the subject were “All of them.”
Either is fine.
Why it’s correct: The subject pronoun “Either” can be thought of as the singular “Either one,” despite implying a pair of options, and therefore takes a singular verb—in this case “is.”
“Perhaps none is more vulnerable than James, a soft-spoken 19-year-old who is quick to flash a smile that would melt ice” (Chianello, 2014, ¶24) .
Why it’s correct: The subject pronoun “none” in this case can be thought of as the singular “no one” because the topic of the sentence concerns a single person. The pronoun therefore takes a singular verb—in this case “is” rather than the plural “are.”
Exception: None can sometimes be a plural indefinite pronoun depending on what comes later in the sentence.
“ None are more hopelessly enslaved than those who falsely believe they are free” (Goethe, 1809, p. 397) .
Why it’s correct: The subject pronoun “none” can be thought of as “no people,” consistent in number with the later pronoun “those,” and thus a plural pronoun that takes a plural verb—in this case “are,” not “is.”
Following this rule helps the reader see that the “one” or “body” suffix in each of these indefinite pronouns is singular, even if the word applies to many people, and therefore takes a singular verb form.
Look for any indefinite pronouns ending with -one or -body taking a plural main verb and change the verb to the singular form.
Everybody here share our opinion on quantitative easing.
The fix: Everybody here shares our opinion on quantitative easing.
The fix: All here share our opinion on quantitative easing.
Each of you send enough carbon into the atmosphere to poison a river.
The fix: Each of you sends enough carbon into the atmosphere to poison a river.
The fix: All of you send enough carbon into the atmosphere to poison a river.
Here, the “every” part of the word everybody in the first incorrect sentence and the fact that the second addresses a group suggests to the confused writer that a plurality of actors is at play, thus requiring the plural verbs “share” and “send.” Wrong! The “body” part of the word is the operative one; being singular, it takes a singular verb—“shares” in this case—and “Each” is short for “Each one.” Another fix in each case is to make the subject the plural “All” and keep the verbs plural.
Collective nouns such as “group” are grammatically singular and thus take a singular verb despite meaning several people or things. The following are common collective nouns:
army audience band board bundle cabinet class committee company corporation council crew | department faculty family firm gang group jury majority membership minority navy pack | party plethora public office school senate society task force team tribe troupe |
The same is true of any company name that ends in s or has a compound name (e.g., Food Basics, Long & McQuade), as well as any compound of inanimate objects treated as a singular entity (e.g., meat and potatoes is considered one dish; see Subj-v Agr. Rule 2 below for more on compounds). Likewise, some special-case words that look like plurals because they end with s instead take singular pronouns and verbs, especially names for games and disciplines or areas of study, as well as dollar amounts, distances, and amounts of time:
acoustics billiards cards civics crossroads darts # dollars | dominoes economics ethics gymnastics # hours # meters linguistics | mathematics measles mumps news physics rabies shambles |
Note that most of these words will be plural if used other than meaning disciplines, fields of study, games, or number of units. For instance, when you’re playing darts, you would use the plural verb in “Three darts remain ” to refer to three individual darts in your hand but use a singular verb when saying “Darts is a way of life” because you’re now using “darts” in the sense of the game rather than the object.
The committee demands action on the latest media blunder.
Why it’s correct: The collective noun “committee” is singular, despite being comprised of several people, and therefore takes the singular verb “demands,” not the plural “demand.”
A demolition crew of three sledgehammer-wielding heavies is leveling the house as we speak.
Why it’s correct: The collective noun “crew” is singular despite being followed by a prepositional phrase detailing how many people are in the crew. Despite also the plural noun “heavies” preceding the main verb, the singular “is” is the correct verb rather than the plural “are.”
Food Basics has a deal on for ice cream right now, and Dolce & Gabbana has some fresh new styles coming this season.
Why it’s correct: Though the subject nouns seem plural because one ends with s and the other compounds two names, being a single corporate entity in each case makes them singular and take the singular verb “has” rather than the plural “have.”
Oh look, green eggs and ham is on the menu.
Why it’s correct: Though the subject noun seems plural because it is a compound of a plural and singular noun, it is considered one singular dish and therefore takes the singular verb “is” rather than the plural “are.”
The news is so depressing today.
Why it’s correct: Though the subject noun seems plural because it ends with s , “news” is a singular noun taking the singular verb “is,” not the plural “are.”
Ethics isn’t an optional field of study for business professionals.
Why it’s correct: Though the subject noun seems plural because it ends with s and the singular “ethic” is also a legitimate word, it acts in this case as a singular entity because it is a field of study and therefore takes the singular verb “is.”
Five dollars donated to the right charities is all that’s needed to save a life.
Why it’s correct: Though the subject noun seems plural because it contains more than one dollar, it acts as a singular entity and thus takes the singular verb “is” regardless of the noun “charities” that comes before it in a prepositional phrase.
Ten kilometers is too far to walk because those ten kilometers are going to make us late.
Why it’s correct: The first “Ten kilometers” is a grammatically singular subject because the distance as a whole is meant. The second instance refers to each individual kilometer together with the others, however, so it is grammatically plural, taking the plural pronoun “those” and verb “are.”
Following this rule helps the reader connect the singular grammatical subject performing a single action in concert as one entity with the main verb, especially when phrases of different number come between them.
Look for count nouns, as well as special-case nouns that look plural but are actually singular, such as games and areas of study, like those identified above. Ensure that the main verb following them is singular rather than plural.
A pack of lies averaging around twenty per day are winning over a confused and angry swath of the electorate.
The fix: A pack of lies averaging around twenty per day is winning over a confused and angry swath of the electorate.
The acoustics in here are so bad that it makes me want to study acoustics , which are all about how sounds behave in certain environments.
The fix: The acoustics in here are so bad that it makes me want to study acoustics , which is all about how sounds behave in certain environments.
In the first incorrect sentence above, the collective noun “pack” is grammatically singular and must therefore take the singular verb “is,” not the plural verb “are”, despite it being comprised of a plurality of things (“lies”) identified in the prepositional phrase following it. In the second incorrect sentence, we see two different types of the word “acoustics.” One type means “sound quality,” acts as a plural grammatical subject, and therefore takes the plural verb “are.” The other, meaning the study of how sounds interact with the environment, takes the singular verb “is,” not the plural verb “are.”
When the subject of the sentence is plural or contains two or more nouns or pronouns joined by and to make a compound subject, the verb describing the action they perform together is always plural regardless of whether the nouns are singular or plural. The verb is plural even if the compounded subject noun closest to the verb is singular. Other word types that take plural pronouns and verbs include:
Self-driving cars are going to revolutionize more than just the auto industry.
Why it’s correct: The plural subject noun “cars” takes the plural main verb “are.”
Goodness, we have our work cut out for us.
Why it’s correct: The plural subject pronoun “we” takes the plural main verb “have”
All the network systems and the mainframe we’ve been updating are going to have to be liquidated now.
Why it’s correct: The compound subject with the plural noun “systems” and singular noun “mainframe” takes the plural main verb “are.” All the other verbs are part of embedded phrases that don’t affect the verb number.
A few of them say they can’t go, but several are still going.
Why it’s correct: The plural indefinite pronouns “few” and “several” take the plural verbs “say” and “are,” respectively.
These pants do n’t fit, these scissors do n’t cut, and these shears are kaput.
Why it’s correct: Though each of these subject nouns sells as one item, they are considered pairs grammatically and therefore take plural verbs such as “don’t” instead of the singular “doesn’t.”
The Tragically Hip are playing their final concert in Kingston, where they played their first show 32 years earlier.
Why it’s correct: As a five-piece band of musicians, the Tragically Hip are a grammatically plural noun despite having a singular-sounding name and therefore take the plural verb “are.”
Following this rule helps the reader connect the doer of the action with the main action itself, especially when a variety of phrases, including nouns of different numbers, intervene between the subject noun and main verb.
Look for subject nouns (the main doers of the action) and the main verbs that the subject noun takes, then ensure that both are plural. Look out especially for compound subjects with a singular noun close to the verb tricking you into making the main verb singular.
Most major auto manufacturers and, of course, Tesla is leading the way toward self-driving cars via a switch to all-electric drivetrains.
The fix: Most major auto manufacturers and , of course, Tesla are leading the way toward self-driving cars via a switch to all-electric drivetrains .
I can respect their musicianship, but Rush just annoys me, or maybe it’s just Geddy Lee’s voice.
The fix: I can respect their musicianship, but Rush just annoy me, or maybe it’s just Geddy Lee’s voice.
In the first incorrect example above, the proximity of the singular noun “Tesla” to the main verb probably made the confused writer think that the verb had to be the singular “is,” too. The subject is in fact a compound, however: “manufacturers and . . . Tesla.” Changing the main verb to a plural form easily fixes the subject-verb disagreement of number.
In the second incorrect example, the band Rush seems like it should be a singular noun and take the singular verb “annoys” because the word rush is singular; as a trio of musicians, however, the band is grammatically plural and takes the plural verb “annoy.” Notice, when we use the noun “band” in front of “Rush” so that “band” is grammatically the subject noun, however, we use a singular verb following Subj-v Agr. Rule 1.3 above.
When the subject of the sentence is a compound joined by the coordinating conjunction or or nor , the number (singular or plural) of the verb is determined by the subject noun that comes immediately before it.
Either the players or the coach is going to take the fall for the loss.
Why it’s correct: Though this is a compound subject comprised of the plural “players” and singular “coach,” the main verb is the singular “is” because “or” joins the two subject nouns and the one closest to the verb, “coach,” is singular.
When neither the project lead nor dozens of engineers dare to doubt the safety of the launch, you have all the makings of a Challenger-like disaster.
Why it’s correct: The plural subject pronoun “dozens,” as the second part of the compound subject including the singular “lead,” takes the plural main verb “dare” because it is closer.
Following this rule helps the reader see the two compounded subject nouns as separate actors performing the verb action independently of one another rather than together.
Look for plural verbs that disagree in number with singular subject nouns closest to them when the subject nouns are joined by or or nor .
A rock or a hard place are your only choice in this situation.
The fix: A rock or a hard place is your only choice in this situation.
In the incorrect example above, the compounding of the two singular nouns likely made the confused writer think that the verb should be plural as it is when and compounds subject nouns. When or or nor compounds subjects, however, the verb must agree with whatever subject noun comes immediately before it.
When a sentence or clause begins with the pronoun there or here , the subject noun follows the verb and therefore determines whether the verb should be singular or plural. In other words, what comes before the verb usually determines whether the verb is singular or plural, but in this case, what comes after the verb does that. In such expletive constructions, as they’re called, here or there are not actually subjects.
There appears to be a mighty storm approaching on the horizon.
Why it’s correct: The singular subject noun “storm” following the verb takes the singular verb “appears.”
Here is a pencil and here are some forms you need to fill out.
Why it’s correct: The singular subject noun “pencil” following the main verb takes the singular verb “is” in the first clause. The plural subject noun “forms” in the second clause takes the plural verb “are.”
There happen to be six conditions on which the growth of our business depends.
Why it’s correct: The plural subject noun “conditions” following the verb takes the plural verb “happen” rather than the singular “happens.”
There is nothing to the allegations of wrongdoing.
Why it’s correct: The singular subject noun “nothing” following the verb takes the singular verb “is” regardless of the plural noun “allegations” in the prepositional phrase modifying the subject noun.
There are too many applications to sort through in the given timeframe.
Why it’s correct: The plural subject noun “applications” following the verb takes the plural verb “are.”
In sentences beginning with the pronoun there , following this rule cues the reader toward the number of the subject noun before it appears.
Look for sentences or clauses beginning with there and ensure that the verb agrees with the noun that follows it. The verb isn’t necessarily singular just because there comes before the verb (where the subject is usually located) and seems like a singular pronoun.
I can’t believe there just happens to be two tickets to the show you wanted to see in my pocket here.
The fix: I can’t believe there just happen to be two tickets to the show you wanted to see in my pocket here.
Here is a bar graph and pie chart you can extrapolate results from.
The fix: Here are a bar graph and pie chart you can extrapolate results from.
In the first incorrect sentence above, the pronoun “there” is not the subject noun of the relative clause following “that”; the plural noun “tickets” is the subject and therefore takes the plural verb “happen” rather than the singular “happens.” In the second incorrect sentence, the grammatical subject is the compound noun “bar graph and pie chart” following “Here,” so the main verb must be the plural “are,” not the singular “is.”
For more on subject-verb agreement and how to correct disagreement, see the following resources:
For more on pronoun-antecedent disagreements of number (e.g., Everybody has an opinion on this, but they are all wrong ), ambiguous pronouns (e.g., The plane crashed in the field, but somehow it ended up unscathed—was the plane or field left unscathed? ), and pronoun case errors (e.g., Rob and me are going to the bank—would you say “me is going to the bank”? ), see the following resource:
For more on parallelism, see the following resource:
For more on dangling modifiers, see the following resource:
2. Take any writing assignment you’ve previously submitted for another course, ideally one that you did some time ago, perhaps even in high school. Scan for the sentence and grammar errors covered in this section now that you know what to look for. How often do such errors appear? Correct them following the suggestions given above.
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Section 5.3 learning objectives.
2. Plan, write, revise, and edit short documents and messages that are organized, complete, and tailored to specific audiences.
As the little marks added between words, punctuation is like a system of traffic signs: it guides the reader toward the intended meaning of the words just as road signs guide drivers to their destination. They tell the reader when to go, when to pause, when to stop, when to go again, when to pay close attention, and when to turn (Truss, 2003, p. 7) . They’re also crucial for avoiding accidents. A paragraph without punctuation—no periods, commas, apostrophes, etc.—quickly spins out into utter nonsense and kills the reader’s understanding of the writer’s meaning.
Punctuation that’s merely missing or unnecessary here and there can confuse a reader and even lead to expensive lawsuits if such errors plague contentious documents like contracts. To anyone who knows how to use them, seeing punctuation mistakes in someone else’s writing makes that other person look sloppy and amateurish. Punctuation errors by adult native English speakers look especially bad because they reflect poorly on their education and attention to detail, especially if they’re habitual mistakes. The critical reader looks down on anyone who hasn’t figured out how to use their own language in their 20+ years of immersion in it. Not knowing the difference between a colon and semicolon, for instance, is like not knowing the difference between a cucumber and a zucchini; sure they look alike from a distance, but they’re completely different species and serve different culinary functions. If you don’t know these differences by the time you’re an adult, however, it doesn’t take much to learn.
In this section, we focus on how to spot and correct common punctuation errors, starting with commas because most problems with people’s writing in general are related to missing and misused commas. The goal is to help you avoid making mistakes that can potentially embarrass you in the eyes of people who should be taking you seriously.
Complete List of Punctuation Covered in This Chapter Section
Most punctuation problems are comma-related because of the important role commas play in providing readers with guidance on how a sentence is organized and is to be read to understand the writer’s intended meaning. As we saw in §4.3.2, commas signal to the reader where one clause ends and another begins in compound and complex sentences, but they serve several other roles as well. We use commas in four general ways, each with several variations and special cases. To these we can add rules about where not to add commas, since many writers confuse their readers by putting commas where they shouldn’t go. Most style guides advocate for using as few commas as possible, though you certainly must use them wherever needed to avoid ambiguities that lead readers astray. Closely follow the sixteen rules below to guide your reader toward your intended meaning and avoid confusing them with comma misplacement.
Click on the rules below to see further explanations, examples, advice on what to look for when proofreading, and demonstrations of how to correct common comma errors associated with each one.
Comma Rule 1.1 | the regulators came to inspect the installation by the end of the day. |
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Comma Rule 1.2 | (semicolon rather than a comma after “safety”) |
Comma Rule 2.1 | we can’t secure investor funding and launch the site by April, the clients will likely go elsewhere. |
Comma Rule 2.2 | they haven’t seen us in a while. (no comma before “because”) |
Comma Rule 3.1 | includes my best work, on ArtStation. |
Comma Rule 3.2 | the checkout,” |
Comma Rule 3.3 | . |
Comma Rule 3.4 | in Ottawa, by Tuesday, October 9, for your chance to win the $5,000,000 prize. |
Comma Rule 3.5 | “Yes, this is strictly off the record.” |
Comma Rule 3.6 | is now completely lost. (no comma before “that” and after “return”) |
Comma Rule 3.7 | for the difficult and dangerous job that Kyle performed for his clientele the knowledge that they were safe. (no comma before “was”) |
Comma Rule 4.1 | and in this line of work. |
Comma Rule 4.2 | autumn morning. |
Comma Rule 4.3 | plan. (no comma after “ambitious”) |
Comma Rule 4.4 | (no comma between the non-coordinate adjectives throughout) |
Comma Rule 4.5 | Edison invented patented a complete circuit of electricity distribution systems consumption devices. (no commas before any “and” here) |
Put a comma before the coordinating conjunction that joins two independent clauses in a compound sentence. A compound sentence contains two or more clauses that can stand on their own as sentences (see Table 4.3.2b for more on compound sentences) with a different subject in each clause.
We were having the time of our lives , and our lucky streak was far from over.
Why it’s correct: A comma precedes the coordinating conjunction “and” joining the independent clause beginning with the subject “We” and another beginning with the subject “our lucky streak.”
The first round of layoffs was welcomed by all , but the second devastated morale.
Why it’s correct: A comma precedes the coordinating conjunction “but” joining the independent clause beginning with the subject “The first round” and another beginning with the subject “the second.”
The management blamed external factors , yet none of the company’s blunders would have happened under good leadership.
Why it’s correct: A comma precedes the coordinating conjunction “yet” joining the independent clause beginning with the subject “The management” and another beginning with the subject “none.”
You can take advantage of this golden opportunity , or a thousand other investors will take advantage of it instead as soon as they know about it.
Why it’s correct: A comma precedes the coordinating conjunction “or” joining the independent clause beginning with the subject “You” and another beginning with the subject “a thousand.”
He didn’t see the necessity of lean principles , nor would they have made sense in a business model based on inefficiency.
Why it’s correct: A comma precedes the coordinating conjunction “nor” joining the independent clause beginning with the subject “He” and another beginning with the subject “they.”
Market forces left them behind , for the law of supply and demand isn’t necessarily a force for social justice.
Why it’s correct: A comma precedes the coordinating conjunction “for” joining the independent clause beginning with the subject “Market forces” and another beginning with the subject “the law.”
The competition started to heat up , so we did everything we could to protect our assets.
Why it’s correct: A comma precedes the coordinating conjunction “so” joining the independent clause beginning with the subject “The competition” and another beginning with the subject “we.”
Exception: If the two independent clauses are short (five words or fewer), the comma may be unnecessary.
You bring the wine and we’ll make dinner.
Why it’s correct: A comma is unnecessary before the coordinating conjunction “and” joining the two short, four-word independent clauses beginning with the subjects “You” and “we.”
The comma tells the reader to pause a little after one independent clause ends and before the coordinating conjunction signals that another (with a new subject) is joining it to make a compound sentence. In each of the example sentences above, the independent clause on either side of the comma-conjunction combination could stand on its own as a sentence. In the first example above, for instance, we could replace the comma and conjunction with a period, then capitalize the o in “our,” and both would be grammatically correct sentences. We combine them with a comma and the conjunction and , however, to clarify the relationship between the two ideas. The comma signals that these are coordinated clauses rather than noun or verb phrases.
If the subject were the same in both clauses, however, both the comma and subject of the second clause would be unnecessary. In that case, the sentence would just be a one-subject clause with a compound predicate—that is, two coordinated verbs (see Comma Rule 4.4 below). Consider the following examples:
We were having the time of our lives and would continue to enjoy that lucky streak.
Why it’s correct: The subject “we” is the same in the independent clauses “We were having the time of our lives” and “we would continue to enjoy that lucky streak,” so the comma and second “we” are omitted to make a compound predicate joining the verbs “were having” and “would continue” with the coordinating conjunction “and.”
They won the battle but lost the war.
Why it’s correct: The subject “They” is the same in the independent clauses “They won the battle” and “they lost the war,” so the comma and second “they” are omitted to make a compound predicate joining the verbs “won” and “lost” with the coordinating conjunction “but.”
Look for run-on sentences (see §5.2.1.2 above), which are sentences that omit a comma before the coordinating conjunction joining two independent clauses. Keep an eye out for the seven coordinating conjunctions for , and , nor , but , or , yet , and so (see Table 4.3.2a and use the mnemonic acronym fanboys to remember them). Simply add a comma before the conjunction if the independent clause on either side of the conjunction could stand on its own as a sentence because it has a subject and predicate (see §4.3.1 for more on sentence structure).
We were losing money with each acquisition but our long-term plan was total market dominance.
We were losing money with each acquisition but , our long-term plan was total market dominance.
We were losing money with each acquisition , but our long-term plan was total market dominance.
In the example above, the coordinating conjunction “but” joins the two independent clauses beginning with the subjects “We” and “Our long-term plan.” Omitting the comma in the first example makes the sentence a run-on. Misplacing the comma after the conjunction in the second miscues the reader to pause after, rather than before, the conjunction. The easy fix is just to add the comma or move it so it goes before the conjunction.
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Don’t put a comma between two independent clauses if it’s not followed by a coordinating conjunction because this is a comma splice sentence error (see §5.2.1.1 above). We have two distinct ways of forming a compound sentence (see §4.3.2) and a comma splice confuses the two. One way of making a compound sentence is to join independent clauses by placing a comma and one of the seven “fanboys” coordinating conjunctions between them (see Table 4.3.2a for the coordinating conjunctions). Simply omitting the coordinating conjunction after the comma makes a comma splice. The other way of making a compound sentence is to end the first clause with a semicolon when it doesn’t make sense to use any of the coordinating conjunctions to establish a certain relationship between the clauses (see Table §4.3.2b on sentence varieties for more on compound sentences and Semicolon Rule 1 below). Using a comma instead of a semicolon in such compound sentences makes a comma splice.
Look for commas separating two independent clauses (clauses that can stand on their own as sentences because they each have a subject and predicate) without any of the seven coordinating conjunctions ( f or, a nd, n or, b ut, o r, y et, or s o ) following the comma.
The first proposal was from the Davidson group, the second came from a company we hadn’t seen before.
The first proposal was from the Davidson group; the second came from a company we hadn’t seen before.
The first proposal was from the Davidson group; but the second came from a company we hadn’t seen before.
Though the first proposal was from the Davidson group, the second came from a company we hadn’t seen before.
In the incorrect example above, the comma separates two independent clauses that can stand on their own as sentences if you replaced the comma with a period and capitalized the t in “the second.” You have three options for fixing the comma splice corresponding to the three examples above:
Put a comma before the main clause (a.k.a. independent clause) when it is preceded by an introductory word, phrase (e.g., a prepositional or participial phrase), or subordinate clause (a.k.a. dependent clause) in a complex sentence.
If we follow our project plan’s critical path down to the minute, we will finish on time and on budget.
Why it’s correct: The comma separates the subordinate clause beginning with the subordinating conjunction “If” from the main clause (beginning with the subject “we”) that follows it.
When my ship comes in, I’ll be repaying every favor anyone ever did for me.
Why it’s correct: The comma separates the subordinate clause, beginning with the subordinating conjunction “When,” from the main clause that follows it, beginning with the subject “I.”
To make ourselves better understood, we’ve left post-it notes all around the room.
Why it’s correct: The comma separates the introductory infinitive phrase, beginning with the infinitive verb “To make,” from the main clause that follows it, beginning with the subject “we.”
After the flood, the Poulins took out some expensive disaster insurance.
Why it’s correct: The comma separates the introductory prepositional phrase, beginning with the preposition “after,” from the main clause that follows it, beginning with the subject “the Poulins.”
Greeting me at the door, she said that I was a half hour early and would have to wait to see the director.
Why it’s correct: The comma separates the introductory participial phrase, beginning with the present participle (Simmons, 2001a) “Greeting,” from the main clause that follows it, beginning with the subject “she.”
The downturn of 2008 now forgotten, the investors threw other people’s money around like it was 2007 again.
Why it’s correct: The comma separates the introductory absolute phrase, ending with the past participle (Simmons, 2001a) “forgotten,” from the main clause that follows it, beginning with the subject “the investors.”
Delighted, she accepted their offer even with the conditions.
Why it’s correct: The comma separates the single-word introductory past-participle appositive (Simmons, 2001b) “Delighted” from the main clause that follows it, beginning with the subject “she.”
Therefore, you are encouraged to submit your timesheet the Friday before payday.
Why it’s correct: The comma separates the introductory conjunctive adverb (Simmons, 2007b) “Therefore” from the main clause that follows it, beginning with the subject “you.”
However, there’s not much we can do if the patient refuses our help.
Why it’s correct: The comma separates the introductory conjunctive adverb “However” from the main clause that follows it, beginning with the subject “you.”
Yes, please go ahead and submit your payment.
Why it’s correct: The comma separates the single-word introductory interjection “Yes” from the main imperative clause that follows it, the core of which is the verb “go.”
Hello, Claude:
Why it’s correct: The comma marks the pause between the greeting word and name address in a respectful, semiformal salutation opening email.
Exception: The comma is unnecessary if the introductory dependent clause or prepositional phrase is short (fewer than four words) and its omission doesn’t cause confusion.
At this point we’re not accepting any applications.
Why it’s correct: Omitting the comma after the short, three-word prepositional phrase doesn’t cause confusion.
The comma tells the reader to pause a little prior to the main clause as if to say, “Okay, here’s where the sentence really begins with the main-clause subject and predicate.” The main clause is the main point, whereas the subordinate clause that precedes it is relatively minor, providing context.
Recall from the lesson on sentence varieties (§4.3.2) that a complex sentence is one where a subordinating conjunction begins an independent or subordinate clause, which cannot stand on its own as a sentence. A subordinate clause (a.k.a. dependent clause) becomes part of a proper sentence only when it joins a main (a.k.a. independent) clause. When that subordinate clause precedes the main clause, a comma separates them. The same is true when that main clause is preceded by a phrase (e.g., prepositional, infinitive, participial, gerund, etc.) or even just a word such as an appositive participle (as in the “Delighted” example above) or conjunctive adverb, as in the “Therefore” example above.
Look for words, phrases, or clauses preceding the main clause without a comma separating them. For this, you must know how to spot the main clause when it comes later in the sentence; in other words, you need to be able to spot the main grammatical subject (the doer of the action) and predicate (the action itself; review §4.3.1’s introduction to sentence structure). If the main subject is preceded by words, phrases, or clauses but not a comma, then you need to add one before the main clause.
Because first impressions are lasting ones you must always come out swinging at the beginning of your presentation.
Because first impressions are lasting ones, you must always come out swinging at the beginning of your presentation.
In the example above, “you” is the main grammatical subject that begins the main clause, whose main verb is “come.” The subordinate clause begins with the subordinating conjunction “Because” and ends at “ones,” so the comma must follow “ones” to separate it from the beginning of the main clause.
Don’t put a comma after a main clause (a.k.a. independent clause) if it is followed by a subordinate (a.k.a. dependent) clause or phrase in a complex sentence. If the subordinate clause begins with a contrasting subordinating conjunction such as “although,” a comma must separate the two clauses.
You can’t apply for permits from the city because you haven’t even secured funding yet.
Why it’s correct: A comma is unnecessary because the subordinate clause, beginning with the subordinating conjunction “because,” follows the main clause rather than precedes it, so you can read it without a pause.
We will finish on time and on budget if we follow the critical path of our plan to the minute.
Why it’s correct: A comma is unnecessary because the subordinate clause, beginning with the subordinating conjunction “if,” follows the main clause rather than precedes it, so you can read it without a pause.
I’ll be repaying every favor anyone ever did for me when my ship comes in.
Why it’s correct: A comma is unnecessary because the subordinate clause, beginning with the subordinating conjunction “when,” follows the main clause rather than precedes it, so you can read it without a pause.
The Poulins took out some expensive disaster insurance after the flood.
Why it’s correct: A comma is unnecessary because the prepositional phrase, beginning with the preposition “after,” follows the main clause rather than precedes it, so you can read it without a pause.
We’re not accepting any applications at this time , though we might make an exception for a truly remarkable applicant.
Why it’s correct: A comma is necessary because the subordinate clause, beginning with the subordinating conjunction “though,” strikes a contrast with the main clause that precedes it, making a pause appropriate.
We could easily hire a new full-time assistant in the fourth quarter , unless our profit margin drops below 5% in the third.
Why it’s correct: A comma is necessary because the subordinate clause, beginning with the subordinating conjunction “unless,” strikes a contrast with the main clause that precedes it, making a pause appropriate.
The absence of the comma tells the reader to keep reading smoothly without pause between the main and subordinate clauses. In the case of the contrasting subordinate clause, however, the comma signals a pause as if to say that the subordinate clause is a kind of afterthought or qualification added to the main clause.
Look for commas unnecessarily added before subordinating conjunctions (see Table 4.3.2a for a list of subordinating conjunctions) in complex sentences where the subordinate clause follows the main clause and doesn’t strike a contrast with it.
The technician is switching to plan B , because the manifold blew a gasket.
The technician is switching to plan B because the manifold blew a gasket.
The Goliath Games label was founded in 2003 , to create the most innovative and progressive interactive entertainment.
The Goliath Games label was founded in 2003 to create the most innovative and progressive interactive entertainment.
In the examples above, the comma is simply unnecessary and should be deleted. It would be necessary, however, if the first sentence began with the subordinate clause beginning with “Because . . . ” or after the infinitive phrase if the second sentence began with “To create . . . .” In those cases, the comma would follow “gasket” and “2003,” respectively, and you would change the first letter in the main clauses to lowercase.
Put commas before and after parenthetical or non-essential words, phrases, or clauses that would leave the sentence grammatically correct if you omitted them. Placed in the middle of a sentence between the subject and predicate or at the end of the sentence, however, those elements lend further detail to the words or phrases that come just before them. Commas in this way function as a lighter form of parentheses.
The promotion went to Mr. Speck , who neither wanted nor deserved it, to make it look like something was being done about the glass ceiling.
Why it’s correct: Like parentheses, the commas mark off the relative clause beginning with the relative pronoun “who” in the middle of the sentence, lending more information to the word coming just before (“Mr. Speck”).
Global Solutions went on a hiring spree , which was well-timed given the change in telecoms legislation that was about to come down.
Why it’s correct: The comma marks the switch to a restrictive relative clause beginning with the relative pronoun “which” after the main clause, lending more information to its final word, “hiring spree.” The restrictive relative clause is non-essential in the sense that the main clause still means the same thing if the restrictive clause were omitted.
We’ll get back to you as soon as possible , needless to say .
Why it’s correct: The comma marks the switch to an interjection tacked onto the end of the sentence.
The second customer , on the other hand, absolutely loved the new color.
Why it’s correct: The comma marks off a parenthetical prepositional phrase separating the subject from the predicate in the middle of the sentence.
The time for expressing interest in the buy-out option , however, had long since passed.
Why it’s correct: The commas mark off the conjunctive adverb “however” interjected between the subject and the predicate in the middle of the sentence.
We’ve heard that , in fact, the delegation won’t be coming after all.
Why it’s correct: The commas mark off a parenthetical prepositional phrase interjected between the subject and the predicate in the middle of the sentence.
Always treat the customer with respect, unless of course certain behaviors , such as belligerent drunkenness, compel you to take a firm stand against them.
Why it’s correct: The commas mark off a parenthetical phrase offering an example interjected between the subject and the predicate in the middle of the dependent clause.
The nicest thing about you , Josh, is that you get the best work out of your employees by only praising achievements rather than criticizing mistakes.
Why it’s correct: The commas mark off a parenthetical appositive address clarifying who “you” is between the subject and the predicate in the middle of the sentence.
I sent the application to Grace Garrison , the departmental secretary, last Tuesday.
Why it’s correct: The commas mark off a parenthetical appositive noun phrase identifying the role of the person named.
Exceptions: When the appositive is so close to the noun it modifies that the sentence wouldn’t make sense without it, omit the commas. Also omit commas:
Departmental secretary Grace Garrison received the application Tuesday.
Why it’s correct: You can omit commas around the appositive following “Departmental secretary” because “Departmental secretary received the application” wouldn’t make sense unless “The” preceded it.
They offer competitive fringe benefits such as health and dental coverage, three weeks’ paid vacation per year, and sick leave.
Why it’s correct: A comma would be excessive before the “such as” phrase introducing the list of examples unless it appeared as a parenthetical aside in the middle of the sentence.
We don’t have to go, and of course they don’t have to take us.
Why it’s correct: Adding commas around “of course,” though technically correct, would be excessive and look cluttered, so the parenthetical commas drop in priority to the comma separating compounded independent clauses.
As light alternatives to parentheses, these parenthetical commas tell the reader to pause a little when a non-essential (a.k.a. parenthetical) point is interjected or tacked on to explain the word or phrase preceding it. Common parenthetical phrases include:
all things considered as a matter of fact as a result as a rule at the same time consequently for example furthermore | however in addition incidentally in fact in my opinion in the first place in the meantime moreover | needless to say nevertheless no doubt of course on the contrary on the other hand therefore under the circumstances |
Interestingly, this rule also helped the Atlantic Canada telephone company Bell Aliant cancel a contract with Rogers Communications over the use of telephone poles prior to Rogers’s intended five-year term, costing Rogers a million dollars and resulting in a bitter court battle in 2006. The dispute concerned the following sentence in the middle of the 14-page contract:
This agreement shall be effective from the date it is made and shall continue in force for a period of five (5) years from the date it is made, and thereafter for successive five (5) year terms, unless and until terminated by one year prior notice in writing by either party.
Without the comma after “terms,” you could read the contract as Rogers intended, which was to say that it could be terminated with a year’s notice any time after the first five years. By adding the second comma to make the “and thereafter” phrase parenthetical and therefore non-essential, however, Rogers in effect made the “unless . . .” clause apply to the first five-year term as well as to any subsequent term. That one misplaced comma thus gave Bell Aliant the right to cancel at any time.
Citing this parenthetical comma rule, the Canadian Radio-Telecommunications Commission (CRTC) ruled in favor of Bell Aliant at Rogers’s expense (Austen, 2006) . The CRTC later reversed its ruling when Rogers invoked the less ambiguous French version of the contract to force Aliant to return to its contractual obligations. Still, Rogers ultimately paid heavily for un-recouped losses during the contract’s cancellation and in legal fees throughout the contract dispute, which dragged out till 2009 (Bowal & Layton, 2014) . You can bet Rogers pays people to ensure its contracts are punctuated unambiguously now.
Look for words, phrases, or clauses that could be deleted from a sentence without making it grammatically incomplete. Add commas if none mark off the parenthetical word, phrase, or clause or if the first is there but not the second (or vice versa) in the case of parenthetical elements ending a sentence.
Emphasizing your spoken points with gesticulation which may sound like a dirty word can certainly help your audience understand them better.
Emphasizing your spoken points with gesticulation , which may sound like a dirty word, can certainly help your audience understand them better.
Here, the non-essential parenthetical relative clause beginning with the non-restrictive relative pronoun “which” and ending with “word,” could be deleted from the sentence and leave it grammatically complete. However, as an interjection, it clarifies the word that precedes it (“gesticulation”), and therefore has a place in the sentence, albeit one set apart from the rest.
Let’s start cooking Grandpa!
Let’s start cooking , Grandpa!
Here, the comma is crucial in signaling that Grandpa is being addressed. Without the comma, the sentence recommends preparing Grandpa to be cooked and presumably eaten, which is hopefully not the intended meaning.
Put commas before end-of-sentence:
This presentation seems like it’s gone on for days , doesn’t it?
Why it’s correct: The comma marks off the question added to the end of the sentence to ask whether the opposite of the main-clause point is true as a way of seeking agreement with it.
Please send the document to Accounts Receivable , not Payable .
Why it’s correct: The comma marks off the contrasting element added to the end, abbreviating the clause “do not send the document to Accounts Payable,” which has the exact structure of the main clause but shows only the words that differ from the main-clause wording rather than repeating most of it to make a compound sentence.
The potential we envision for AI is that it will at best bring a world of convenience and leisure , at worst total annihilation.
Why it’s correct: The comma marks off the clause that states the complementary contrast to the first statement by omitting the repeated relative clause root “it will . . . bring.”
The president’s statement to the media seemed incoherent , even demented.
Why it’s correct: The comma marks off the clause that extends the main clause statement assuming the same root structure.
The comma cues the reader to pause before the sentence shifts to contrasting elements, as well as to indicate that some phrasing from the first part of the sentence is being assumed rather than repeated in the second.
Look for run-on-like gaps where no punctuation separates the main clause from questions or contrasting phrases tacked on to the end of a sentence, and add the comma.
This is a great time to be alive isn’t it?
This is a great time to be alive , isn’t it?
Here, the main clause ends with “alive,” and the follow-up recasting of the statement as an interrogative sentence (“isn’t this the best time to be alive?”) abbreviated as “isn’t it?” forms a run-on without any punctuation separating it from the main clause. The comma added between the clauses represents the words that were omitted to avoid repetition.
Put commas before phrases that appear at the end of a sentence but modify (describe) actions or things at the sentence’s beginning or middle. As long as such phrases don’t cause confusion with their ambiguity, they are free to either follow the noun they modify or appear at the end.
The MC desperately cued for applause , clapping aggressively .
Why it’s correct: The comma marks off the sentence-ending participial phrase starting with the present participle “clapping,” which describes the action “cued” in the middle of the sentence.
The comma signals to the reader that the phrase ending the sentence refers to something that came earlier in the sentence. Without a comma, the phrase would describe what came immediately before it.
Look for phrases (especially participial phrases—words ending in -ing) at the end of sentences without commas preceding them but not making sense. If they indeed have commas preceding them but the participle could refer to more than one thing in the main clause, resolve the ambiguity by moving the phrase closer to the thing it modifies.
The bellhop held out his hand for a gratuity smiling obsequiously.
The bellhop held out his hand for a gratuity , smiling obsequiously.
Here, the omitted comma makes it seem like the gratuity is smiling obsequiously, which doesn’t make sense. Adding the comma before “smiling” makes it clear that the bellhop mentioned earlier in the sentence is the one smiling.
The MC invited the plenary speaker to the stage , bowing graciously.
Bowing graciously , the MC invited the plenary speaker to the stage.
The participial phrase is ambiguous when placed at the end of the sentence because it’s unclear whether the MC or plenary speaker is bowing graciously. Moving the participial phrase to the beginning so that it is in appositive relation to the noun it modifies clarifies the sentence to say that the MC is bowing.
Put commas around the:
The release date of April 14 , 2019, will be honored if there are no delays.
Why it’s correct: The commas mark off the year as parenthetical in the three-part date to ensure that there is no ambiguity about which April 14 (2018? 2020?) is intended.
We agreed to continue our meeting on Thursday , January 28, to cover the agenda items we didn’t get to on Monday.
Why it’s correct: The commas mark off the calendar date as parenthetical after the day of the week to ensure that there is no ambiguity about which Thursday is intended.
Gord Downie was born in Amherstview , Ontario, to a traveling salesman father and stay-at-home mother.
Why it’s correct: The commas mark off the province as parenthetical after the smaller town to ensure that there is no ambiguity about which town is intended, assuming other towns in other provinces may share the same name.
Bowie was born David Robert Jones in London , England, on 8 January 1947.
Why it’s correct: The commas mark off the country as parenthetical after the city within it to ensure that there is no ambiguity about which city is intended (i.e., not the one in Ontario, Canada).
Send your inquiries to 1385 Woodroffe Avenue , Ottawa, ON K26 1V8.
Why it’s correct: The commas mark off the larger geographical region in which the street is situated.
Please welcome Daria Rimini , RN, to the department.
Why it’s correct: The commas mark off the person’s credentials as non-essential to her name rather than initials in her name.
Send your inquiries to Albert Irwin , Jr., at the email address below.
Why it’s correct: The commas mark off the generational tag following the name.
You can always trust old George Wilson , Professor of English, to make a mountain of a molehill.
Why it’s correct: The commas mark off the individual’s professional title following their name.
The awards for damages ranged anywhere from a token $4,882 to a whopping $13,945,718 .
Why it’s correct: The commas mark off every group of thousand (three digits) to help the reader quickly recognize the magnitude of the number without counting the number of digits.
Exceptions: Don’t surround a year with commas if it follows only a month; use them only around years following a month and date. Also, drop the second comma if the larger geographical region is possessive in form.
Recording began in November 2005 and continued to February 2006.
Why it’s correct: Commas are unnecessary in general two-part dates.
The charm of London , Ontario’s street buskers almost rivals that of its UK namesake.
Why it’s correct: A comma following the possessive form of the larger geographical region would look even more awkward than this. Of course, the sentence could be reworded as “The street buskers’ charm in London, Ontario, almost . . . .”
The commas tell the reader to pause a little within a detailed series of time, geographical, or name designations when adding a higher order of organization just as commas were used as light alternatives to parentheses in Comma Rule 3.1.
Look for years added to three-part dates, larger geographical regions added after cities and towns, or credentials added after names with either no comma added on either side of that year, region, or credential or added only before it but not after. Add both or the second comma. If the date only has the month and year, but a comma or two surrounds the date, delete commas.
We can probably fit you in for the procedure on Tuesday December 12.
We can probably fit you in for the procedure on Tuesday , December 12 .
Here, the month and date follow the day of the week without a comma. Just add one between them.
They moved the release date to March 14 , 2020 to allow enough time for post-production.
They moved the release date to March 14 , 2020 , to allow enough time for post-production.
Here, the year gets the first of its two parenthetical commas but not the second, so just add one after the year.
The company was founded in July , 1978 , to address an urgent need.
The company was founded in July 1978 to address an urgent need.
The commas around the year are unnecessary because it’s only a two-part date. Just delete them.
Put commas between signal phrases and the quotations they introduce when the signal phrases end with a verb that gives rise to the quoted words or thoughts.
The chair of the meeting shouted , “We cannot proceed unless we have order.”
Why it’s correct: A comma separates the signal phrase ending with a verb from the quotation it introduces.
“Stay the course,” the supervisor advised, “and you shall soon find success.”
Why it’s correct: The parenthetical commas mark off the signal phrase interjected between quoted clauses.
You could tell she was thinking, “Is this guy for real?”
Why it’s correct: A comma separates the signal phrase ending with a verb from the quotation it introduces even if the quotation is merely thought rather than said.
Exception: A comma is unnecessary if the signal phrase ends with the restrictive relative pronoun that or the quotation is a phrase incorporated into the sentence rather than a sentence or clause on its own.
The customer service rep said that “The offer expired on August 23, not the 24th” and they have a “no exceptions” policy due to the perishable nature of the product.
Why it’s correct: The signal phrase ends with the restrictive relative pronoun that , which a comma doesn’t follow but could replace, and “no exceptions” is a phrase rather than a clause or sentence.
The customer service representative confirmed “August 23, not the 24” was the expiration date.
Why it’s correct: No comma follows the signal phrase because the quotation is just a phrase excerpt rather than a clause or sentence.
The comma cues the reader to pause as it abbreviates the relative pronoun that , which makes the comma unnecessary if it’s included.
Look for missing commas around quotations and add them between the signal phrase ending with a verb and the quotation, or look for unnecessary commas that split a sentence unnaturally, such as going before or after the that that precedes a quotation if present, and delete them.
The authorization said “Go for it.”
The authorization said , “Go for it.”
Here, the signal phrase omits a comma between the main verb and the quotation, so adding one corrects the error.
The current contract says clearly that , “overtime is time and a half.”
The current contract says clearly that “overtime is time and a half.”
Here, a comma unnecessarily follows the relative pronoun that , perhaps because the writer thought that a comma should always precede the quotation. You could either delete the comma or “that,” but not both.
Don’t put a comma before a restrictive relative clause (e.g., beginning with the relative pronoun who or that ) following a main clause.
The stocks that we all thought were going to offer the best returns are doing the worst.
Why it’s correct: No commas surround the restrictive clause from “that” to “returns,” which is somewhat parenthetical in that the sentence could grammatically function without it (“The stocks are doing the worst”). However, this would be misleading because it implies that all the stocks are failing expectations, whereas the sentence focuses on only a subset. The vagueness resulting from omitting the restrictive clause proves that it is essential to the sentence’s clarity.
The students who presented first set the bar high for those who followed.
Why it’s correct: No commas surround the restrictive clause from “who” to “first.” The clause is restrictive because it specifies a small group of students. Adding commas around the clause would make it non-restrictive (see Comma Rule 3.1 above) and would change the meaning of the sentence: it would mean that all the students presented first.
She didn’t say that we couldn’t work together.
Why it’s correct: No comma precedes the restrictive clause beginning with “that.”
The absence of the comma tells the reader that the relative clause starting with the relative pronoun that or who is essential to the meaning of the sentence and should be read smoothly without pauses around it.
Look for commas preceding that or who and determine whether the meaning of the sentence would be significantly changed if you deleted the restrictive relative clause. If it would be, delete the commas.
You don’t have to cite common-knowledge facts , that every source you can find agrees on.
You don’t have to cite common-knowledge facts that every source you can find agrees on.
Here, the restrictive relative clause beginning with that is essential to the meaning because it clarifies what kind of facts are common knowledge. It is not interchangeable with the non-restrictive relative clause beginning with which , which requires a comma before it because it is non-essential (see Comma Rule 3.1 above). In the UK, writers often use “which” instead of “that” even in non-restrictive relative clauses without the comma preceding them. In North America, however, we distinguish the relative clause types by using a comma and which for non-restrictive clauses and that without a comma for restrictive clauses.
The students , who were caught plagiarizing , were each given a zero, whereas the rest did quite well.
The students who were caught plagiarizing were each given a zero, whereas the rest did quite well.
Here, the commas in the incorrect sentence say that all students were caught plagiarizing. Deleting the commas to make “who were caught plagiarizing” a restrictive relative clause brings the sentence back to the intended meaning, which is that a subset of students were caught plagiarizing and the rest did well.
Don’t put a comma between a clause’s subject (even if it’s a long one) and predicate (the main verb action) if there are no parenthetical elements between them.
Participants who quit smoking because of the new treatment option were twice as likely to remain smoke-free as those who quit cold turkey.
Why it’s correct: No comma separates the subject “Participants who . . . option” from the predicate “were . . . turkey” even though the subject is quite long at ten words.
Exception: Adding a pair of commas between the subject and predicate is acceptable when they are divided by an interjection. See the fourth and fifth correct examples illustrating Comma Rule 3.1.
The absence of the comma tells the reader to read smoothly across the subject and predicate because they are the integral parts of a unified clause even if the subject is long.
Look for commas that separate the subject from the predicate when there are no parenthetical words or phrases, or non-restrictive clauses, separating them. For this, you must know how to spot the main-clause subject and predicate and delete any stray commas that come between them.
All the businesses that benefited from the new regulatory environment following the passing of Bill 134, have given back to their community.
All the business that benefited from the new regulatory environment following the passing of Bill 134 have given back to their community.
The subject of the above sentence is a long one because, following the core noun “businesses,” it contains a restrictive relative clause beginning with that , which contains prepositional phrases (“from the new . . .” and “of Bill 134”) and a participial phrase (“following . . .”). None of these length-extending units change the fact that there is no legitimate parenthetical interjection requiring commas between the subject and the predicate that begins with “have given.” The easy fix is just to delete the comma.
Put commas between each item in a series, including before the and or or that separates the second-to-last (a.k.a. penultimate) and last items, whether those items be words, phrases, or even clauses in a series.
NASA sent the space shuttles Columbia , Challenger , Discovery , Atlantis , and Endeavour on 135 orbital missions from 1982 to 2011.
Why it’s correct: A comma follows each noun in a series up to the penultimate one before the and joining the last two.
I gave them the option of either researching the content , preparing the PowerPoint , or doing the actual presentation.
Why it’s correct: A comma follows each participial phrase in a series up to the penultimate one before the or joining the last two.
The presenters rehearsed before Week 5 , during Reading Week , and again after Week 7.
Why it’s correct: A comma follows each prepositional phrase in a series up to the penultimate one before the and joining the last two.
Mick Jagger and Keith Richards set the stage for other singer-guitarist power duos like Robert Plant and Jimmy Page , Freddie Mercury and Brian May , Steven Tyler and Joe Perry , Axl Rose and Slash, and Anthony Kiedis and John Frusciante.
Why it’s correct: A comma follows each compound noun phrase in a series up to the penultimate one before the and joining the last two pairs.
I can’t stand comma splices , you have no patience for run-ons , and she won’t tolerate sentence fragments.
Why it’s correct: In a compound sentence containing three independent clauses, a comma follows each clause up to the penultimate one before the and joining the last two.
The serial commas help separate each item in the series, and the one that comes before the coordinating conjunction and that joins the last two items (a.k.a. the “Oxford comma”) helps resolve various ambiguities that may arise without it (see some below). The question of whether to use the Oxford comma has been a long-running debate. Some style guides, such as the Canadian Press and Associated Press, and even institutions like Algonquin College recommend omitting it because they advocate for as few commas as possible. However, they say nothing about situations where omitting the Oxford comma creates unavoidable ambiguity—that is, two interpretations that mean two very different things. The anti-Oxford comma side even has an anthem in the Grammy-winning indie band Vampire Weekend’s 2008 debut-album single “Oxford Comma,” which opens with the lyric “Who gives a f**k about the Oxford comma?”
However, grammarians, readers, and writers who care about clarity in writing, and even the plaintiffs awarded $5 million in a US civil suit (as well as the defendants paying the price), certainly care about the Oxford comma. The significant confusion and even conflict that results from its absence in clutch situations justifies its inclusion in all. For instance:
If the Oxford comma is necessary to avoid ambiguity in such cases, it should be used as a rule in all cases. Writers shouldn’t have to make a subjective judgment call about whether the reader would find it ambiguous with or without the Oxford comma because some readers are more astute than others. Except perhaps in titles where brevity is highly valued and no ambiguities of the kind listed above can confuse the reader, the Oxford comma should always be used.
Look for a list of three or more words, phrases, or clauses in a sentence. If you don’t see a comma before the and that separates the last two items, add one there.
Our group is full of non-contributors, my friend and me.
Our group is full of non-contributors , my friend , and me.
Omitting the Oxford comma in the incorrect example above suggests that you and your friend are non-contributors because “my friend and me” are in appositive relation to “non-contributors.” Though you did not mean to say this, you are in effect offering yourself and your friend as particular examples of non-contributors. By adding the Oxford comma, however, you now say that the group is comprised of you, your friend, and some non-contributors. With the Oxford comma, you and your friend are productive members rather than non-contributors despite being grouped with them.
Put commas between two or more coordinate adjectives that refer to the same noun. Coordinate adjectives are those stacked in front of a noun in no particular order to describe the noun in multiple ways. You can tell that they’re coordinate adjectives if you can (1) change their order and (2) add and between each without changing the meaning either way.
The new hires turned out to be dedicated , ambitious employees.
Why it’s correct: Both adjectives, “dedicated” and “ambitious,” describe the noun “employees” in no particular order, and you can replace the comma with an and to make “. . . dedicated and ambitious employees.”
Would you like a nice , new , clean , dry diaper?
Why it’s correct: All four coordinate adjectives describe the noun “diaper” in no particular order.
The incessant, thunderous drum beat changed the rhythm of their hearts.
Why it’s correct: The comma goes between “incessant” and “thunderous” because they are coordinate. The comma doesn’t go between “thunderous” and “drum” because they are non-coordinate in that you can’t change their order and add and between them without changing the meaning.
Use SMS for brief , fast text message exchanges.
Why it’s correct: The comma goes between “brief” and “fast” because they are coordinate. The comma doesn’t go after “fast,” “text,” or “message” because they are non-coordinate in that you can’t change their order and add and between them without changing the meaning.
The commas distinguish coordinate from non-coordinate adjectives and therefore what adjectives are incidental and which are intrinsic qualities of the noun they describe. For more, see Comma Tip 6: Use Commas Correctly with a Series of Adjectives (Simmons, 2018a).
Look for a series of two or more adjectives preceding a noun without commas between them. If you can put and between them and change their order without changing the meaning of the sentence, they’re coordinate adjectives that need commas between them.
The day started off with a vicious unrelenting freezing rain.
The day started off with a vicious, unrelenting freezing rain.
The only adjectives that could be swapped around and have and added between them are “vicious” and “unrelenting.” The adjective “freezing” is locked in its position before the noun “rain” to mean the type of rain that makes the outside one huge ice rink. Therefore, you need to add a comma between “vicious” and “unrelenting,” but not between “unrelenting” and “freezing.”
Don’t put a comma after the second of two (or third of three, etc.) coordinate adjectives—i.e., between the final coordinate adjective and the noun it describes. See Comma Rule 4.2 above for a further explanation of coordinate vs. non-coordinate adjectives.
Look for coordinate adjectives preceding a noun with commas between them. If you can put and between them and change their order without changing the meaning of the sentence, they’re coordinate adjectives that need commas between them.
Select and use common, basic, information technology tools to support communication.
Select and use common, basic information technology tools to support communication.
The only adjectives that could be swapped around and have and added between them are “common” and “basic.” In this case, “information technology” (a.k.a. “IT”) is a noun phrase that modifies the noun “tools,” so their order is locked in, making them non-coordinate.
Don’t put commas between non-coordinate adjectives—that is, between adjectives that are in a fixed order before the noun they modify and cannot have and added between them without changing the meaning of the sentence. See Comma Rule 4.2 above for a further explanation of coordinate vs. non-coordinate adjectives.
Look for coordinate adjectives preceding a noun with commas between them. If you can’t put and between them and change their order without changing the meaning of the sentence, they’re non-coordinate adjectives. Any commas between them must be deleted.
Send the black , Pearl , drum kit to the heavy , metal drummer.
Send the black Pearl drum kit to the heavy metal drummer.
The order is important in the first set of non-coordinate adjectives describing the noun “kit” because the type of kit we’re dealing with is a drum kit, so “drum” must come immediately before “kit.” The brand of drum kit is Pearl (capitalized because it is a proper noun), so “Pearl” precedes “drum kit.” The only adjective preceding these non-coordinate adjectives is “black,” but it is unaccompanied by another to make it a coordinate adjective, so there are no commas. Likewise, inserting a comma between “heavy” and “metal” splits the musical genre “heavy metal” serving as a non-coordinate adjective to “drummer,” so it misleadingly implies that the drummer is a 400 kg lead statue.
Don’t put commas between two nouns (or noun phrases) or verbs (or verb phrases) joined by the coordinating conjunction and in a compound subject, predicate, or object.
Look for commas appearing before or after the coordinating conjunction and when it comes between nouns (or noun phrases) or verbs (or verb phrases), then delete them.
The communications director from your company , and the same from our company met to discuss a common strategy.
The communications director from your company and the same from our company met to discuss a common strategy.
The above sentence features a compound subject , meaning that two subjects (the two communications directors) perform the main action (“met”). Though each is followed by a prepositional phrase (“from . . .”), the comma between them must be deleted in the incorrect sentence to avoid impeding the reader.
They applied for an extension , and worked all weekend on the report.
They applied for an extension and worked all weekend on the report.
The sentence above has a compound predicate , meaning that the one subject (“They”) performed two actions (“applied” and “worked”). Again, the comma is unnecessary between them and must be deleted from the incorrect sentence. The comma would be necessary if the second verb had a different subject performing the action, in which case they would be two independent clauses in a compound sentence (see Table 4.3.2b and Comma Rule 1.1).
They can’t expect us to write both the report and memo , and not pay us.
They can’t expect us to write both the report and memo but not pay us.
The above sentence also has a compound predicate (“can’t expect” and “not pay”). Adding a comma makes this out to be a compound sentence, which it isn’t because the subject “They” is common to both actions. To avoid an “X and Y and Z” structure caused by having a compound object (“report and memo”) appearing just before the conjunction coordinating the second verb, the “and” joining the two verb phrases can simply be changed to “but.”
The teacher gave us a new deadline based on the revised schedule , and a slightly revised end-of-semester timeline.
The teacher gave us a new deadline based on the revised schedule and a slightly revised end-of-semester timeline.
The above sentences have a compound object , meaning that two objects (“deadline” and “timeline”) are acted upon by the verb “gave.” The objects here are in somewhat long noun phrases, but to add a comma between them (after “schedule”) would mislead the reader into thinking that this is a compound sentence with a new independent clause following “and.” Deleting the comma would ensure that the reader understands the sentence instead as a simple sentence with a compound object.
For more on commas, see the following resources:
Apostrophes are mainly used to indicate possession and contraction but are probably the most misplaced punctuation mark after commas. They can embarrass the writer who misuses them, show a lack of attention to detail, and confuse readers about whether a noun is singular or plural, possessive, a contraction, or just a misspelling. Used properly, apostrophes at the end of a noun cue readers that the noun following is possessed by what the noun preceding refers to. For instance, in “Uncle Tom’s cabin,” the apostrophe indicates that the cabin (noun) is owned by Uncle Tom. Placement of apostrophes before or after the s ending a word determines if the noun is plural or singular. They’re also used for contractions in informal writing such as you see at the beginning of this sentence. You have four main rules to follow when using apostrophes, as well as several special cases.
Click on the rules below to see further explanations, examples, advice on what to look for when proofreading, and demonstrations of how to correct common apostrophe errors associated with each one.
Apostrophe Rule 1.1 | ending a singular possessive noun. is to find a money manager who can diversify her portfolio. |
Apostrophe Rule 1.2 | Don’t put an apostrophe at the end of a simple plural noun. (no apostrophe at the end of “glasses,” “looks,” or “faces”) |
Apostrophe Rule 2.1 | ending a plural possessive noun. bids for the contract were rejected. |
Apostrophe Rule 2.2 | ending a non-possessive plural decade. . (no apostrophe between the and in “1940s”) |
Apostrophe Rule 3 | saying that not a mistake if doing it twice? |
Apostrophe Rule 4 | and , son. |
Put an apostrophe before the s added to the end of a singular noun when the noun or noun phrase following belongs to the noun preceding it. In the case of joint ownership in compound nouns (when two or more nouns have joint possession of the noun following), the apostrophe- s goes only at the end of the second or final noun.
Have you heard the story of Albert Einstein’s brain?
Why it’s correct: The brain belongs to Einstein (singular), so the apostrophe and s indicate possession.
Grace Jones’s formidable presence in 1985’s A View to a Kill electrified audiences.
Why it’s correct: The “formidable presence” belongs to Grace Jones. Though her name ends with an s , she is grammatically singular and therefore receives an apostrophe and s just like any other singular noun. The apostrophe and s are also added to the end of years to indicate that the noun following (in this case a James Bond film) occurred in that year.
I’ve always heeded my brother-in-law’s financial advice.
Why it’s correct: The apostrophe and s are added to the end of a compound noun.
Reznor and Ross’s first soundtrack won a 2010 Oscar for Best Original Score.
Why it’s correct: The apostrophe and s are added to the end of the final noun in cases of joint possession. Saying “Reznor’s and Ross’s first soundtrack” would refer to solo soundtracks by each.
The apostrophe before the s signals to the reader that the preceding singular noun is in possession of the noun or noun phrase following. To test whether you are dealing with a case of possession, you can flip the order and insert “of the” between the nouns or noun phrases. In the first example above where the brain belongs to Einstein, for instance, “the brain of Einstein” is a wordier equivalent of “Einstein’s brain” but confirms possession.
Look for s added to the end of words when your intention is to show possession but you’ve omitted the apostrophe, making the word look like a simple plural. Add the apostrophe. Also, in cases where an apostrophe is added to the very end of a singular noun that ends in s to show possession (see the second correct example above), add another s rather than imply that the singular noun is plural.
Mr. Davis’ companies proposals request is for a 33% funding increase.
Mr. Davis’s company’s proposal’s request is for a 33% funding increase.
The incorrect sentence above contains three apostrophe errors:
Put an apostrophe after the s at the end of a plural noun (a noun of two or more people, places, or things) when the noun or noun phrase following belongs to it.
The two companies’ merger was finalized last month.
Why it’s correct: The apostrophe goes at the end of the plural noun “companies” to indicate that the noun following (“merger”) belonged to both.
The Joneses’ family tradition includes rescuing ancient artifacts from dastardly villains.
Why it’s correct: The apostrophe is added to the end of “Joneses,” the plural of the surname “Jones,” meaning each individual Jones family member is in joint possession of the noun phrase following (“family tradition”).
I listed having had three years’ experience in C++ coding on my résumé.
Why it’s correct: The apostrophe comes at the end of the plural “years” to indicate that the noun following happened in those years. This is a more concise alternative to saying “three years of experience.”
Exception: When the plural form of the noun is irregular in that it doesn’t end in s (e.g., “feet,” “children,” “men,” “mice,” “teeth”), use the singular possessive apostrophe-s.
Can you please point me to the men’s room?
Why it’s correct: The singular possessive apostrophe-s form is added to the end of an irregular plural noun that doesn’t end in s to indicate possession.
The apostrophe after the s tells the reader to read the noun as being a plural in possession of the noun or noun phrase following, as opposed to the apostrophe before the s signaling a singular possessive.
Look for plural words that end in s being in possession of the noun following without an apostrophe at the end or the apostrophe added before the s . Either add the apostrophe to the end of the word or move it there.
We’ve been granted two months grace.
We’ve been granted two month’s grace.
We’ve been granted two months’ grace.
Here, the grace period belongs to the two months (plural), so omitting the apostrophe is incorrect because it leaves “months” as a simple plural. The apostrophe-s ending is also incorrect because it makes “month” singular, which disagrees with the “two” preceding. To correct these errors, the apostrophe must go after the s at the end of “months.”
Don’t put an apostrophe between the 0 and s when writing a plural decade that’s not possessive (e.g., 1990s). Put an apostrophe at the end only if the decade is in possession of the noun or noun phrase following.
The 1980s’ main contribution to popular music was excessive cheesy synthesizers.
Why it’s correct: The apostrophe follows the plural decade (meaning everything that happened from January 1, 1981, to December 31, 1990) to show possession of the noun phrase “main contribution.” You could also say, “The main contribution of the 1980s to popular music was . . . .”
1980’s Academy Award for Best Picture went to Ordinary People .
Why it’s correct: The apostrophe precedes the s to mean that the event following happened in the year 1980.
The apostrophe after the s signals to the reader that the noun or noun phrase following happened in the decade given. Some mistakenly put an apostrophe between the 0 and s when referring to the simple plural of a decade (e.g., 1990’s), but this conflicts with the singular possessive form of the year (see the “1980’s” example above). If the decade were also possessive, “1990’s’” (with two apostrophes—one before and one after the s ) would look awkward. The non-possessive apostrophe between the 0 and s is probably confusing the rule that places the contraction apostrophe before the last two digits of the year or decade (see the third example in Apostrophe Rule 3 below).
Look for an apostrophe-s added to the end of a decade and delete the apostrophe if the decade (or year at the beginning of the decade) isn’t in possession of the following noun or noun phrase.
The 1990’s were a colorful decade in men’s fashion.
The 1990s were a colorful decade in men’s fashion.
The ’90s were a colorful decade in men’s fashion.
In the incorrect sentence above, “1990’s” is the singular possessive form of “1990,” meaning something belonging to the year 1990 should follow it rather than a verb. Perhaps the writer confused “1990’s” with the contraction “’90s.” The apostrophe before the s must be deleted to make the simple plural “1990s,” meaning all the years from 1991 to 2000 inclusive.
Put an apostrophe wherever letters and characters (including spaces) have been omitted in contractions. Contractions are two (sometimes more) words combined into one word to represent the way they’re often said quickly as one word in informal speech. In the examples below, the contractions would be incorrect if formal writing were expected by the audience but are correct as informal writing.
There’s going to be a huge reckoning when markets adjust, and it won’t be pretty.
Why it’s correct: The first apostrophes replace the omitted i in “There is” and the second for the o in “will not.”
I woudn’t’ve have said that if I knew you were sensitive about your nose.
Why it’s correct: The apostrophes replace the omitted o and a in the three-word phrase “would not have” contracted into one word.
She’s been bangin’ out hit records since the ’70s .
Why it’s correct: The apostrophes replace the omitted space and ha in “She has,” final g in “banging,” and 19 in “1970s.”
It’s a pretty bad cold, sure, but ’sbeen a while and ’tis the season, as they say.
Why it’s correct: The apostrophes replace the omitted space and i in the contraction for “It is,” it ha in “it has been,” and first i in “it is.”
Exceptions: Many contractions at the far end of informality typically omit even contractions.
I’m gonna get me a cold beer when this shift’s over.
Why it’s correct: The first apostrophe replaces the omitted space and a in “I am,” and the second replaces the space and i in “shift is.” As a convention in the writing of gonna as a contraction of “going to,” apostrophes aren’t used to replace the omitted i, g, t, and o .
The apostrophe replaces omitted letters in contractions and thus signals informal writing meant to represent the way we speak words informally, though they would be unacceptable in formal writing. Some common contractions that often confuse readers because they are homophones with other words include:
Table 5.3.2: Commonly Confused or Misspelled Contractions
Contraction | Meaning | Not | Meaning |
---|---|---|---|
can’t | cannot | cant | slang |
could’ve | could have | could of | (“of” confused with “have”) |
I’d | I would | Id | agent of instinct to Freud |
I’m | I am | Im | Cockney for “him” |
it’s | it is | its | possessive pronoun |
I’ve | I have | Ive | (misspelled) |
let’s | let us | lets | a form of the verb |
o’clock | of the clock | oclock | (misspelled) |
should’ve | should have | should of | (“of” confused with “have”) |
there’s | there is / was | theirs | possessive pronoun |
they’re | they are | there / their | pronoun / possessive pronoun |
we’re | we are / were | were | a form of the verb |
where’s | where is / was | wears | a form of the verb |
who’s | who is / was | whose | possessive pronoun |
who’re | who are / were | whore | prostitute |
would’ve | would have | would of | (“of” confused with “have”) |
you’re | you are / were | your | possessive pronoun |
For a more exhaustive set, see the List of English contractions (Wikipedia, 2018).
Look for the absence of apostrophes in contractions and add them. Your spellchecker will help catch these in most cases (see Figure 5.1.4.8 above), but you must be especially careful in seeking them out if your spellchecker has any difficulty. Ensure also that you always use the form of apostrophe that looks like a small superscript “9,” not “6” (the opening of single quotation marks; see Quotation Marks Rule 2) especially when placed at the beginning of words or numbers.
Its not like there gone to kick us out if im late and your hammered.
It’s not like they’re gonna kick me out if I’m late and you’re hammered.
The many errors in the incorrect sentence can be corrected in the following ways:
I cant imagine life without ‘70’s rock ‘n roll.
I can’t imagine life without ’70s rock n’ roll.
The errors in the incorrect sentence can be corrected in the following ways:
Put an apostrophe wherever adding an s to make a simple plural would be confusing, such as pluralizing a single letter.
As my mom always said, “Mind your p’s and q’s , dot your i’s , and cross your t’s .”
Why it’s correct: The apostrophes help form the plurals of the lowercase letters when they would otherwise look confusing as “ps” and “qs” or ambiguous as “is.”
I’m aiming for straight A’s this semester.
Why it’s correct: The apostrophe helps form the plural of the uppercase letters when it would otherwise look ambiguous as “As.”
The apostrophe helps the reader see these as plural forms of letters rather than as misspellings or typos.
In the rare case of using a plural form of a letter, separate the letter and its s with an apostrophe if you have omitted it.
You need to practice rolling your rs if you want to nail the Italian accent.
You need to practice rolling your r’s if you want to nail the Italian accent.
In the example above, omitting the apostrophe makes the plural of the letter r appear as a typo.
For more on apostrophes, see the following resources:
Click on the rules below to see further explanations, examples, advice on what to look for when proofreading, and demonstrations of how to correct common colon errors associated with each one.
Colon Rule 1.1 | Enterprise, Columbia, Challenger, Discovery, Atlantis, Endeavour. |
Colon Rule 1.2 | |
Colon Rule 2.1 | |
Colon Rule 2.2 | |
Colon Rule 2.3 | Fully Completely Day for Night Trouble at the Henhouse (no colon after “are”) |
Colon Rule 3.1 | |
Colon Rule 3.2 | |
Colon Rule 3.3 | |
Put a colon after a clause or phrase that introduces a list formatted either as a series separated by commas in the sentence or a bulleted or numbered stack down the page.
We’re going to need some branded stationery: business cards for all associates, letterhead and memo templates, post-it notes, pens, and USB sticks.
Why it’s correct: The colon ends an independent clause (complete with a subject and predicate) that introduces a list arranged within the sentence.
To find the date of a web page that doesn’t otherwise have one:
Why it’s correct: The colon ends an infinitive phrase that, as a dependent clause, is completed by each imperative sentence in the numbered list of procedural steps arranged down the page.
The colon cues the reader to read the information following as a list of items in parallel delivering on the promise made in the clause or phrase preceding it.
Look for lists either in sentence form with each item separated by a comma or in the form of a numbered or bulleted list. If no colons separate the introductory clauses or phrases from the lists that follow, add them. If semicolons or commas introduce the lists (see Semicolon Rule 3 below), replace them with colons.
Four obstacles infuriate me on my rush to class through the hallways; inattentive people texting while walking, slow walkers, people who stop suddenly as if there’s no one behind them, and 4–5 people walking side-by-side, taking up the whole hallway.
Four obstacles infuriate me on my rush to class through the hallways: inattentive people texting while walking, slow walkers, people who stop suddenly as if there’s no one behind them, and 4–5 people walking side-by-side, taking up the whole hallway.
In the example above, the writer made the common mistake of confusing a semicolon for a colon. Fixing it is a simple matter of replacing one with the other. See the example correct sentence for Colon Rule 2.1 below for a handy mnemonic for getting the right punctuation in these cases.
Put a colon at the end of the opening salutation line where you address the recipient by name at the opening of a formal email or letter. In a semiformal email, a comma at the end of the salutation is fine. If an email is formal, however, a comma follows the greeting word (e.g., Hello ) and the colon follows the recipient’s name.
Greetings, Greta:
Why it’s correct: The colon following the semiformal email’s opening salutation cues the recipient (Greta) to read the message following it.
Dear Mrs. Jackson:
Why it’s correct: The colon following the formal letter’s opening salutation cues the recipient (Mrs. Jackson) to read the message following it.
Exception: In an informal message, a comma following the recipient’s name (but not the greeting word) strikes a more casual tone in the opening salutation.
Why it’s correct: The comma following the informal message’s opening salutation cues the recipient (Hank) to read the message following it.
The colon cues the reader to read the message following the salutation that addresses them by name.
Look for either no punctuation used at the end of an opening salutation address or other punctuation inappropriate for the occasion, such as a comma in a letter’s salutation, or incorrect, such as a semicolon.
Dear Mr. Bobrovsky,
Dear Mr. Bobrovsky;
Dear Mr. Bobrovsky:
In the first incorrect example, a comma used at the end of an opening salutation addressing the reader in a letter is too informal for the given channel. This suggests to the professional reader that the writer isn’t up to date on business letter writing conventions. Modern business writers use a colon instead of a comma. Worse, the semicolon suggests that the writer is confused about the respective roles of colons and semicolons despite having had ample opportunity to learn them throughout their English-speaking lives.
Put a colon after an independent clause followed by a statement that explains in further detail what the introductory clause states in general. An independent clause is one that can stand on its own as a sentence beginning with a capital and ending with a period because it expresses a complete thought with a subject (doer) and a predicate (action; see §4.3.1 above). This colon usually stands for the causal transition phrase “—that is, . . . .”
Imagining the colon elongating into an equals sign (=) is a useful way to remember what it does: equate information on either side of it.
Why it’s correct: The independent clause ends with a colon and the verb phrase following explains what “does” means. Since the material to the right of the colon is a verb phrase rather than a complete sentence, the e in “equate” remains lowercase.
The colon cues the reader to read the phrase or clause to the right of the colon as an explanation of what the clause to the left of it says.
Look for combination statement-explanation sentence structures with either no punctuation between them or the wrong punctuation, such as a semicolon, comma, or long dash (em dash).
You have only one option left—delete the corrupted file from your hard drive and download the last version you saved to the cloud.
You have only one option left: delete the corrupted file from your hard drive and download the last version you saved to the cloud.
In the incorrect sentence above, the writer made the common mistake of using the long dash as multipurpose punctuation for any pause you hear in speech. Fixing the sentence is a simple matter of replacing the long dash with a colon. You could alternatively add “that is,” between the long dash and “delete,” but the colon makes for a more concise sentence with two fewer words.
Put a colon after an independent clause that introduces a quotation. Like the clause followed by an explanation in Colon Rule 2.1 above, it must be a complete clause that can stand on its own before the colon and quotation.
The first joke he told was a groaner of the highest order: “What did the fish say when you put him in his tank? . . . ‘Hey, how do you drive this thing?’”
Why it’s correct: The quotation is introduced by an independent clause that ends with a colon, whereas a signal phrase that ends with a verb such as “said” is followed by a comma.
The colon cues the reader to read the quotation to the right of the colon.
Look for quotations preceded by a complete independent clause. If they don’t have a colon separating them from the quotation, add one. Also, look for colons used to set up quotations when a comma is more appropriate, such as if the last word before the quotation is a verb, which would make the clause preceding the colon incomplete. In such cases, you would either replace the colon with a comma or rephrase the introductory fragment to make it an independent clause.
Mama called the doctor and the doctor said: “No more monkeys jumping on the bed.”
Mama called the doctor and the doctor said, “No more monkeys jumping on the bed.”
Mama called the doctor and the doctor gave her an ultimatum: “Look, if another one of your children falls off the bed and gets a concussion, I’ll be reporting you to the Children’s Aid Society.”
In the example above, the clause preceding the colon and quotation is a compound with a fragmentary second clause missing an object after the transitive verb “said,” whereas it would have to be a complete independent clause to use a colon. Correcting it would be a simple matter of replacing the colon with a comma (see Comma Rule 3.5 above). Alternatively, you could make the introductory clause a complete and independent one, meaning it could stand on its own as a sentence, then use a colon before the quotation.
Don’t put a colon before an explanation or list if the clause that precedes it is not an independent one—that is, if it cannot stand on its own as a sentence.
Look for colons ending phrases or incomplete clauses with lists or explanatory statements following and simply delete them or rephrase the incomplete clause as a complete one. The incorrect sentence at the end of Colon Rule 2.2 above exemplifies an incomplete clause preceding a quotation; below is one preceding a list:
The remaining tasks include: picking up the birthday cake, putting up the streamers, and wrapping the presents.
The remaining tasks include picking up the birthday cake, putting up the streamers, and wrapping the presents.
The following tasks remain: picking up the birthday cake, putting up the streamers, and wrapping the presents.
In the example above, the colon ends an incomplete clause—incomplete because it has a subject and only half of the predicate. The verb “include” is transitive , which means that an object (a thing acted upon by the verb) must follow it (Simmons, 2007a). The objects here are gerunds , which are verbs in noun form ending in -ing (Simmons, 2018b), and are all on the other side of the colon, so the colon can just be deleted. Alternatively, the incomplete clause can be completed by changing the subject to “The following tasks” to set up the list and changing the verb to the intransitive “remain”— intransitive because it doesn’t take an object (Simmons, 2008).
The Gutenberg Galaxy: The Making of Typographic Man.
Why it’s correct: The colon separates main title from subtitle.
The colon distinguishes what should be known as the main title of the book, film, report, assignment, etc. Often this is a catchy, snappy handle for what to call it. The subtitle usually provides a little more practical information about what the work is about.
Look for titles that have any punctuation other than colons between main titles and subtitles. Often the cover of a book positions the subtitle below the main title and in a smaller font, in which case a colon must be added when transcribing the title into a document.
Amusing Ourselves to Death / Public Discourse in the Age of Show Business.
Amusing Ourselves to Death: Public Discourse in the Age of Show Business
In the example above, the absence of punctuation separating the main title from the subtitle on the cover may have prompted the writer to make one up by using a slash. The convention for representing main titles and subtitles, however, is to separate them with a colon.
Toronto: ECW.
Why it’s correct: The colon separates location and publisher.
The colon is merely a convention for separating the publisher location and name. Readers like to know if the book is published in the major centers like New York or London or if they’re more local like Toronto or Vancouver.
Look for the part in bibliographical references of books where the publisher information is given. If any punctuation other than a colon separates them, replace it with a colon.
New York, Random House.
New York: Random House.
In the example above, the comma is non-standard punctuation separating the city where the book publisher is based and the name of the publisher. It must be replaced with a colon.
Put a colon between numbers in mathematical ratios and to separate hours, minutes, and seconds when indicating time.
A globe scaled 1:50,220,000 (or 790 miles to the inch) is one you can grip in the palm of your hand.
Why it’s correct: The ratio colon indicates the relative size difference between the model (given as 1 here) and the real thing, which in this case is over fifty million times bigger than the model.
Clocking in at 3:24:56, that film was three hours, twenty-four minutes, and fifty-six seconds too long.
Why it’s correct: The colons divide units of time into hours, minutes, and seconds. After seconds, decimal-periods are used for fractions of seconds.
The colon expresses mathematical relationships and the division of units between numbers in a space-efficient manner.
Look for ratios and times to ensure that a colon is being used and that there are no spaces between it and the numbers on either side.
My first marathon time was 3: 22: 15 and my second was a slower 3.26.44.
My first marathon time was 3:22:15 and my second was a slower 3:26:44.
In the example above, errors in spacing and using non-standard punctuation are easily corrected by deleting spaces between the numbers and colons in the first time written and using colons instead of periods in the second.
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Semicolon Rule 1 | Yes, we finished the marketing report you asked for; it’s printed and bound in your departmental mailbox. |
Semicolon Rule 2 | |
Semicolon Rule 3 |
Put a semicolon between independent clauses whose content is so closely related that it makes sense to keep them in the same sentence, though they have different grammatical subjects (doers of the action). An independent clause is one that can stand on its own as a complete sentence because it has a subject (doer) and predicate (action). A compound sentence joins two independent clauses either with a comma and coordinating conjunction (and, but, so, etc.; see Table 4.3.2a) or with a semicolon. Doing neither would make a run-on sentence, and using only a comma between the clauses would make a comma splice. Use a semicolon in compound sentences where none of the seven coordinating conjunctions is appropriate to use or where you need to be as concise as possible and can do without the conjunction without sacrificing clarity.
The new website is nearly ready to launch; we just need to set some SEO controls and publish it.
Why it’s correct: The semicolon joins the independent clause beginning with the subject “The new website” and the other with the subject “we.” Both could stand on their own as sentences but are closely related enough to be in the same sentence.
The semicolon helps the reader see where one clause ends and another (with a different grammatical subject) begins. It also signals that these are two closely related ideas worth joining in the same sentence.
Look for compound sentences punctuated with anything other than a semicolon (e.g., a comma, which makes a comma splice) or with no punctuation at all between them. For this you really must know sentence structure well enough to spot the grammatical subject of a main (a.k.a. independent) clause so that you can tell if a second subject begins a new independent clause within a sentence but without the necessary punctuation preceding it. Review §4.3.1 on sentence structure if you need a refresher.
We would like to see less personal cellphone use from employees during working hours, however you can of course use your cellphone in an emergency.
We would like to see less personal cellphone use from employees during working hours; however, you can of course use your cellphone in an emergency.
The incorrect sentence above is a comma splice because it uses only a comma to separate two independent clauses (see Comma Rule 1.2). The error is easier to spot if you imagine deleting the conjunctive adverb however . Replacing the comma with a semicolon and adding a comma after the conjunctive adverb easily fixes the problem.
You can put the meeting in the calendar make it so we get a notification the day before.
You can put the meeting in the calendar; make it so we get a notification the day before.
The incorrect sentence above is a run-on sentence because it contains two independent clauses without any punctuation between them. Adding a semicolon quickly makes the sentence a properly punctuated compound sentence.
Use semicolons as “super commas” between groups of items in a long list of items arranged in a sentence.
Please send T4s to Brenda, Albert, and Joan in Accounting; Jeremy, Lorraine, and Drew in Marketing; and Jasmine, Lily, and Alphonso in Legal.
Why it’s correct: The semicolon acts as a “super comma” that separates three sub-lists of three employees each according to their respective department in an office.
The semicolon helps the reader see subgroups within a long list that would be confusing if it included and s between the two last items in each subgroup throughout.
Look for sentences that contain long lists and see if there are internal groupings that can be separated with semicolons rather than commas.
She was a kind mother, sister, and daughter, a dedicated public servant, business owner, and campaigner for progressive issues, as well as a kind soul with an insatiable curiosity, a brilliant mind, and a big heart.
She was a kind mother, sister, and daughter; a dedicated public servant, business owner, and campaigner for progressive issues; as well as a kind soul with an insatiable curiosity, a brilliant mind, and a big heart.
In the incorrect example above, the long list of items is internally organized into groups of family and professional roles, as well as personal qualities. To help the reader follow these divisions as they switch from one group to another, the semicolon acts as a “super comma.”
Don’t use semicolons as if they were interchangeable with colons. They are different punctuation marks performing different functions. Review the semicolon rules above and compare with §5.3.3 on uses for colons.
Look for semicolons and determine if they are being used appropriately in the manner described in the rules above or if they are actually performing the functions of colons explained and exemplified in §5.3.3 above. You can jump straight to every instance of a semicolon throughout your document by performing a word search (Ctrl + f) and just typing in a semicolon (;).
Please send notifications to the following people; your family, friends, employer(s), legal representative(s), and financial planner(s).
Please send notifications to the following people: your family, friends, employer(s), legal representative(s), and financial planner(s).
In the incorrect example above, the semicolon is being used to introduce a list of items, which is the function of a colon (see Colon Rule 1). Simply replacing the semicolon with a colon corrects the error.
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Parentheses Rule 1.1 | |
Parentheses Rule 1.2 | (commas used instead of parentheses) |
Parentheses Rule 2 | Cellphones are giving youths neck and back problems typically seen in much older people ( ). |
Use parentheses around interjections within a sentence where using parenthetical commas would lead to confusion. You can also use parentheses around an entire sentence that offers an aside that helps explain something said in the sentence previous. Parentheses always come in pairs: an opening parenthesis signals the beginning of an interjection of lesser importance, and a closing parenthesis signals the return to the sentence proper. When used around an entire sentence, the closing parenthesis goes after the sentence-ending period; otherwise, it goes before.
We called pest control to get our office back from the vermin (silverfish, mites, house flies, fruit flies, and spiders) that seem to have taken up residency this past year.
Why it’s correct: The parentheses mark off a list that digresses from the main point of the sentence with a series of illustrative examples. Parentheses are a better alternative to parenthetical commas because they would confuse the reader with two different types of commas: parenthetical and series.
I’ve come around in my opinion of the common house centipede. (I used to squash them at first sight.) It turns out that they’re effective pest control agents themselves.
Why it’s correct: The parentheses mark off a whole sentence as a slightly digressive aside interrupting the flow of the main point.
The parentheses guide the reader toward reading the words, phrases, and clauses surrounded by them as being of lesser importance but still offering insight into what comes immediately before them.
Look to make sure that the parentheses you use genuinely set off words, phrases, or clauses that help explain those that came before them and that the parentheses both open and close. If you use parentheses around a whole sentence, ensure that the closing parenthesis goes to the right of the period rather than to the left.
I know house centipedes, scutigera coleoptrata , are ugly, but I’m sure you would much rather have them in your home than the vermin they feed on.
I know house centipedes ( scutigera coleoptrata , are ugly, but I’m sure you would much rather have them in your home than the vermin they feed on.
I know house centipedes ( scutigera coleoptrata ) are ugly, but I’m sure you would much rather have them in your home than the vermin they feed on.
The incorrect example above uses parenthetical commas to set off the Latin name of the insect referred to in the first clause, then uses a Rule 1.1 comma to crowd the area with commas. Parentheses would be more appropriate here, as well as in the second incorrect example that omits the closing parenthesis. The second sentence also places the parenthetical element at the end of the clause rather than where it should be: immediately after the common name of the insect it explains.
The next time you see a house centipede stuck in your bathtub, throw it a lifeline. (Don’t try to pick it up; they’re extremely fragile and fall apart at the slightest touch). Just rest one end of a meter stick on the edge of the tub and put the other end inside so the little guy can use it as a ramp to climb up and out.
The next time you see a house centipede stuck in your bathtub, throw it a lifeline. (Don’t try to pick it up; they’re extremely fragile and fall apart at the slightest touch.) Just rest one end of a meter stick on the edge of the tub and put the other end inside so the little guy can use it as a ramp to climb up and out.
The incorrect sentence places the closing parenthesis to the left of the period ending the parenthetical sentence; if the parenthetical sentence were deleted along with the parentheses, the period would be stranded between sentences. Correcting this involves simply moving the period so it goes to the left of the closing parenthesis.
Don’t overuse parentheses, especially where parenthetical commas would be more appropriate. Recall that, according to Comma Rule 3.1, commas can surround parenthetical, non-essential words, phrases, and clauses added to explain immediately what came before. Whether you use commas or parentheses, the sentence must make grammatical sense without the interjected element. The problem with overusing parentheses, however, is that it clutters up your writing with distracting asides, so the less conspicuous comma is preferable in situations where a parenthetical element doesn’t need full parentheses.
Look to make sure that the parentheses you use can’t be replaced with commas without causing confusion. In other words, if the parenthetical element follows Comma Rule 3.1 and doesn’t involve other types of commas covered by the other rules, then use commas instead of parentheses.
At the same time, the market dropped a few thousand points (which wouldn’t have been so bad if it didn’t stay down for so long), so no one was buying anything.
At the same time, the market dropped a few thousand points, which wouldn’t have been so bad if it didn’t stay down for so long, so no one was buying anything.
The incorrect example above includes a restrictive relative clause beginning with which , which is a perfect example of a non-essential parenthetical clause that we saw being set off from the main clause in Comma Rule 3.1 above. In this case, commas would be better to use than parentheses.
Others argue that “text neck” is neither a true epidemic nor even a true ailment (Skwarecki, 2018) , just as “book neck” was never a condition that concerned anyone.
Why it’s correct: The parentheses mark off an APA-style in-text citation.
The parentheses tell the reader that the quotation, paraphrase, or summary came from the author or authors named within the parentheses. The reader can then consult the References section at the end of the document and easily find the full bibliographical reference for that source by searching out the same author last name in the alphabetical list of source authors. When citing multiple works by the same author, the year of publication in the citation allows the reader to distinguish between them.
Look to make sure that you use parentheses rather than brackets if your documentation style is APA or MLA. IEEE, on the other hand, does use brackets, albeit with a numerical citation rather than author and year.
“ Text neck” results from people straining their necks hunched over cellphones for several more hours per day, and thousands more per year, than they would if they were just reading books [Shoshany, 2015].
“Text neck” results from people straining their necks hunched over cellphones for several more hours per day, and thousands more per year, than they would if they were just reading books (Shoshany, 2015) .
The incorrect sentence above uses brackets rather than parentheses to mark off an in-text citation. Use parentheses for APA or MLA in-text citations.
For more on parentheses, see the following resources:
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Brackets Rule 1.1 | |
Brackets Rule 1.2 | (parentheses appropriate instead of brackets) |
Brackets Rule 2 | |
Brackets Rule 3 |
The president tweeted that “All of the phony T.V. commercials against [him were] bought and payed [ sic ] for by SPECIAL INTEREST GROUPS.”
Why it’s correct: The first brackets change the original “me are” to “him were” to be consistent with the third-person orientation and past-tense verb in the signal phrase. The bracketed “[ sic ]” indicates that the quotation’s spelling mistake was in the original source and intentionally kept rather than introduced by the writer when repeating the quotation.
The brackets indicate what changes the writer makes to a quotation, whether to lend clarity to the original wording or to make it grammatically consistent with the sentence around it. Doing so shows a concern for both quoting accurately and writing correctly. Sneaking in some changes to a quotation to suit your purposes is called misquoting. Sometimes the additions draw attention to errors in the original, such as corrections to the spelling or the use of “[ sic ],” short for the Latin sic erat scriptum (“thus was it written”), to preserve the author’s error.
Ensure that quotations are exact transcriptions of the original to avoid misquoting. If you find any intentional changes, surround them with brackets. Ensure also that any errors in the original quotation are preserved but identified with “[ sic ]” immediately following.
Apple’s 1997 slogan encourages you to “Think different” by using their computers for outside-the-box solutions.
Apple’s 1997 slogan encourages you to “Think different [ sic ]” by using their computers for outside-the-box solutions.
Apple’s 1997 slogan encourages you to “Think different[ly]” by using their computers for outside-the-box solutions.
The incorrect example above contains a quotation that is grammatically incorrect in its original form. Adding “[ sic ]” ensures the reader that the critical writer is well aware that, with “think” being a verb, “different” would have to be the adverb “differently” to be correct. Adding the -ly ending in brackets takes a more corrective approach to the error.
Ensure that the brackets you use don’t follow either of the parentheses rules explained in §5.3.5 above.
I know house centipedes [ scutigera coleoptrata ] are ugly, but I’m sure you would much rather have them in your home than the vermin they feed on.
The incorrect example above mistakenly uses brackets around the parenthetical Latin name of the insect identified just before by its common name. Following Parentheses Rule 1.1, however, you would just replace the brackets with parentheses.
Use brackets whenever you have parenthetical elements within a phrase or clause that is already surrounded by parentheses.
Though “text neck” is controversial (some argue that it was only ever a chiropractors’ marketing gimmick [Skwarecki, 2018] ), it makes sense that neck strain sustained for several hours daily harms our musculoskeletal health.
Why it’s correct: The brackets mark off an in-text citation within a parenthetical statement. If not within parentheses, the citation would be framed by parentheses instead of brackets.
Brackets help the reader keep track of nested parenthetical elements. Switching to brackets for parenthetical elements within parentheses also helps avoid the awkwardness of “double-chin” parentheses such as “)).”
Look to make sure that you don’t double up parentheses with “))” anywhere in your document.
The snake-oil rhetoric of Dr. Fishman’s website undermines the credibility of his “text neck” concept (with a chronic lack of proper citations for research supporting his claims (Fishman, 2018) ).
The snake-oil rhetoric of Dr. Fishman’s website undermines the credibility of his “text neck” concept (with a chronic lack of proper citations for research supporting his claims [Fishman, 2018] ).
In the incorrect sentence above, parentheses are used within parentheses. Simply replace the inner parentheses with brackets.
Physiopedia recommends holding up your mobile device so that it’s level with your eyes and avoiding “prolonged static postures” [4] .
Why it’s correct: The brackets mark off an IEEE-style numerical in-text citation.
The brackets tell the reader that the quotation, paraphrase, or summary came from the research source numbered within the brackets. The reader can then consult the References section at the back and easily find the full bibliographical reference for that source by the corresponding number.
Look to make sure that you use brackets rather than parentheses if your documentation style is IEEE, as opposed to APA or MLA, which use parentheses.
Shoshany argues that “Text neck” results from people straining their necks hunched over cellphones for several more hours per day, and thousands more per year, than they would if they were just reading books (5).
Shoshany argues that “Text neck” results from people straining their necks hunched over cellphones for several more hours per day, and thousands more per year, than they would if they were just reading books [5] .
In the incorrect example above, parentheses are used rather than brackets to mark off an in-text citation. The correct in-text citation style for IEEE is to use brackets instead.
For more on brackets, see the following resources:
Click on the rules below to see further explanations, examples, advice on what to look for when proofreading, and demonstrations of how to correct common quotation mark errors associated with each one.
Quotation Marks Rule 1.1 | ut the G-8320 form on the shared drive,” not in your personal Dropbox, “ o that it’s available to all the associates.” |
Quotation Marks Rule 1.2 | |
Quotation Marks Rule 1.3 | |
Quotation Marks Rule 1.4 | |
Quotation Marks Rule 1.5 | the closing quotation mark, not after. |
Quotation Marks Rule 1.6 | The Big Lebowski, |
Quotation Marks Rule 1.7 | the closing quotation mark if they’re part of the quotation and if they’re part of the sentence framing the quotation. |
Quotation Marks Rule 1.8 | (Problems of Journalism, 1966). |
Quotation Marks Rule 1.9 | (no quotation marks around the indirectly quoted speech) |
Quotation Marks Rule 2 | |
Quotation Marks Rule 3 | ). |
Quotation Marks Rule 4 | ) made me reflect on my own technology addiction. |
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Using hyphens between two or more words in combination helps the reader treat them as if they were one word when the words around them would create ambiguity without the hyphen(s). We do this especially with compound modifiers, which are two or more adjectives that modify the same noun in combination. For instance, if you said that there was funding available for small business owners, does that mean funding is only available for people who are under five feet tall? (In that case, “business owners” is read as a compound noun and “small” is the adjective modifying it.) If you mean that funding is available for business owners who employ fewer than 15 people, then you want to use the compound-modifier hyphen to pair up “small” and “business” so that they are read as if they were one adjective modifying the noun “owners”: small-business owners . Hyphens help the reader by guiding them toward what words to pair up when it could go either way.
The same is true of hyphens used in compound nouns. Saying, “It was a light year” means something completely different from “It was a light-year.” In the first case, you’re saying that nothing much happened that year; in the second, you’re saying that something spanned nearly 6 trillion miles. Hyphens matter!
The most common use of hyphens is for compound modifiers—that is, two or more adjectives that must be read in combination before a noun they describe. In fact, the hyphen you see between “compound” and “modifier” in the heading above exemplifies how this works: since both of those words together (and in that order only) modify the noun “hyphen” (“modify” meaning that they tell you what kind of hyphen it is), the hyphen helps the reader identify which words functions as modifiers and which as nouns, since “modifier” in this case behaves as an adjective rather than a noun. Without the hyphen, the reader might make the mistake of taking “modifier hyphen” as a compound noun, as in the case of “small business owners” above.
If you were to say that the USSR was the first second world country to de-communize, the combination “first second” would surely trip up the reader. But pairing “second” and “world” with a hyphen resolves the ambiguity to say “The USSR was the first second-world country to de-communize.”
Table 5.3.8.1a: Common First-term Nouns in Compound Modifiers
Noun | Examples | Not Following a Noun |
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or | feeding fish shelf liquor tier player | Those fish are . All your liquor is . The players we churn out are all . |
or | caliber bullet cost solution fidelity sound life criminal quality products resolution screen | Most of the bullets found were high . Let’s find a solution that’s . I want a sound that’s more high . He is a total . We ship products that are mostly . Don’t use pictures with . |
driven woman inflicted wound motivated boy taught pilot | She is very . We don’t treat wounds that are . He is not enough. I am totally . | |
known solution thought-out plan trained army written letter | The solution is very . My plan is very . We’re no match for an army so . Only send the letter if it is . |
Table 5.3.8.1b: Common Adverbs in Compound Modifiers
Noun | Examples | Not Following a Noun |
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or | moving process motion replay | The process is after that. Let’s review the goal in . |
chosen words known solution thought-out plan trained army written letter | Your words were all . The solution is very . My plan is very . We’re no match for an army so . Only send the letter if it is . |
Exception: Don’t add hyphens after adverbs ending in -ly .
Table 5.3.8.1c: Common Prefixes Making Compound Modifiers
Prefix | Examples | Not Following a Noun |
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inclusive resort powerful tech giant out offensive | Let’s just go to an . Google’s dominance has made it . We sent everyone so our offensive was . |
Table 5.3.8.1d: Common Middle-term Prepositions in Three-part Compound Modifiers
Preposition | Examples | Without a Noun Following |
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Stay home mom | You work and I’ll just . | |
case case basis six six rule | We’re just taking it case by case. Follow the rule called “six by six” | |
word word translation | Don’t copy . | |
Cost living index Out province funding | The is always rising. The funding came from . | |
one one game | Let’s play . | |
Back back classes business business retailer coast coast flight easy follow presentation up date calendar | My two classes today are . Our sales are B2B ( ). I’m flying tonight. Your presentation was very . My calendar is all . |
Table 5.3.8.1e: Common Three-part Compound-modifier Phrases
Examples | Without a Noun Following |
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affair | The affairs would all be long drawn out. |
happiness | I wish you happiness that is totally off the charts. |
training | All of the training will be done on the job. |
Table 5.3.8.1f: Common Foreign-phrase Compound Modifiers
Examples | Without a Noun Following |
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filmmaker | His latest film is more avant garde. |
capitalism | Our approach is fairly laissez faire. |
Don’t hyphenate more recently imported foreign phrases that are still italicized.
Table 5.3.8.1g: Common End-term Nouns in Compound Modifiers
Noun | Examples | Without a Noun Following |
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first cabin second citizen economy seating | I’m going first . They treated me like I was second . We bought economy . | |
first burns | I had burns in only the first . | |
Special groups | All of those groups are special . | |
Game athlete Job graduate | All of our kids are game . My training makes me fully job . | |
Large project | I’ve never done a project this large | |
full job half show part employment | She works full . Let’s talk about it at half . We work part on weekends. |
Table 5.3.8.1h: Common Past-participles Following Nouns
Past Participle | Examples | Not Following the Noun |
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evidence treatment faith reasoning | The treatment is evidence . The programming is all faith . | |
Able teenager | You’re able enough. | |
Snow mountains | The mountains are nicely snow . | |
double sword | That sword is double . | |
cross goofball | She went cross after a mule kick. | |
Two charlatan | That guy is so two . | |
garbage bins | Those bins are all garbage . | |
solution apology | The apology was solution . | |
Fleet deliverer | The delivery man is fleet . | |
Left writer Right stick Short goal | We want a writer who is left . Pass me a stick that’s right . The goal was short . | |
audience writing client response | The writing is more audience . Make it more client . | |
many issue eight dice | The issue is many . This die is eight . | |
Strong daughter | My daughter sure is . |
Table 5.3.8.1i: Common End-term Present-participle and Gerund Compound-modifier Adjectives
Present Participle | Examples | Not Following the Noun |
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child hips load walls | These hips are child . Don’t remove walls that are load . | |
never happiness | I hope your happiness is . | |
Tear performance | The performance was tear . | |
decision process | I’m good at decision . | |
profit plan | is a strong incentive. | |
problem skills | My best skill is . | |
Odd name | Their names are all . | |
English world French politician | Those areas are English . | |
Smooth sales rep | He was fairly smooth . | |
Gut scene | The scene was so gut . |
Table 5.3.8.1j: Common End-term Preposition Compound-modifier Adjectives
Preposition | Examples | Not Following the Noun |
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sought jobs | These jobs are highly sought . | |
drive shooting | Last night’s shooting was a drive . | |
Trickle economics | That wealth didn’t quite trickle . | |
All war | The war went after a year. | |
made names built neighborhood | Those names sound so made . The area is more built now. |
Table 5.3.8.1k: Common Number + Time-period Compound Modifiers
Duration | Examples | Not Following the Noun |
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Five trial period | The trial period lasts five . | |
Eleventh bid | The bid came in the eleventh . | |
25 presentation | The presentation lasted 25 . | |
Ten term | The term ends after ten . | |
Nine sprint | He finished in under ten . | |
32 co-op term | The co-op term is 32 . | |
Four degree program | An applied degree takes four . |
The second second-rate actor | The director wanted the second actor to be second rate. |
The film’s 15-week run shattered box-office records | The film shattered box-office records with its run of 15 weeks. |
Two-way street | That street goes two ways. |
After-tax income | Our income after taxes is laughable. |
Duty-free goods | |
First-come-first-served basis | |
Garbage-filled streets | |
Gut-wrenching scene | |
Large-scale development | |
Many-sided issue | |
Mountain-climbing enthusiast | |
Odd-sounding name | |
One-trick pony | This pony has only one trick. |
one-sentence paragraph | That paragraph only has one sentence. |
Out-of-state funding | We went out of state for our funding. |
Pay-as-you-go plan | We selected a plan that would have us pay as we go. |
Quick-witted lady | |
Short-handed goal | |
Smooth-talking salesman | |
Snow-capped mountains | |
Soon-to-be graduate | |
Strong-willed grandma | |
Two-faced charlatan | |
Tax-exempt services | |
Tear-jerking performance | |
Time-consuming activity | |
Trickle-down economics | Claiming that wealth will trickle down is irresponsible. |
User-friendly design | |
Would-be writer |
But some have become one word, like handwritten, handmade, and standalone.
Two-thirds majority | two thirds of the respondents |
Two-year-old child | The child is two years old. |
I’ve got ninety-nine problems, and grammar ain’t one. | Pass the puck to number ninety-nine. |
The 12- and 13-year-old kids | The kids are 12 and 13 years old. |
The well-known and -loved song | The song became well known and loved. |
How to treat first-, second-, and third-degree burns | The burns were first, second, and third degree. |
Funding for medium- to large-scale businesses | |
Scores in the six- to seven-point range |
Again, the use of a hyphen starting with “self-” (e.g., self-starter, self-esteem, self-care), starting with “great-” (e.g., great-grandmother, great-uncle), or ending with “-in-law” (e.g., mother-in-law, sister-in-law) and numbers above 20 (twenty-one, forty-three). If someone said that you have poor people skills, does that mean you have skill in dealing with poor people? By hyphenating “people-skills,” they make it clear that you could be better at dealing with people in general.
Table 5.3.8.2a: Common Compound Units of Measurement
Unit | Examples | Not Following a Noun |
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Kilowatt Work | I’ve racked up a few this winter. This project should take about 20 . | |
air | Do you collect ? | |
light | The next star is about _ away. |
Table 5.3.8.2b: Common Prefixes Making Compound Nouns
Prefix | Examples | Not Following a Noun |
---|---|---|
inclusive resort powerful tech giant out offensive | Let’s just go to an . Google’s dominance has made it . We sent everyone so our offensive was . | |
girlfriend parrot premier Harcourt | I haven’t talked to my girlfriend in ten years. That bird is dead. It is an parrot. The premier will be meeting with us today. | |
control loathing | I’m exercising some here. I follow up my dessert with a little . |
Table 5.3.8.2c: Common Three- or Four-term Compound Nouns
Compound Noun | Plural |
---|---|
forget-me | forget-me |
of-all-trades | of-all-trades |
in-law in-law | in-law in-law |
Ne’er-do | Ne’er-do |
in-the-mud | in-the-mud |
in-residence | in-residence |
Box-office | box-offices |
Fixer-upper | fixer-uppers |
Great-grandfather | Great-grandfathers |
Court-martial | courts-martial |
Vice-president | vice-presidents |
Tractor-trailer | tractor-trailers |
Singer-songwriter | singer-songwriters |
City-state | city-states |
A has-been | has-beens |
Sing-along | sing-alongs |
Some words have become one word like headache, checkout, checkbook, uproar, downpour, input, sunrise, clearinghouse, bookkeeper, housekeeper, sightseeing, shipbuilding, cabinetmaker, blackboard, redhead, workplace, and even email (learn more about How to Hyphenate a Compound Noun ).
Usually pairing a noun with a verb, but some are now combined into one word.
With Hyphens | One-word Compounds | Two Words (Verb + Preposition) |
---|---|---|
to air-condition to baby-sit to color-code to copy-edit to double-check to double-click to dry-clean to Google-search to hand-wash to ice-skate to proof-edit to reverse-engineer to second-guess to spot-check to test-drive to window-shop | to downgrade to ghostwrite to handpick to handwrite to multitask to proofread to shortchange to troubleshoot to waterproof to whitewash | to check out to log in to step up |
Source: Grammar Usage – Compound Verbs (Jamieson, 2010)
For more on hyphens, see the following resources:
For more on long dashes, see the following resources:
Question marks obviously follow questions. However, if the question is a polite request for action rather than one where a Yes or No answer is expected—i.e., a rhetorical question—end the sentence with a period rather than a question mark (Jamieson, 2014) .
For more on question marks, see the following resources:
For more on exclamation marks, which should be used sparingly, see the following resources:
For more on periods, see the following resources:
2. Take any writing assignment you’ve previously submitted for another course, ideally one that you did some time ago, perhaps even in high school. Scan for the punctuation errors covered in this section now that you know what to look for. How often do such errors appear? Correct them following the suggestions given above.
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Penn, J. (2011d, December 25). Semicolon. The Punctuation Guide . Retrieved from http://www.thepunctuationguide.com/semicolon.html
Penn, J. (2011e, December 25). Parentheses. The Punctuation Guide . Retrieved from http://www.thepunctuationguide.com/parentheses.html
Penn, J. (2011f, December 16). Brackets. The Punctuation Guide . Retrieved from http://www.thepunctuationguide.com/brackets.html
Penn, J. (2011g, December 16). Hyphens. The Punctuation Guide . Retrieved from http://www.thepunctuationguide.com/hyphen.html
Penn, J. (2011h, December 16). Hyphen and dashes. The Punctuation Guide . Retrieved from http://www.thepunctuationguide.com/hyphen-and-dashes.html
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Simmons, R. L. (2001b, February 1). The appositive. Grammar Bytes! Retrieved from http://www.chompchomp.com/terms/appositive.htm
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Simmons, R. L. (2007b, November 24). The conjunctive adverb. Grammar Bytes! Retrieved from http://www.chompchomp.com/terms/conjunctiveadverb.htm
Simmons, R. L. (2008, January 24). The intransitive verb. Grammar Bytes! Retrieved from http://www.chompchomp.com/terms/intransitiveverb.htm
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Straus, J. (2014b, June 5). Semicolons. The Grammar Book . Retrieved from https://www.grammarbook.com/punctuation/semicolons.asp
Straus, J. (2014c, June 5). Parentheses and brackets. The Grammar Book . Retrieved from https://www.grammarbook.com/punctuation/parens.asp
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With the help of technology such as spellcheck features in Microsoft Word and online apps, as well as auto-correct and -complete on mobile devices, we can be better spellers than ever. We also must be better spellers than ever because, assuming we’re making full use of these technological aides, audience expectations demand impeccable, error-free spelling. At the same time, the secondary school system has for decades relaxed its teaching of writing basics such that many students enter the post-secondary system lacking basic writing skills (“University Students Can’t Spell,” 2010) . Between high school and the professional world, college students must not only quickly learn these basics, such as not confusing its and it’s , but also develop the attitude that such details matter.
Using technology close at hand to improve your spelling is crucial to helping you get there. Follow the procedure in §5.1.4.8 above (and shown in Figure 5.1.4.8; click on the thumbnail above-right to return to it) to set up your spellchecker in Microsoft Word so that it identifies errors as you go. Though it’s a good idea to draft quickly and leave the pace-killing attention to detail for the editing stage, you can look up spellings for words that you struggle with as you go by just highlighting them, going to the Review tool ribbon, and clicking on the Spelling & Grammar tool at the far left (or Alt + R, S). The feature will activate to suggest the correct spelling of just that word. Always also run a spellcheck sweep of your entire document by scrolling up to the top of your document and, without anything highlighted, following the same procedure to activate the spellchecker to examine each error and the tool’s suggested corrections before you finalize your document for submission.
What about spellchecking when writing outside of your word processor, such as in an email? For this you must ensure that your internet browser spellchecker is on and properly set up. In Google Chrome, for instance, you would just:
With the spellchecker turned on, your browser will identify misspelled words by red-underlining them. If you have any additional difficulties, you can also move text to your word processor, use its more advanced spellchecker and editing features, then copy and paste your draft back into the email.
As good as the spellcheckers can be if you set them up properly, you must also know what to look for on your own so that you know what to approve when the spellchecker suggests edits. We’ll divide this self-editing skill into two of the biggest challenges to spellcheckers:
5.4.2: spelling homophones.
How do you feel when someone misspells your name? If you’re like most people, you feel a little insulted, especially if the offending person had easy access to the correct spelling. Spelling people’s names correctly is not only an essential principle of netiquette but also key to maintaining your credibility in correspondence. If you’re addressing a hiring manager in the cover letter to a job application, for instance, and her first name happens to be one of the 155 unique spelling variants of the name Caitlin (Burch, 2001) , your livelihood depends on spelling her name just as she does herself. Otherwise, your lack of attention to detail becomes an invitation for her to deposit your application directly in the shredder.
Be especially vigilant with names during the proofreading stage of the writing process and use technology to help. With naming trends in the last couple of decades tending toward unique spellings both for people and products, spellcheckers may be of little help at first. Your best bet is to carefully confirm the name of the person in question by finding multiple sources that confirm their name (e.g., documents at hand, as well as their LinkedIn profile online), or the name of the product by consulting the company website, and add it to your spellchecker. When your spellchecker is doing an active sweep and grapples with the unfamiliar name, click on the “Add to Dictionary” option. That way, you can teach your spellchecker to be vigilant for you.
Many spelling errors involve homophones , words that sound the same in speech but are spelled and used differently in writing. When you mean there but write their or they’re in your draft, a sophisticated grammar and spellchecker will mark it as an error because it’s incorrect in the context of the words around it despite being spelled correctly on its own. Just in case your checker is fooled by it, however, familiarizing yourself with the most common homophone-driven spelling errors is wise. Ensure at the proofreading stage that your writing hasn’t fallen into any of these traps.
Table 5.4.2: Common Homophone Misspellings
Misspelling | Correct Spelling | When You Mean to Say |
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ad | add | to put together |
add | ad | advertisement |
advice | advise | to guide (verb) |
advise | advice | guidance (noun) |
air | heir | successor |
already | all ready | everyone is ready |
all ready | already | previous |
altar | alter | change |
alter | altar | church object |
ant | aunt | mother’s sister |
are | our | belongs to us |
aunt | ant | insect |
bare | bear | animal |
bear | bare | naked |
beat | beet | vegetable |
beet | beat | assault |
been | bin | box |
bin | been | past participle of |
cite | sight / site | vision / place |
complement | compliment | flatter |
compliment | complement | matches or pairs well |
could of | could have | maybe |
council | counsel | advise |
counsel | council | decision-making group |
cue | queue | lineup |
dear | deer | animal |
deer | dear | greetings |
defiantly | definitely | for sure |
desert | dessert | after-dinner treat |
dessert | desert | leave |
ensure | insure | take out insurance |
fair | fare | cost of transportation |
fare | fair | honest / light / carnival |
hear | here | this place |
heir | air | oxygen |
here | hear | listen |
hole | whole | entire |
holy | wholly | entirely |
hour | our | belongs to us |
insure | ensure | make sure |
its | it’s | it is |
it’s | its | belonging to it |
knew | new | just arrived |
lead | led | guided |
led | lead | in front / heavy metal |
male | man | |
male | letter sent by post | |
manner | manor | mansion |
manor | manner | way |
missed | mist | fog |
mist | missed | didn’t get it |
new | knew | knowledge of |
our | hour / are | 60 minutes / form of |
pair | pare / pear | peel / fruit |
pare | pair / pear | couple / fruit |
peace | piece | part |
pear | pair / pare | couple / peel |
piece | peace | calm |
plane | plain | simple |
plain | plane | flat surface, airplane |
principal | principle | rule, concept |
principle | principal | main, one in authority |
queue | cue | prompt |
sail | sale | being sold |
sale | sail | wind-catching boat sheet |
seam | seem | appear to be |
seem | seam | joining line in a garment |
should of | should have | ought to |
sight | cite / site | credit a source / place |
site | cite / sight | credit a source / vision |
steal | steel | metal |
steel | steal | rob |
storey | story | tale |
story | storey | floor of a building |
tail | tale | story |
tale | tail | animal appendage |
their | there / they’re | that place / they are |
there | their / they’re | belongs to them / they are |
they’re | their / there | belongs to them / that place |
through | threw | tossed |
threw | through | passed |
to | too / two | also / 2 |
toe | tow | drag |
too | to / two | toward / 2 |
tow (the line) | toe (the line) | foot digit (conform) |
two | to / too | toward / also |
ware | wear / where | put on clothes / what place |
weather | whether | if |
weak | week | 7 days |
wear | ware / where | pottery / what place |
week | weak | not strong |
whether | weather | climate |
where | wear / ware | put on clothes / pottery |
whole | hole | opening |
wholly | holy | sacred |
whose | who’s | who is |
who’s | whose | belongs to who |
would of | would have | didn’t get to do |
your | you’re | you are |
you’re | your | belongs to you |
For more on this topic, see Homophones (Singularis, 2013).
Burch, N. (2001, February 1). You say Caitlin, I say Katelynne… Irish Names from Ancient to Modern . Retrieved from http://www.namenerds.com/irish/Katelyn.html
Singularis. (2013, July 28). Homophones. Retrieved from http://www.singularis.ltd.uk/bifroest/misc/homophones-list.html
“University students can’t spell.” (2010, February 1). Maclean’s . Retrieved from: http://www.macleans.ca/education/uniandcollege/university-students-cant-spell/
The very last target for proofreading as you finalize your draft for submission is mechanics. In English writing, mechanics relates to typographic style such as the choice between UPPERCASE and lowercase letters, italics or boldface type and plain style, as well as using figures (e.g., 1, 2, 3) or written out numbers (e.g., one , two , three ). Professionals follow stylistic conventions for mechanics much like they do punctuation rules. If you don’t know these conventions, making them up as you go along may produce unprofessional-looking documents. Consider the following as your guide for how to get your writing mechanics right.
5.5.2: italicizing, underlining, and bolding, 5.5.3: numbering.
One of the worst mistakes you can make in a high-priority document like a cover letter is a glaring capitalization error such as not capitalizing the first letter in a sentence or writing “im” or “ive” instead of “I am” or “I have.” These errors are fine when texting your friends. To a hiring manager, however, the red flags they raise concerning the literacy, work ethic, and even maturity of the applicant might land that application in the shredder. At the other typographic extreme, those who use all-caps for anything other than abbreviations, as in “SEND ME THAT REPORT RIGHT NOW,” look emotionally unstable. In normal writing, we use conventional combinations of capitals and lowercase letters meaningfully to guide our readers through our sentences. Let’s take a closer look at when to capitalize and when not to capitalize letters.
5.5.1.2: what not to capitalize, 5.5.1.3: abbreviations.
You can’t go wrong if you capitalize in the following situations:
Table 5.5.1.1: Proper Nouns
Proper Noun Type | Examples |
---|---|
People and professional roles or familial relations preceding the name | Prime Minister Justin Trudeau, Roberta Bondar, Professor Patrick Grant, Mayor Humdinger, Ludwig van Beethoven, Aunt Pam, God, Buddha |
Adjectives derived from names | Shakespearean sonnet, Freudian slip |
Major buildings and infrastructure | CN Tower, the Queensway, the Hoover Dam |
Specific geographical locations and regions | Ottawa, British Columbia, the Canadian Rockies, Lake Ontario, the West Coast, Eastern Canada, the Maritimes, South Asia, the Netherlands |
Celestial bodies | Venus, Earth, Mars, the Sun, the Kuiper Belt, the Milky Way, the Virgo Supercluster |
Books, films, etc. (see below) | the |
Days of the week, months, holidays | Monday, November, Labor Day, Groundhog Day, Ramadan, Hanukkah, Fall 2019 semester |
Historical events and periods | the Battle of Vimy Ridge, the Cold War, the Renaissance, the Old Kingdom, Anthropocene, the Big Bang |
Ethnicities, nationalities, religions, and languages | Anishinaabe, Australian, English, Russian, Malaysian, Catholic, Islam, Sunni Muslim, Swedish, Swahili |
Institutions, political and cultural groups | Algonquin College, University of Toronto, the Supreme Court, New Democrats, Montreal Canadiens, Oscar Peterson Trio |
Academic courses, programs, departments, and some degrees | Statistics 101, Communications I, Game Development Advanced Diploma Program, School of Business, PhD, MBA |
Numbered or lettered items | Flight AC2403, Gate 11, Invoice No. 3492B, Serial No. D8834-2946-1212, Rural Road 34, Figure 8, Volume 2, Part 4, Model 3 |
Brand names, corporations, and stores | Microsoft Word, Samsung Galaxy, Tesla, Apple, Google, GlaxoSmithKline, Mountain Equipment Co-op |
Don’t capitalize the following:
Pay close attention to the beginning of sentences, each point in a list, titles, and proper nouns. Determine whether you should capitalize or leave letters lowercase depending on the conventions given above.
Incorrect: l et’s go S outh to visit the P resident and stay with v ice p resident Frito.
The fix: L et’s go s outh to visit the p resident and stay with V ice P resident Frito.
The fix: L et’s go s outh to visit P resident Comacho and stay with Frito, his v ice p resident.
In the drafting process, you might delete the original capitalized opening to a sentence while trying out another style of sentence and forget to capitalize the new beginning. The proofreading stage is when you can catch glaring errors such as this. Also, the convention for geography is to capitalize directions only if they’re part of place names but not when they’re mere compass directions. Finally, capitalize professional titles only when they precede a name.
Incorrect: In addition, im proficient in the use of Microsoft o ffice, such as Power p oint.
The fix: In addition, I am proficient in the use of Microsoft O ffice, such as Power P oint.
Texting habits might die hard. A crucial step in professionalizing yourself, however, is to correct informal spellings such as im so that they are the more correct I’m or more formal I am , especially in job application documents. Also, be especially careful with capitalization around proprietary names such as software, which may include internal capitalization as we see in Power P oint or You T ube .
Incorrect: I had to read the textbook Communication A t Work for my Algonquin c ollege c ommunications course in the a ccounting program.
The fix: I had to read the textbook Communication a t Work for my Algonquin C ollege C ommunications course in the A ccounting program.
The titling convention is to capitalize major words but not short prepositions such as at . Since academic courses, institutions, and programs are proper nouns like the names of people, capitalize them all.
Fully spell out abbreviations the first time you mention them and put the abbreviation in parentheses. For example, if you were to say, “The Public Health Agency of Canada (PHAC) is reporting an above-average number of flue deaths this year,” subsequent mentions of the agency can appear as simply “PHAC.” Institutions that are so common as names (proper nouns) in their abbreviated form (e.g., CBC, which stands for the “Canadian Broadcasting Corporation”) can be given as abbreviations unless introduced to an audience that wouldn’t know them. As you can see here, avoid adding periods after each uppercase letter in an abbreviation.
For more on capitalization, see The Grammar Book ’s Capitalization Rules page (Straus, 2014).
The standard typeface options of italics , bold , and underline allow writers to draw attention to their text in varying degrees. Each has its advantages and disadvantages. The biggest disadvantage comes from overuse, which diminishes their impact. Taking advantage of their ability to draw the reader’s eye and communicate information beyond the words they express requires following certain conventional uses for each. We’ll start with the most meaningful in terms of the information it can convey.
As the typeface option that slants the top of each letter to the right, italic typeface performs several possible functions related to emphasizing words. Italics can also resolve ambiguities that would cause confusion without it. Use italics for the following purposes:
Table 5.5.2.1: Italicized Titles
Type of Work | Examples |
---|---|
Book, legislation | |
Magazine | |
Newspaper | |
Website (APA) | |
Film | |
TV show | |
Play, long poem | |
Album, opera | Drake’s , Arcade Fire’s , Alanis Morissette’s , Mozart’s |
Works of art | |
Video game | |
Ships, airplanes | the |
Legal cases |
When words are already italicized, such as a sentence under discussion or a book title within a book title, then de-italicize the title back into plain style (e.g., Vision in Shakespeare’s King Lear). Exceptions to the rule of italicizing books are holy texts such as the Bible and Koran, though specific editions should be italicized (e.g., The New American Standard Bible ).
Underlining is normally an old-fashioned alternative to italicizing because it identified titles written on typewriters before modern word processors made italicization feasible. Today, underlining is mainly used to emphasize words within italicized titles or as an alternative to boldface type.
More than any other typeface, bold is best at emphasizing words because it draws the reader’s eyes more effectively than italics or underlining, especially for document titles and section headings. In casual emails, you can also use it to highlight a main action point that’s surrounded by plain-style text to ensure that the reader doesn’t miss it. Avoid bolding, underlining, italicizing, and using all-caps in combination merely to lend added emphasis to words. Use whichever one is most appropriate in context.
For more on italics, underlining, and bolding, see the following resources:
When do you spell out a number (e.g., ten ) and when do you use a figure (e.g., 10 )? What are the conventions for academic and professional situations? It depends on your purposes, but in routine formal situations and in APA style, spell out numbers from one to ten and use figures for 11 and up. In MLA, spell out any number if it’s only a word or two, but use figures for numbers that require three or more words (Becker, 2014) . In informal and technical writing, however, using only figures ensures accuracy, consistency, and brevity. Let’s look at the formal APA conventions in more detail in Table 5.4.3.
Table 5.5.3: Formal Numbering Conventions
Convention | Examples |
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only person, reasons | |
people, cars, hours, lbs. $ , liters, voters, miles per second. | |
a people, a times, dollars, $ , $ , $ , $ , You have a microbes in your body. | |
over of respondents, of a second, a share of the profit, 3/32 allen key, 1 and 21/64 inches | |
increase ( , increase , seconds, cm, g | |
of respondents agreed while 71% disagreed. | |
; from the of July to the ; AD ; from ; in the season; the , , ’ | |
a.m., noon, p.m., p.m., a.m., a.m.– p.m. (or …PM) | |
Street, Street, Avenue, Avenue W, East Street | |
613-555-4450 ext. 9832, 250.555.7204, (416) 555-1185 | |
Room , Channel , Hwy. , Elizabeth , Henry | |
Andre weighed over by age 12 and over . by 40. The room is by in a sq. ft. house., , | |
Little Nicky was years and months when his family moved. By the time she was , Miranda had accomplished plenty. Miranda, , has accomplished plenty. | |
page / ( ), pages / (pp. ), (pp. ), chapter 11 / (ch. 11), chapters 11-12 (chs. 11-12) | |
The stated amount of will be paid no less than weeks after the completion of the contact work. | |
(all under 10) | We bought shirts, pairs of pants, and jackets. |
(any 10+) | We bought apples, bananas, and pineapples. |
They ordered . weights. We observed explosions. I manufactured parts for Dynamo, Inc. |
Determine whether you should replace your spelled-out numbers with figures or vice versa according to the conventions given above.
Incorrect: Only 2 people showed up.
The fix: Only two people showed up.
In formal writing, spell out one- or two-word numbers rather than use figures lazily. However, feel free to use figures, no matter how small the number, in informal writing where concision matters most.
Incorrect: She was charged nine-hundred-and-thirty-six dollars and ninety-eight cents for the repair.
The fix: She was charged $936.98 for the repair.
Incorrect: The chances of life existing on other planets are quite high if there are, by extrapolation, roughly 1 9,000,000,000,000,000,000,000 star systems with earth-like planets in the universe (Frost, 2017) .
The fix: The chances of life existing on other planets are quite high if there are, by extrapolation, roughly 19 billion trillion star systems with earth-like planets in the universe (Frost, 2017) .
Incorrect: 23,000 units were sold in the first quarter.
Incorrect: Twenty-three thousand units were sold in the first quarter.
The fix: In the first quarter, 23,000 units were sold.
Though you should use a figure to represent a number above ten and spell out a number appearing at the beginning of a sentence, re-word the sentence if that number is more than two words.
Incorrect: We’ve moved the meeting to 05/04/18 .
The fix: We’ve moved the meeting from Tuesday, April 2, to Friday, April 5, 2018.
The fix: We’ve moved the meeting from Tuesday the 2nd of April to Friday the 5th, 2018.
Though the above correction sacrifices brevity, the gains in clarity can potentially prevent expensive miscommunication. The correction prevents the message recipients from misinterpreting the new meeting date as being May 4th and helps them pinpoint which date in their calendars to click and drag the original meeting from. Providing the days of the week also helps the recipients determine at a glance whether the new date conflicts with regularly scheduled weekly appointments.
Incorrect: Let’s meet at number ninety, 6th Avenue, at fourteen o’clock .
The fix: Let’s meet at 90 Sixth Avenue at 2 p.m.
Though “ninety” would be correct in some contexts (MLA style) because it is a one-word number, APA address conventions require you to use figures for address numbers and to spell out numerical street/avenue numbers from first to tenth, then to use figures from 11th onward. Also, the English convention for representing time of day is to use the twelve-hour clock, whereas the French convention is to use the twenty-four-hour clock.
Incorrect: Will you still need me, will you still feed me when I’m 64 ?
The fix: Will you still need me, will you still feed me when I’m sixty-four ?
Unless the age follows a person’s name as an appositive (e.g., Paul, 64, is losing his hair ) or is part of a series that identifies several ages (e.g., a program for those of 4 to 6 years of age, with some 7-year-olds ) or combines one person’s age in years and months, spell out ages up to one hundred.
Incorrect: The one expedition cataloged thirty-four new types of spiders, 662 new types of beetles, and 178 new types of ants.
The fix: The one expedition cataloged 34 new types of spiders, 662 new types of beetles, and 178 new types of ants.
Though normally you would spell out two-word numbers, maintaining consistency with the related numbers in the series, which are figures here because they are over ten, takes precedence.
Incorrect: The program has 2 streams, one for the 4 -year-olds and another for the 5 -year-olds.
The fix: The program has two streams, one for the 4 -year-olds and another for the 5 -year-olds.
This looks at first as if all three of these are related numbers in a series and therefore must all be figures. The related-numbers convention applies to only the last two numbers (ages), however, whereas the first number is not an age, hence not part of the series. Since the first number can be spelled out as one word, two , it is not given as a figure.
Incorrect: If your gym orders more than 20 100-lb. weights, you’ll get every additional unit for half price.
The fix: If your gym orders more than twenty 100-lb. weights, you’ll get every additional unit for half price.
To avoid “20 100-lb.” being misread as “20100-lb.,” bend the rule about using figures for numbers above ten to spell out the first of the consecutive numbers and use a figure for the second since it’s a weight. (If the first number were more than two words spelled out and the weight only one, however, “150 thirty-pound weights” would be preferable.)
For more on numbers, see APA Style’s Comparing MLA and APA: Numbers (Becker, 2014).
2. Take any writing assignment you’ve previously submitted for another course, ideally one that you did some time ago, perhaps even in high school. Scan for the mechanical errors covered in this section now that you know what to look for. How often do such errors appear? Correct them following the suggestions given above.
Becker, D. (2014, June 26). Comparing MLA and APA: Numbers. APA Style . Retrieved from http://blog.apastyle.org/apastyle/2014/06/comparing-mla-and-apa-numbers.html
Butterick, M. (2013, July 24). Bold or italic. Butterick’s Practical Typography . Retrieved from https://practicaltypography.com/bold-or-italic.html
Frost, R. (2017, November 15). The number of Earth-like planets in the universe is staggering—here’s the math. Forbes . Retrieved from https://www.forbes.com/sites/quora/2017/11/15/the-number-of-earth-like-planets-in-the-universe-is-staggering-heres-the-math/#5db6267f4932
Morgan, M. (2015, May 23). How to use italics. WikiHow . Retrieved from https://www.wikihow.com/Use-Italics
Straus, J. (2015, June 5). Capitalization rules. The Grammar Book . Retrieved from https://www.grammarbook.com/punctuation/capital.asp
Twain, M. (1889). The innocents abroad, or The new pilgrims’ progress . Vol. II. Leipzig: Bernhard Tauchnitz. Retrieved from https://play.google.com/store/books/details?id=f4EwNleAjJAC&rdid=book-f4EwNleAjJAC&rdot=1
Your Dictionary. (2009, September 3). When to italicize. Retrieved from http://grammar.yourdictionary.com/punctuation/when/when-to-italicize.html
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Professional communication in today's fast-paced digital world still relies heavily on email. Writing persuasive business emails is a necessary talent for everyone, whether they are seasoned executive, aspiring business owners, or team members in any capacity. It's your digital handshake, a chance to leave a lasting impression, and a clear route to reaching your career objectives.
We'll go into the tactics, methods, and best practices in this extensive guide to help you create business emails that are not just successful but genuinely outstanding. Together, we can make the most of your inbox's potential and turn your emails into effective instruments for career advancement.
Understanding your audience and purpose.
Give your audience and the goal of your message some thought before you even start writing an email.
Who is the intended reader of your writing? A prospective investor, a client, or a coworker? Your vocabulary, tone, and formality choice will change according to who you are speaking to.
Goals: What are you hoping to accomplish with this email? Are you exchanging details, asking for something to be done, establishing a rapport, or settling a dispute? Your message's content and structure will be determined by its aim.
Your email will be more effective and resonate with the receiver if you clearly understand your audience and purpose.
The subject line serves as the headline for your email because it is the first thing the recipient sees and frequently influences whether or not they open the message.
In case it applies, urgency: Put "Important Request for Proposal Review" or something similar in the subject line of your email if it needs to be responded to right away. However, to create an effective subject line that conveys urgency without being flagged as spam, focus on being clear and specific while avoiding trigger words.
Effective communication can be established, and a well-written subject line can greatly increase your email open rate.
The importance of a strong opening sentence .
Your first sentence establishes the tone of the entire email. It should immediately draw the reader in and set the scene for your message.
Rather than starting an email with "I hope this finds you well," for instance, use something like "I'm writing to follow up on our conversation regarding the marketing proposal" or "I have some exciting news to share about our upcoming product launch."
Most of your message should be delivered in the body of your email. Remember these guidelines:
Every business email should have an obvious call to action (CTA). After reading your email, let the receiver know what you want them to do.
Your email's chances of receiving the intended response rise when you close with a strong call to action.
Maintaining professionalism in your communication .
In business email writing, professionalism is crucial. It is respectful, fosters trust, and presents a favourable image of you and your company.
Maintaining confidentiality requires being aware of sensitive material and only sending it over email when needed.
Infusing your emails with warmth and personality is crucial without sacrificing professionalism.
You can ensure your business emails are polished, effective, and professional by following these etiquette principles and avoiding common errors.
Proofreading and editing for error-free emails.
Email mistakes of any size can damage your reputation and professionalism.
Extensive editing and proofreading guarantee that your emails are flawless and devoid of errors, making a good first impression on your recipients.
Most email marketing solutions have analytics capabilities that let you see how well your emails are doing.
By examining these indicators, you can improve the effectiveness of your email campaigns over time by identifying what is and is not working.
There are several uses for business emails, each calling for a different strategy and format. You can more successfully adapt your communications if you are aware of these subtleties.
Formal Emails: Requests for Information, Offers, and Follow-Ups
Structure for Informal Emails:
Structure for Sales and Marketing Emails:
Understanding the particular needs of various business email formats will help you modify your emails' structure and writing style to get the desired results.
Enhance your business email writing with practical tools and resources to increase productivity, enhance communication quality, and encourage creativity.
With the help of these tools, you can ensure that your emails are polished and error-free by identifying those annoying mistakes that even the most careful writers occasionally overlook.
In addition to saving you time and effort, templates and samples can serve as a starting point for creating emails that follow best practices.
You can improve the effectiveness of your business email writing process, the calibre of your correspondence, and your chances of success in
We've covered all the bases in this extensive guide to writing successful business emails. Let's review the main conclusions:
Writing business emails requires effort and patience to get down pat. Feel free to try out various methods and strategies. Ask mentors or coworkers for their opinions. Learn new things constantly, and adjust your approach to suit your desired outcomes.
Remember that efficient email communication is a strong instrument that can lead to success in your professional life by creating connections, opening doors, and building rapport. You can turn your emails into useful resources that support your aims by using the guidelines in this article.
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Learning objective.
You are invited to a business dinner at an expensive restaurant that has been the top-rated dining establishment in your town for decades. You are aware of the restaurant’s dress code, which forbids casual attire such as jeans, T-shirts, and sneakers. What will you wear? If you want to fit in with the other guests and make a favorable impression on your hosts, you will choose a good quality suit or dress (and appropriately dressy shoes and accessories). You will avoid calling undue attention to yourself with clothing that is overly formal—an evening gown or a tuxedo, for example—or that would distract from the business purpose of the occasion by being overly revealing or provocative. You may feel that your freedom to express yourself by dressing as you please is being restricted, or you may appreciate the opportunity to look your best. Either way, adhering to these style conventions will serve you well in a business context.
Your writing style reflects on you when you are not there to represent yourself. Make sure your style is professional.
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The same is true in business writing. Unlike some other kinds of writing such as poetry or fiction, business writing is not an opportunity for self-expression. Instead it calls for a fairly conservative and unadorned style. Writing style , also known as voice or tone, is the manner in which a writer addresses the reader. It involves qualities of writing such as vocabulary and figures of speech, phrasing, rhythm, sentence structure, and paragraph length. Developing an appropriate business writing style will reflect well on you and increase your success in any career.
There was a time when many business documents were written in third person to give them the impression of objectivity. This formal style was often passive and wordy. Today it has given way to active, clear, concise writing, sometimes known as “Plain English” (Bailey, 2008). As business and industry increasingly trade across borders and languages, writing techniques that obscure meaning or impede understanding can cause serious problems. Efficient writing styles have become the norm. Still, you will experience in your own writing efforts this “old school versus new school” writing debate over abbreviations, contractions, and the use of informal language in what was once considered a formal business context. Consider the following comparison of informal versus formal and bureaucratic styles.
Bureaucratic: Attached is the latest delivery data represented in topographical forms pursuant to the directive ABC123 of the air transportation guide supplied by the Federal Aviation Administration in September of 2008.
While it is generally agreed that bureaucratic forms can obscure meaning, there is a debate on the use of formal versus informal styles in business communication. Formal styles often require more detail, adhere to rules of etiquette, and avoid shortcuts like contractions and folksy expressions. Informal styles reflect everyday speech patterns and may include contractions and colloquial expressions. Many managers prefer not to see contractions in a formal business context. Others will point out that a comma preceding the last item in a series (known as the “serial comma”) is the standard, not the exception. Some will make a general recommendation that you should always “keep it professional.” Here lies the heart of the debate: what is professional writing in a business context? If you answered “it depends,” you are correct.
Keep in mind that audiences have expectations and your job is to meet them. Some business audiences prefer a fairly formal tone. If you include contractions or use a style that is too casual, you may lose their interest and attention; you may also give them a negative impression of your level of expertise. If, however, you are writing for an audience that expects informal language, you may lose their interest and attention by writing too formally; your writing may also come across as arrogant or pompous. It is not that one style is better than the other, but simply that styles of writing vary across a range of options. Business writing may need to meet legal standards and include references, as we see in the bureaucratic example above, but that is generally not the norm for communications within an organization. The skilled business writer will know his or her audience and will adapt the message to best facilitate communication. Choosing the right style can make a significant impact on how your writing is received.
You may hear reference to a conversational tone in writing as one option in business communication. A conversational tone , as the name implies, resembles oral communication in style, tone, and word choice. It can be appropriate for some audiences, and may serve you well in specific contexts, but it can easily come across as less than professional.
If you use expressions that imply a relationship or a special awareness of information such as “you know,” or “as we discussed,” without explaining the necessary background, your writing may be seen as overly familiar, intimate, or even secretive. Trust is the foundation for all communication interactions and a careless word or phrase can impair trust.
If you want to use humor, think carefully about how your audience will interpret it. Humor is a fragile form of communication that requires an awareness of irony, of juxtaposition, or a shared sense of attitudes, beliefs, and values. Different people find humor in different situations, and what is funny to one person may be dull, or even hurtful, to someone else.
Although there are business situations such as an interview or a performance self-evaluation where you need to state your accomplishments, in general business writing it is best to avoid self-referential comments that allude to your previous successes. These can come across as selfish or arrogant. Instead, be generous in giving credit where credit is due. Take every opportunity to thank your colleagues for their efforts and to acknowledge those who contributed good ideas.
Jargon is a vocabulary that has been developed by people in a particular group, discipline, or industry, and it can be a useful shorthand as long as the audience knows its meaning. For example, when writing for bank customers, you could refer to “ATM transactions” and feel confident that your readers would know what you meant. It would be unnecessary and inappropriate to write “Automated Teller Machine transactions.” Similarly, if you were working in a hospital, you would probably use many medical terms in your interactions with other medical professionals. However, if you were a hospital employee writing to a patient, using medical jargon would be inappropriate, as it would not contribute to the patient’s understanding.
Sewing, like many other fields of expertise, has its own jargon.
plaisanter~ – Sewing – CC BY-SA 2.0.
Finally, in a business context, remember that conversational style is not an excuse to use poor grammar, disrespectful or offensive slang, or profanity. Communication serves as the bridge between minds and your written words will represent you in your absence. One strategy when trying to use a conversation tone is to ask yourself, “Would I say it in this way to their face?” A follow-up question to consider is, “Would I say it in this way in front of everyone?” Your professional use of language is one the hallmark skills in business, and the degree to which you master its use will reflect itself in your success. Take care, take time, and make sure what you write communicates a professional tone that positively represents you and your organization.
Sometimes the first sentence is the hardest to write. When you know the two main opening strategies it may not make it any easier, but it will give a plan and form a framework. Business documents often incorporate one of two opening strategies regardless of their organizational pattern. The direct pattern states the main purpose directly, at the beginning, and leaves little room for misinterpretation. The indirect pattern, where you introduce your main idea after the opening paragraph, can be useful if you need a strong opening to get the attention of what you perceive may be an uninterested audience. Normally, if you expect a positive response from the reader you will choose a direct opening, being clear from the first sentence about your purpose and goal. If you do not expect a positive reception, or have to deliver bad news, you may want to be less direct. Each style has its purpose and use; the skilled business writer will learn to be direct and be able to present bad news with a positive opening paragraph.
There are times when you will want to add emphasis to a word, phrase, or statistic so that it stands out from the surrounding text. The use of visual aids in your writing can be an excellent option, and can reinforce the written discussion. For example, if you write that sales are up 4 percent over this time last year, the number alone may not get the attention it deserves. If, however, near the text section you feature a bar graph demonstrating the sales growth figures, the representation of the information in textual and graphical way may reinforce its importance.
As you look across the top of your word processing program you may notice bold , italics , underline, highlights, your choice of colors, and a host of interesting fonts. Although it can be entertaining to experiment with these visual effects, do not use them just for the sake of decoration. Consistency and branding are important features of your firm’s public image, so you will want the visual aspects of your writing to support that image. Still, when you need to highlight an important fact or emphasize a key question in a report, your readers will appreciate your use of visual effects to draw their attention. Consider the following examples:
Take care when using the following:
Emphasis can be influenced by your choice of font. Serif fonts, such as Times New Roman and Garamond, have decorative ends that make the font easy to read. Sans serif fonts, like Arial, lack these visual cues and often serve better as headers.
You can also vary the emphasis according to where you place information within a sentence:
The information at end of the sentence is what people often recall, and is therefore normally considered the location of maximum emphasis. The second best position for recall is the beginning of the sentence, while the middle of the sentence is the area with the least recall. If you want to highlight a point, place it at the beginning or end of the sentence, and if you want to deemphasize a point, the middle is your best option (McLean, 2003).
You want your writing to be engaging. Which sentence would you rather read?
Most readers prefer sentence B, but why? You’ll recall that all sentences have a subject and a verb, but you may not have paid much attention to their functions. Let’s look at how the subject and verb function in these two sentences. In sentence A, the subject is “Mackenzie,” and the subject is the doer of the action expressed by the verb (processes). In sentence A, the subject is “sales orders,” and the subject is the receiver of the action expressed by the verb (are processed). Sentence A is written in active voice —a sentence structure in which the subject carries out the action. Sentence B is written in passive voice —a sentence structure in which the subject receives the action.
Active sentences tend to be shorter, more precise, and easier to understand. This is especially true because passive sentences can be written in ways that do not tell the reader who the doer of the action is. For example, “All sales orders are processed daily” is a complete and correct sentence in passive voice.
Active voice is the clear choice for a variety of contexts, but not all. When you want to deemphasize the doer of the action, you may write, “Ten late arrivals were recorded this month” and not even mention who was late. The passive form doesn’t place blame or credit, so it can be more diplomatic in some contexts. Passive voice allows the writer to avoid personal references or personal pronouns (he, she, they) to create a more objective tone. There are also situations where the doer of the action is unknown, as in “graffiti was painted on the side of our building last night.”
Overall, business communication resources tend to recommend active voice as the preferred style. Still, the styles themselves are not the problem or challenge, but it is how we use them that matters. A skilled business writer will see both styles as options within a range of choices and learn to distinguish when each style is most appropriate to facilitate communication.
The sentences in Table 6.6 “Common Errors in English” focus on some of the most common errors in English. You may recall this exercise from the introduction of this chapter. How did you do? Visit the “Additional Resources” section at the end of the chapter for some resources on English grammar and usage.
Table 6.6 Common Errors in English
1. or | The office will _______ applications until 5 p.m. on the 31st. | accept | Attendance is required for all employees _______ supervisors. | except |
2. or | To _______ the growth of plants, we can regulate the water supply. | affect | A lack of water has a predictable _______ on most plants. | effect |
3. . or . | Please order 2,000 imprinted giveaways (_______, pens or coffee mugs) | e.g. | Charge them to my account (_______, account #98765). | i.e. |
4. or | The department surpassed _______ previous sales record this quarter. | its | _______ my opinion that we reached peak oil in 2008. | It’s |
5. or | Please _______ the report on the desk. | lay | The doctor asked him to _______ down on the examination table. | lie |
6. or | We need to _______ the liquid nitrogen tanks. | pressurize | It might be possible to _______ him to resign. | pressure |
7. or | It’s the basic _________ of farming: no water, no food. | principle | The _______ reason for the trip is to attend the sales meeting. | principal |
8. or | _______ of what we do, gas prices are unlikely to go back down. | Regardless | _______ of your beliefs, please try to listen with an open mind. | Regardless ( is not a standard word; see your dictionary) |
9. or | This year’s losses were worse _______ last year’s. | than | If we can cut our costs, _______ it might be possible to break even. | then |
10. or | _______ type of marketing data did you need? | Which | Karen misplaced the report, _______ caused a delay in making a decision. | which |
There are several kinds of data _______ could be useful. | that | |||
11 , or | The report is _________, in the top file drawer. | there | __________ strategic advantage depends on a wide distribution network. | Their |
__________ planning to attend the sales meeting in Pittsburgh. | They’re | |||
12. , , or | Customers need _______ drive slower if they want to save gas. | to | After sales meeting, you should visit customers in the Pittsburgh area _______. | too |
In fact, the _______ of you should make some customer visits together. | two | |||
13. or | He would be the best person to make a decision, since he isn’t biased and is relatively _______ in the outcome. | disinterested | The sales manager tried to speak dynamically, but the sales reps were simply _______ in what he had to say. | uninterested |
14. , , , or | __________ truck is that? | Whose | __________ going to pay for the repairs? | Who’s |
__________ will go to the interview? | Who | To __________ should we address the thank-you note? | whom | |
15 or | My office is bigger than _______ cubicle. | your | _______ going to learn how to avoid making these common mistakes in English. | You’re |
In business and industry there is increasing pressure to produce under deadlines that in some respects have been artificially accelerated by the immediacy inherent in technological communication devices. If you receive an e-mail or text message while you are in the middle of studying a complex problem, you may be tempted to “get it out of the way” by typing out a quick reply, but in your haste you may fail to qualify, include important information, or even check to make sure you have hit “Reply” and not “Reply to All” or even “Delete.” Take care to pause and review your text message, e-mail, or document before you consider it complete. Here is a quick electronic communication do/don’t list to keep in mind before you click “send.”
Do remember the following:
An appropriate business writing style can be formal or informal, depending on the context, but it should always reflect favorably on the writer and the organization.
Bailey, E. P. (2008). Plain English at work: A guide to business writing and speaking . New York, NY: McGraw-Hill.
McLean, S. (2003). The basics of speech communication . Boston, MA: Allyn & Bacon.
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25 writing tips for business owners and content marketers: part 5.
Here we go, content creators! It's time to learn a few ways to finesse and get more from your ... [+] content.
Welcome back, content creators and wordsmiths. Ready to take your writing from good to great? In this fifth and final installment of my writing tips series, I’ll discuss advanced techniques that separate the pros from the amateurs.
If you missed any of the first four parts, you can find them here:
As you work through this final installment, consider your content a rough diamond. You've mined and shaped it, but now it's time for the finishing touches to make it truly shine. That's what these tips are all about—the polish that turns your words into brilliant content.
In this article, discover:
Let's dive in.
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The more you edit yourself, the better a writer you'll become.
Isn’t “self-editing” just reading a draft several times? Yes… but there’s more. Think of self-editing as a content personal trainer. It whips your words into shape, trimming the fat and building muscle where it counts. The work is not always comfortable, but the results? They're worth every moment you spend scrutinizing your work.
Here's what self-editing does for your content:
My best advice is not to rush to publish the next time you finish a draft. Take a break, whether for hours or days, then return with fresh eyes and give your work the edit your brilliant ideas deserve.
Here are a few ways to self-edit:
Not all criticism is helpful. But you have to invite it and listen to it to begin to discern.
Have you ever hit 'publish,' beaming with pride, only to receive... criticism? Ouch. Your first instinct might be to defend your work or dismiss the feedback. But criticism could be your greatest ally in content creation.
Think of constructive feedback as a GPS for your writing. It helps you avoid traffic jams, discover more scenic routes, and reach your destination more pleasantly and efficiently. When you open yourself to input from others, you can tap into fresh perspectives and ideas.
Embracing feedback can help you:
Here's a practical tip: The next time you receive feedback, resist the urge to respond right away. Instead, take a deep breath, sleep on it if you can, and then approach the feedback with curiosity.
Ask yourself:
The goal isn't to please everyone—it's to create the best content you can. And sometimes, a fresh perspective is just what you need to take your writing from good to great.
It's hard to make excuses about typos with so many tools, apps, and partners all around.
Every writer needs tools and support. Bring your skills and ideas to the table and use the right tools and partners to help you create something remarkable.
Let's start with the tools. Writing apps like Grammarly and Hemingway help you create clear, readable content. Grammarly has free and paid versions; I use the paid version every day. It helps me catch grammar and spelling errors and suggests style improvements. It's a great first-line defense against the little mistakes that undermine your message.
Hemingway is all about improving your writing's readability. It highlights complex sentences, passive voice, and other readability issues, pushing you to make your writing as clear and punchy as possible.
Partners are another key ingredient for great content. Although writing is often a solitary pursuit, the best content happens through collaboration and external input. That's where editing and content coaching come in.
When you work with an editor or writing coach like me, you get a second set of eyes on your work, plus a fresh, well-trained mind that can spot opportunities for improvement, suggest new approaches, and help you develop your unique writing voice. It's like having a personal trainer for your writing skills—someone to push, guide, and celebrate your progress.
Of course, not every piece needs the full editorial treatment. But that extra level of professional polish can make all the difference for your most important work—your cornerstone content, thought leadership pieces, and the messages you really want to land.
And partnership doesn't have to mean a long-term commitment. Even a one-time edit or coaching session can make a difference. The key is finding the level of support that fits your budget and goals.
Turn one piece of content into many in the same way that an atom splits.
Content repurposing, or content atomization, is the art of turning one piece of content into several to reach new audiences. It's about working smarter, not harder, and getting the most juice out of every piece you create.
Imagine, for example, that you've written a stellar blog post. You've researched the topic, created a compelling narrative, and packed the post with insights. That's great! But why stop there? With a little creative thinking, that one blog post could become:
Each new format allows you to reach new people, cater to different learning styles, and reinforce your message across multiple touchpoints. And because you're starting from a solid foundation, repurposing will be much quicker and easier than creating something from scratch.
The benefits of repurposing go beyond efficiency. It can also help you:
Of course, repurposing doesn't mean simply copying and pasting your content into a new format. You have to tailor each piece to the medium and audience, which might mean:
The key is to view your original content as a starting point, not an endpoint. With each repurposing, you can refine, expand, and enhance your ideas.
Refresh your best content regularly to get more mileage from it.
Content refreshing is the practice of periodically revisiting and updating your content to keep it accurate, engaging, and optimized for search engines and readers. It keeps your best content your best, no matter how much time passes.
Consider your cornerstone content—the pieces that define your brand, showcase your expertise, and attract the most traffic. You want to keep those pieces in prime condition. Experts recommend refreshing this type of content at least every six months. But what does that refreshing process look like?
It could mean:
Regular updates signal to search engines and readers that your content is current, credible, and worthy of attention. They keep your piece in the spotlight, attracting new readers and keeping the interest of returning ones.
Regular updates can also help you:
Of course, not every piece needs a full overhaul every six months. The frequency and depth of your refreshes will depend on factors like:
Don't let your best pieces gather digital dust. Give them the regular refresh they need to shine.
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Journalist katrin schumann talks about why she writes fiction..
Updated July 12, 2024 | Reviewed by Davia Sills
Studies show that the act of writing hones our reflective abilities, stretches our imagination , increases emotional resilience , and alleviates stress . In my conversation with journalist-turned-novelist Katrin Schumann, we discuss how creative writing, in particular, is a worthy pursuit to understand the issues of our time. Schumann is the author of the nonfiction books Mothers Need Time Outs Too and The Secret Life of Middle Children, as well as the novels The Forgotten Hours and This Terrible Beauty .
Writing nonfiction has been a way for me to examine complex issues that are relevant to our times, including psychological ones, but I’ve found that in recent years, I’ve been drawn to fiction because it allows me to get closer to the subject. In exploring thorny issues like loyalty and trust or co-dependency , I’m able to do more of a deep dive in fiction. The form allows me to sit with the complexities, to live in the gray areas with my characters.
I can’t always do this with nonfiction, where I’m approaching the topic from a specific angle, seeking solutions. In fiction, I have space to explore nuances that fascinate and confuse me and try to make sense of the inevitable contradictions. It’s messier and more delicate than nonfiction. For me, this feels more true to the human experience.
Yes. Spending years creating characters and situations that grapple with serious, real-world problems lets me explore my own difficult experiences. For instance, I’d been wrestling with the aftermath of dealing with a narcissist when I started writing my first novel. By fictionalizing those challenges, I was able to find the courage to linger in the dark areas, examining them from all angles in order to find where the light might get in.
I discovered greater empathy and resilience in myself while also being able to acknowledge the trauma I’d been through. It’s using my imagination, combined with researching some very real and current psychological challenges, that ultimately feels most powerful to me and an effective way to reach readers.
I write to figure out my own issues and to learn, but also to share. For me, fiction writing makes me work harder and go deeper. I’m trying to change people’s minds and hearts in subtler ways. I’m reflecting on experiences I’ve had, wrestling with what they mean, and how we can all learn from them and come out the better for it.
Yet, I don’t want to be prescriptive; I want people to draw their own conclusions. I research deeply about whatever topic I’m tackling.
To write my last novel, I studied the history of neuropsychology, dissecting studies on substance abuse . I conducted interviews. For all my books, I gather and study facts and figures, but with novels, I take that a step further. I put those facts and figures into play with my imagined characters to explore what happens. I imbue the impersonal with empathy and allow readers to try to figure out how they feel about how the characters contend with the issue. This approach leads me to meaningful personal discoveries while also taking the reader along on the emotional journey.
The more I’m personally involved with the topic, the more I want to explore it in fictional form. Ironically, for fiction, I feel like I should have an even better understanding of some of these psychological challenges than if I were covering them through straight nonfiction reportage. I first have to understand the topic and its history so my story is not only realistic but feels authentic.
I want readers to trust me, which means I have to be thorough. It’s my aim to take them on a ride that’s compelling as well as informative. And I love learning something new when I’m immersed in researching and writing fiction.
Journaling is, without question, a beneficial reflective activity. Yet what differentiates this kind of work from journaling about our problems or writing blog posts is that novelists are committing more time and energy to the deep dive on a specific topic. My last novel took almost three years to write, and during that time, I was reading everything I could get my hands on about the topic in order to distill it so that readers might find it relevant to their own lives.
At that stage, it’s not really about me anymore; it’s about the human condition. And in the end, that’s what readers relate to, I think. It’s what makes them call their friends and say, “I just finished this great book. You’ve got to read it.”
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