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• Unity and Coherence in Essays
• The Writing Process
• Paragraphs and Essays
• Proving the Thesis/Critical Thinking
• Appropriate Language

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• Proving the Thesis

Unity is the idea that all parts of the writing work to achieve the same goal: proving the thesis. Just as the content of a paragraph should focus on a topic sentence, the content of an essay must focus on the thesis.  The introduction paragraph introduces the thesis, the body paragraphs each have a proof point (topic sentence) with content that proves the thesis, and the concluding paragraph sums up the proof and restates the thesis. Extraneous information in any part of the essay which is not related to the thesis is distracting and takes away from the strength of proving the thesis.

An essay must have coherence. The sentences must flow smoothly and logically from one to the next as they support the purpose of  each paragraph in proving the thesis. .

Just as the last sentence in a paragraph must connect back to the topic sentence of the paragraph, the last paragraph of the essay should connect back to the thesis by reviewing the proof and restating the thesis.

Example of Essay with Problems of Unity and Coherence

Here is an example of a brief essay that includes a paragraph that  does not  support the thesis “Many people are changing their diets to be healthier.”

     People are concerned about pesticides, steroids, and antibiotics in the food they eat.  Many now shop for organic foods since they don’t have the pesticides used in conventionally grown food.  Meat from chicken and cows that are not given steroids or antibiotics are gaining in popularity even though they are much more expensive. More and more, people are eliminating pesticides, steroids, and antibiotics from their diets.

    Eating healthier also is beneficial to the environment since there are less pesticides poisoning the earth. Pesticides getting into the waterways is creating a problem with drinking water.  Historically, safe drinking water has been a problem. It is believed the Ancient Egyptians drank beer since the water was not safe to drink.  Brewing beer killed the harmful organisms and bacteria in the water from the Nile.

     There is a growing concern about eating genetically modified foods, and people are opting for non-GMO diets.  Some people say there are more allergic reactions and other health problems resulting from these foods.  Others are concerned because there are no long-term studies which clearly show no adverse health effects such as cancers or other illnesses. Avoiding GMO food is another way people are eating healthier food.

See how just one paragraph  can take away from the effectiveness of the essay in showing how people are changing to healthier food since the unity and coherence are affected.  There is no longer unity among all the paragraphs.  The thought pattern is disjointed and the essay loses its coherence.

Transitions and Logical Flow of Ideas

Transitions are words, groups of words, or sentences that connect one sentence to another or one paragraph to another.

They promote a logical flow from one idea to the next and overall unity and coherence.

While transitions are not needed in every sentence or at the end of every paragraph, they are missed when they are omitted since the flow of thoughts becomes disjointed or even confusing.

There are different types of transitions:

Time – before, after, during, in the meantime, nowadays

Space – over, around, under

Examples – for instance, one example is

Comparison – on the other hand, the opposing view

Consequence – as a result, subsequently

These are just a few examples.  The idea is to paint a clear, logical connection between sentences and between paragraphs.

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11 Unity & Coherence

Preserving unity.

Academic essays need unity, which means that all of the ideas in an essay need to relate to the thesis, and all of the ideas in a paragraph need to relate to the paragraph’s topic. It can be easy to get “off track” and start writing about an idea that is somewhat related to your main idea, but does not directly connect to your main point.

All of the sentences in a paragraph should stay “on track;” that is, they should connect to the topic. One way to preserve unity in a paragraph is to start with a topic sentence that shows the main idea of the paragraph. Then, make sure each sentence in the paragraph relates to that main idea.

If you find a sentence that goes off track, perhaps you need to start a separate paragraph to write more about that different idea. Each paragraph should generally have only one main idea.

As you pre-write and draft an essay, try to pause occasionally. Go back to the assignment prompt and re-read it to make sure you are staying on topic. Use the prompt to guide your essay; make sure you are addressing all of the questions. Do not just re-state the words in the prompt. Instead, respond to the questions with your own ideas, in your own words, and make sure everything connects to the prompt and your thesis.

Activity A ~ Finding Breaks in Unity

Consider the following paragraphs. Is there a topic sentence? If so, do all of the other sentences relate to the topic sentence? Can you find any sentences that don’t relate?

     The planned community of Columbia, Maryland, was designed as a city open to all, regardless of race, level of income, or religion. When Columbia began in 1967, many cities in the U.S. did not allow people of certain races to rent or buy homes. Its developer, James W. Rouse, wanted to build a new city that had fair and open housing options for everyone. HCC has a building named for James W. Rouse. Today, the city’s nearly 100,000 remain diverse, as shown by recent census data. *****

    College can be expensive and difficult. Critical thinking is a very important skill for college students to develop so that they can be successful in their careers. Employers look for graduates who can understand information, analyze data, and solve problems. They also want employees who can think creatively and communicate their ideas clearly. College students need to practice these skills in all of their classes so that they can demonstrate their abilities to potential employers. ***** Bananas are one of Americans’ favorite types of fruit. The Cavendish variety, grown in Central and South America, is the most commonly sold here in the U.S. Recent problems with a fungus called Panama disease (or TR4), however, have led to a shortage of Cavendish bananas. Similar problems occurred a few years ago in parts of Asia and the Middle East. Because the fungus kills the crop and contaminates the soil, scientists are concerned that the popular Cavendish banana could be completely eradicated. Bananas contain many nutrients, including potassium and Vitamin B6. *****

Whether you choose to include a topic sentence or not, all of the sentences in your paragraph need to relate to the one main idea of the paragraph.

Another way to think about unity in a paragraph is to imagine your family tree. Draw a quick sketch of your family tree in your notebook. If you were writing an essay about your family, you might write a paragraph about close family members first. Next, you might branch out into another paragraph to write about more distant relatives. You might even include a paragraph about very close family friends, or pets. Each paragraph would have just one main idea (immediate family, more distant relatives, close family friends), and every sentence in each paragraph would relate to that main idea.

Activity B ~ Preserving Unity in Your Own Writing

Examine a composition that you have written for this class. Do all of your paragraphs have unity? Can you find any sentences that don’t relate to the topic of each paragraph? Exchange papers with a partner to peer review.

Ensuring Coherence

There are several ways to create connections between ideas in your essay. Here are some suggestions:

1. Repeat key words and phrases. This can be a powerful way to make a point. Consider this excerpt from Rev. Martin Luther King’s famous “I Have a Dream” speech at the 1963 March on Washington for Jobs and Freedom, in which he uses parallel structure :

I say to you today, my friends, so even though we face the difficulties of today and tomorrow, I still have a dream. It is a dream deeply rooted in the American dream. I have a dream that one day this nation will rise up and live out the true meaning of its creed: “We hold these truths to be self-evident, that all men are created equal.” I have a dream that one day on the red hills of Georgia, the sons of former slaves and the sons of former slave owners will be able to sit down together at the table of brotherhood. I have a dream that one day even the state of Mississippi, a state sweltering with the heat of injustice, sweltering with the heat of oppression, will be transformed into an oasis of freedom and justice. I have a dream that my four little children will one day live in a nation where they will not be judged by the color of their skin but by the content of their character. I have a dream today.

2. Use synonyms , as in this example, where King uses both repetition (“Let freedom ring”) and synonyms (for “mountains”):

And if America is to be a great nation, this must become true. So let freedom ring from the prodigious hilltops of New Hampshire. Let freedom ring from the mighty mountains of New York. Let freedom ring from the heightening Alleghenies of Pennsylvania. Let freedom ring from the snow-capped Rockies of Colorado. Let freedom ring from the curvaceous slopes of California. But not only that: Let freedom ring from Stone Mountain of Georgia. Let freedom ring from Lookout Mountain of Tennessee. Let freedom ring from every hill and molehill of Mississippi. From every mountainside, let freedom ring.

3. Use pronouns to refer to antecedents , as King does here; this can be more elegant than just repeating the key words and phrases:

I have a dream that my four little children will one day live in a nation where they will not be judged by the color of their skin but by the content of their character.

4. Use demonstratives ( this, that, these, those ) as adjectives or pronouns, as King does here:

I say to you today, my friends, so even though we face the difficulties of today and tomorrow, I still have a dream. It is a dream deeply rooted in the American dream. I have a dream that one day this nation will rise up and live out the true meaning of its creed: “We hold these truths to be self-evident, that all men are created equal.”…. This is our hope. This is the faith that I go back to the South with. With this faith we will be able to hew out of the mountain of despair a stone of hope. With this faith we will be able to transform the jangling discords of our nation into a beautiful symphony of brotherhood.  

Questions to Ponder

Pause for a moment here to think about the examples above. Think about audience, purpose, and context of an academic essay. Would you use the techniques for coherence in the same way that Dr. King did in his speech, or would you use the techniques in a different way? Discuss with a small group.

5. Use transitions. Transition words and phrases will help you to make sure your essay has coherence. Also called signal words/phrases or signposts, these help to guide your readers.

Transitions connect your related ideas; they can also show your reader that you are starting a new topic, giving an example, adding information, explaining causes and effects, and so on. Using the correct transition word or phrase in a sentence can make your writing much clearer. Try the activity below to think of possible transitions.

Activity C ~ Transition Words & Phrases

With your partner, brainstorm a list of transition words and phrases for each of the categories below.

Can you think of other transition words and phrases? What other categories do they belong to?

After you have completed these activities with your partner, consult  Transition Words & Phrases ~ Useful Lists for more on compare/contrast, addition, cause/effect, and other transitions to try.

Activity D ~ Ensuring Coherence in Your Own Writing

Examine a composition that you have written for this class for coherence. Find and mark examples of places where you used repetition, synonyms, pronouns or demonstratives to build connections between ideas.

Underline your transition words and phrases. Did you use the strongest signal words? Can you find examples where you need to add a transition? Or, did you use too many transitions? Exchange papers with a partner to peer review.

Consult our chapter on Transitions for more inspiration on achieving coherence and cohesion in your writing. Challenge yourself to use some new transitions in your next composition.

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In composition , unity is the quality of oneness in a paragraph or essay that results when all the words and sentences contribute to a single effect or main idea; also called wholeness .

For the past two centuries, composition handbooks have insisted that unity is an essential characteristic of an effective text . Professor Andy Crockett points out that the " five-paragraph theme and  current-traditional rhetoric 's emphasis on method reflect further the expediency and utility of unity." However, Crockett also notes that "for rhetoricians , the achievement of unity has never been taken for granted" (Encyclopedia of Rhetoric and Composition, 1996.)

Pronunciation

From the Latin, "one."

Observations

• "Most pieces of effective writing are unified around one main point. That is, all the subpoints and  supporting details are relevant to that point. Generally, after you have read an essay, you can sum up the writer's main point in a sentence, even if the author has not stated it explicitly. We call this summary statement a thesis ." (X. J. Kennedy, Dorothy M. Kennedy, and Marcia F. Muth, The Bedford Guide for College Writers, 8th ed. Bedford/St. Martin's, 2008)
• Unity and Coherence "A good check on unity is to ask yourself if everything in your paragraph or essay is subordinate to and derived from the controlling idea. Make sure that your controlling idea—the topic sentence or thesis—indicates the subject and the focus on that subject..."​ (Lee Brandon and Kelly Brandon, Paragraphs and Essays With Integrated Readings, 12th ed. Wadsworth, 2012)

Rules of Thumb for Writing Unified Paragraphs

• Be sure your paragraphs focus on one idea and state that idea in a topic sentence.
• Place your topic sentence effectively within your paragraph. Let the purpose of your paragraph and the nature of your evidence guide you.
• Let your paragraph's evidence —the selected details , the examples — illustrate or clarify the idea expressed in your topic sentence.
• Make sure you explain the relationship between your evidence and your idea so that it is clear to readers.
• Think about unity among paragraphs when writing essays. Be sure your paragraphs are related, that they fit together and clarify your essay's idea.​ (R. DiYanni, Scribner Handbook for Writers. Allyn & Bacon, 2001)

A Note on Topic Sentences

• "Paragraphs may not have a topic sentence, but they must have unity and purpose . All the ideas in a paragraph should relate to a clear point readers will easily understand." (Mark Connelly, Get Writing: Paragraphs and Essays. Thomson Wadsworth, 2009)

Counterviews on Unity

• " Unity is the shallowest, the cheapest deception of all composition ... Every piece of writing, it matters not what it is, has unity. Inexpert or bad writing most terribly so. But ability in an essay is a multiplicity, infinite fracture, the intercrossing of opposed forces establishing any number of opposed centres of stillness." (William Carlos Williams, "An Essay on Virginia," 1925)
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Essay on Power of Unity

Students are often asked to write an essay on Power of Unity in their schools and colleges. And if you’re also looking for the same, we have created 100-word, 250-word, and 500-word essays on the topic.

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100 Words Essay on Power of Unity

The essence of unity.

Unity is a powerful force that binds individuals together. It allows us to overcome challenges and achieve common goals.

Unity in Diversity

Our world is diverse. Yet, when we unite, we celebrate this diversity and become stronger. Our differences become our strength.

Unity and Progress

Unity fosters progress. When we work together, we can accomplish tasks faster and more efficiently.

In conclusion, the power of unity is immense. It brings progress, celebrates diversity, and helps us overcome challenges. Always remember, “United we stand, divided we fall.”

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250 Words Essay on Power of Unity

The concept of unity.

Unity is a potent force that can accomplish remarkable feats. It’s a concept that transcends individual capabilities, converging diverse strengths into a powerful collective. This principle is reflected in the adage, “United we stand, divided we fall,” underscoring the idea that unity often leads to success, while disunity can lead to downfall.

Unity in Diverse Fields

The power of unity is evident in various fields. In science, the collective behavior of particles results in phenomena like superconductivity. In sociology, cohesive societies tend to prosper, while divided ones often struggle. In politics, unity forms the bedrock of successful democracies, where diverse viewpoints coalesce to form robust policies.

The Power of Unity

Unity’s power lies in its ability to foster collaboration and mutual support. It helps individuals overcome personal limitations, enabling them to contribute to a collective goal. This shared purpose can lead to the creation of innovative solutions and the achievement of seemingly insurmountable tasks.

Unity in the Face of Challenges

In challenging times, unity becomes even more critical. It helps societies withstand crises, whether they are natural disasters, economic downturns, or social unrest. A united front can provide resilience, ensuring survival and recovery.

In conclusion, unity’s power is transformative, turning individual efforts into collective achievements. It’s a force that can overcome adversity, foster innovation, and ensure societal progress. Thus, embracing unity is a step towards building a more collaborative, resilient, and prosperous world.

500 Words Essay on Power of Unity

Introduction.

Unity is a principle that not only enhances the strength of a community but also enriches its potential for success. It is a potent tool that transcends the barriers of individual abilities, merging them into a collective force capable of achieving remarkable feats. The power of unity is often underestimated, but its influence is omnipresent, from the microscopic cells in our body working together to maintain life to nations uniting to tackle global crises.

The Power of Unity in Society

Unity in society is akin to the roots of a tree, invisible yet holding the entire structure upright. It is the unspoken agreement among people to stand up for each other, to share resources, and to work towards mutual prosperity. The power of unity is evident in the way communities come together during natural disasters, economic crises, or social unrest. It is the collective strength of individuals that helps societies withstand adversities and rebuild.

Unity in Diverse Cultures

The world is a mosaic of diverse cultures, languages, and beliefs. Yet, beneath this diversity lies an inherent unity that binds humanity together. This unity in diversity is a testament to the power of unity. It is a reminder that despite our differences, we are fundamentally the same, sharing the same planet and the same human condition. The power of unity is what enables diverse societies to coexist peacefully, promoting cultural exchange and mutual respect.

Unity in the Digital Age

In the digital age, the power of unity has assumed a new dimension. The internet has connected people across geographical boundaries, fostering global communities united by common interests or causes. Online movements like #MeToo and #BlackLivesMatter have demonstrated the power of unity in effecting social change. These movements have mobilized millions of people worldwide, highlighting the potential of unity in the digital era.

Unity and Personal Growth

On a personal level, unity plays a crucial role in fostering growth and development. When individuals unite, they share knowledge, experiences, and skills. This collective learning environment accelerates personal growth and broadens perspectives. Unity also cultivates empathy and understanding, essential traits for personal development.

In conclusion, the power of unity is an extraordinary force that can overcome formidable challenges and drive progress. It is a testament to the strength of collective action and the potential of shared objectives. Whether it is in societies, diverse cultures, the digital age, or personal growth, the power of unity is a constant, reaffirming the age-old adage, “United we stand, divided we fall.” As we navigate the complexities of the 21st century, let us harness the power of unity to build a more inclusive, resilient, and prosperous world.

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Exploring The Phrase “Unity Is Strength”: The Power Of Unity

Unity Is Strength Paragraph: Unity is defined as the state of being together or joined as a whole. It is a critical aspect of human life that allows us to achieve common goals and build strong communities. The phrase “Unity Is Strength” emphasizes the power of togetherness and the importance of working together to overcome challenges. In this article, we will explore the historical significance of unity, the benefits of unity, challenges to unity, and ways to promote unity.

Unity Is Strength

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Historical Examples Of Unity

Throughout history, we have seen the power of unity in achieving great things. In the United States, the Civil Rights Movement of the 1950s and 1960s was a significant example of unity in action. African Americans, along with their allies, came together to fight against segregation, discrimination, and racial injustice.

• The movement was marked by peaceful protests, sit-ins, and civil disobedience, and it led to the passage of significant civil rights legislation, including the Civil Rights Act of 1964.
• Similarly, in India, the Independence Movement of the 1940s was a demonstration of the power of unity. People from all walks of life, including Mahatma Gandhi, came together to fight against British rule.
• They used nonviolent methods, such as peaceful protests and civil disobedience, to achieve their goal of independence. The movement led to India’s independence in 1947.
• In South Africa, the African National Congress (ANC) played a significant role in ending apartheid. The ANC was formed in 1912 to represent the interests of black South Africans, who were subjected to racial discrimination and segregation under apartheid.
• The ANC used a variety of tactics, including boycotts, strikes, and armed resistance, to fight against apartheid. In 1994, the ANC was successful in ending apartheid, and Nelson Mandela became the country’s first democratically elected president.

Benefits Of Unity

The benefits of unity are numerous. When people come together, they can achieve common goals that they may not be able to achieve on their own. They can also build strong communities based on shared values and interests. Furthermore, unity promotes diversity and inclusion, as people from different backgrounds come together to work towards a common goal.

One notable example of the benefits of unity is the creation of labor unions. Labor unions are formed when workers come together to negotiate with employers for better wages, benefits, and working conditions. By joining forces, workers have more bargaining power than they would individually, and they can achieve better outcomes for themselves and their families.

Challenges To Unity

Despite the benefits of unity, there are also challenges to achieving it. Political polarization and division can create barriers to unity. When people hold opposing views on political issues, it can be challenging to find common ground and work together towards a shared goal.

Social and economic inequality can also create challenges to unity, as people may not feel like they have the same opportunities or share the same experiences as others. Prejudice and discrimination can also be significant barriers to unity, as they can create divisions based on race, ethnicity, religion, gender, or sexual orientation.

Ways To Promote Unity

There are various ways that individuals and communities can promote unity. Encouraging open communication and dialogue is an essential first step in building understanding and empathy. When people are willing to listen to each other’s perspectives and experiences, they can find common ground and work together towards a shared goal.

• Fostering empathy and understanding is also critical in promoting unity. When people can see things from each other’s perspectives, they are more likely to work towards a common goal.
• Creating opportunities for collaboration and cooperation is another way to promote unity. By working together on projects and initiatives, people can build strong relationships and find common ground. This can lead
• The concept of unity is an age-old one and has been preached and followed by many great leaders throughout history. The idea behind this is that people can achieve much more by working together rather than individually.
• When a group of individuals comes together for a common cause, their strength multiplies, and they can accomplish things that would have been impossible if they had acted alone. Unity has been the key to success for many societies, nations, and even organizations.
• One of the most significant benefits of unity is that it brings people together. When people come together, they can work towards a common goal and achieve much more than they could have on their own.

For example, during the Indian Independence movement, people of different castes, religions, and regions came together to fight against British rule. This unity resulted in India gaining independence in 1947.

• Unity also helps in building a strong community. When people work together, they develop trust and respect for one another. They learn to value each other’s contributions and recognize that everyone has something unique to offer. This kind of community is more likely to work towards common goals, build better relationships, and be more resilient in times of crisis.
• Another essential benefit of unity is that it promotes peace and harmony. When people work together, they are more likely to resolve conflicts and differences peacefully. They understand that everyone has their own opinions and perspectives, and they learn to respect and tolerate them. This can help prevent conflicts from escalating into violence and promote a peaceful society.
• Unity also creates a sense of belonging and identity. When people work together towards a common goal, they feel like they are part of something larger than themselves. This feeling of belonging and identity is essential for building a strong community and a strong nation.

In conclusion, unity is strength, and it is an essential concept that has been embraced by societies, nations, and organizations throughout history. Unity brings people together, promotes peace and harmony, builds strong communities, and creates a sense of belonging and identity.

It is important for individuals to recognize the benefits of unity and work towards fostering it in their personal and professional lives. When people come together, they can achieve great things and make a positive impact on the world.

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FAQ’s On Unity Is Strength

Question 1. What is the strength in unity?

Answer: Strength in unity refers to the concept that a group of individuals who work together with a common goal can achieve greater success than an individual working alone. When people come together with a shared purpose and work in unison, they become more powerful and can overcome challenges.

Unity creates a sense of belonging and helps to build stronger relationships, which can lead to greater accomplishments. Overall, the strength in unity emphasizes the importance of collaboration, cooperation, and mutual support.

Question 2. What is unity strength in writing?

Answer: “Unity is Strength” is a common phrase used in writing to emphasize the importance of coherence and consistency in a piece of writing. The idea is that when all the elements of a writing piece work together towards a common goal, the overall impact and effectiveness of the writing is amplified.

Just like in life, where individuals working together can achieve more than they would alone, a piece of writing that is unified in its approach can have a stronger impact on the reader. In writing, this means ensuring that all ideas, arguments, and details are logically and consistently connected to each other.

Question 3. What is unity paragraph in English?

Answer: A unity paragraph is a paragraph in which all sentences are related to a central idea or topic. Each sentence should be relevant to the main point and support it in some way. This type of paragraph should have a clear and concise thesis statement, which is the main idea that the writer wants to convey. A unity paragraph provides cohesion and clarity to the writing, making it easy for the reader to understand the writer’s purpose.

Question 4. What is an example of unity is strength?

Answer: An example of unity is strength is a group of workers who come together to demand better working conditions from their employer. By standing together and presenting a united front, they have a stronger chance of achieving their goals than if they had each tried to negotiate on their own. This demonstrates the power of unity in achieving common objectives and making positive changes.

Question 5. Why is unity important?

Answer: Unity is important as it promotes cooperation and understanding among individuals or groups. It fosters a sense of belonging and helps to achieve common goals. Unity can lead to the creation of a stronger community or society, allowing for progress and development in various aspects of life. On the other hand, lack of unity can lead to conflict, chaos and hinder the growth and success of a group or society.

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Creating Unity and Coherence

Following your outline closely offers you a reasonable guarantee that your writing will stay on purpose and not drift away from the controlling idea. However, when writers are rushed, are tired, or cannot find the right words, their writing may become less than they want it to be. Their writing may no longer be clear and concise, and they may be adding information that is not needed to develop the main idea. When you reread your writing to find revisions to make, look for each type of problem in a separate sweep. Read it straight through once to locate any problems with unity. Read it straight through a second time to find problems with coherence. You may follow this same practice during many stages of the writing process. Reading your writing aloud will often help you find problems. Listen for the clarity and flow of your ideas. Identify places where you find yourself confused, and write a note to yourself about possible fixes.

When a piece of writing has unity, all the ideas in each paragraph and in the entire essay clearly belong and are arranged in an order that makes logical sense. The wording clearly indicates how one idea leads to another within a paragraph and from paragraph to paragraph. Sometimes writers get caught up in the moment and cannot resist a good digression. Even though you might enjoy such detours when you chat with friends, unplanned digressions usually harm a piece of writing.

When the writing has coherence, the ideas flow smoothly. Careful writers use transitions to clarify how the ideas in their sentences and paragraphs are related. These words and phrases help the writing flow smoothly. Adding transitions is not the only way to improve coherence, but they are often useful and give a mature feel to your essays. The following table groups many common transitions according to their purpose.

Writing Clearly and Concisely

Some writers are very methodical and painstaking when they write a first draft. Other writers unleash a lot of words in order to get out all that they feel they need to say. Do either of these composing styles match your style? Or is your composing style somewhere in between? No matter which description best fits you, the first draft of almost every piece of writing, no matter its author, can be made clearer and more concise.

If you have a tendency to write too much, you will need to look for unnecessary words. If you have a tendency to be vague or imprecise in your wording, you will need to find specific words to replace any overly general language.

Identifying Wordiness

Sometimes writers use too many words when fewer words will appeal more to their audience and better fit their purpose. Here are some common examples of wordiness to look for in your draft. Eliminating wordiness helps all readers, because it makes your ideas clear, direct, and straightforward.

• Sentences that begin with There is or There are.

Example: Wordy: There are two major experiments that the Biology Department sponsors. Revised: The Biology Department sponsors two major experiments.

• Sentences with unnecessary modifiers.

Example: Wordy: Two extremely famous and well-known consumer advocates spoke eloquently in favor of the proposed important legislation. Revised: Two well-known consumer advocates spoke in favor of the proposed legislation.

• Sentences with deadwood phrases that add little to the meaning such as in terms of , with a mind to , on the subject of , as to whether or not , more or less , as far as…is concerned , and similar expressions. You can usually find a more straightforward way to state your point.

Example: Wordy: As a world leader in the field of green technology, the company plans to focus its efforts in the area of geothermal energy. A report as to whether or not to use geysers as an energy source is in the process of preparation. Revised: As a world leader in green technology, the company plans to focus on geothermal energy. A report about using geysers as an energy source is in preparation.

• Sentences in the passive voice or with forms of the verb to be . Sentences with passive-voice verbs often create confusion, because the subject of the sentence does not perform an action. Sentences are clearer when the subject of the sentence performs the action and is followed by a strong verb. Use strong active-voice verbs in place of forms of to be , which can lead to wordiness. Avoid passive voice when you can.

Example: Wordy: It might perhaps be said that using a GPS device is something that is a benefit to drivers who have a poor sense of direction. Revised: Using a GPS device benefits drivers who have a poor sense of direction.

• Sentences with constructions that can be shortened.

Example: Wordy: The e-book reader, which is a recent invention, may become as commonplace as the cell phone. My over-sixty uncle bought an e-book reader, and his wife bought an e-book reader, too. Revised: The e-book reader, a recent invention, may become as commonplace as the cell phone. My over-sixty uncle and his wife both bought e-book readers.

Choosing Specific, Appropriate Words

College essays should be written in formal English suitable for an academic situation. Avoid slang terms, such as "guys" instead of "people," or clichés such as "better late than never." Avoid general words such as "thing," "nice," or "interesting" when more specific terms apply.

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Paragraph Unity, Coherence, and Development

In each paragraph of an essay, one particular idea or topic is developed and explained. In order to successfully do so, however, it is essential that the paragraph be written in a unified and coherent manner. 

A unified paragraph must follow the idea mentioned in the topic sentence and must not deviate from it. For a further explanation on topic sentences, see the Write Right on Topic Sentences .

A coherent paragraph has sentences that all logically follow each other; they are not isolated thoughts. Coherence can be achieved in several ways. First, using transitions helps connect ideas from one sentence to the next. For more on transitions, see the Write Right on Transitions . Second, ordering thoughts in numerical sequence helps to direct the reader from one point to the next. Third, structuring each paragraph according to one of the following patterns helps to organize sentences: general to particular; particular to general; whole to parts; question to answer; or effect to cause. 

Remember that a paragraph should have enough sentences so that the main idea of the topic sentence is completely developed. Generalizations should be supported with examples or illustrations. Also, details and descriptions help the reader to understand what you mean. Don't ever assume that the reader can read your mind: be specific enough to develop your ideas thoroughly, but avoid repetition

An effective paragraph might look like this:

It is commonly recognized that dogs have an extreme antagonism toward cats. This enmity between these two species can be traced back to the time of the early Egyptian dynasties. Archaeologists in recent years have discovered Egyptian texts in which there are detailed accounts of canines brutally mauling felines. Today this type of cruelty between these two domestic pets can be witnessed in regions as close as your own neighborhood. For example, when dogs are walked by their masters (and they happen to catch sight of a stray cat), they will pull with all their strength on their leash until the master is forced to yield; the typical result is that a feline is chased up a tree. The hatred between dogs and cats has lasted for many centuries, so it is unlikely that this conflict will ever end.

This paragraph is effective for the following reasons:

• The paragraph shows unity. All the sentences effectively relate back to the topic sentence at the beginning of the paragraph. 
• The paragraph shows coherence. There is a flow of thoughts and ideas among the sentences in this paragraph. There are good transitions employed in the paragraph. The writer also presents her sub-topics in an orderly fashion that the reader can follow easily.
• The paragraph is developed. The writer gives herself enough space to develop the topic. She gives us at least two reasons to accept her argument and incorporates some examples in order to give those reasons more validity.

Reference: Strunk, Wiliam Jr., and E. B. White. The Elements of Style . 4th ed., Allyn and Bacon, 2000.

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Now that you have an outline or idea of what you want to write, you can begin writing your draft. While you write your draft you should make sure that all of your main ideas (the thesis for the essay as a whole and the topic sentences for the individual paragraphs) have support that is unified in helping the reader understand that main idea. 

Unity is the idea that many parts combine together or are all connected to one idea. Writing has unity when the supporting sentences all work together to support the topic sentences and all the paragraphs work together to support the thesis statement.  Paragraphs that lack unity are confusing to the reader because some ideas do not seem to belong. 

Compare the examples below. The first paragraph has poor unity because there are sentences that do not support the topic sentence.

Example: Body Paragraph (Poor Unity)

       Chopin was a musical prodigy. While many people are aware of the great pieces he wrote, not as many people are aware of how young he was when he began his musical career. Chopin published one of his first pieces at the age of seven and one year later performed in a public concert (Plantinga & Hendley, 2018). At an astonishingly young age, he truly showed great musical talent in both of these things. While it may be hard to imagine, his interest in music may have begun even earlier. "In infancy Chopin was always strangely moved when listening to his mother or eldest sister playing the piano" (Plantinga & Hendley, 2018, "Life," para. 1). Many children show some response to music in their infancy. This early sensitivity may have helped his early desire to create and perform. It is clear that he was musically gifted very early in life.

Example: Body Paragraph (Revised for Unity)

When should i start a new paragraph.

1. When you begin a new idea or point. New ideas should always start in new paragraphs. If you have an extended idea that spans multiple paragraphs, each new point within that idea should have its own paragraph.

2. To contrast information or ideas. Separate paragraphs can serve to contrast sides in a debate, different points in an argument, or any other difference.

3. When your readers need a pause. Breaks in paragraphs function as a short "break" for your readers—adding these in will help your writing more readable. You would create a break if the paragraph becomes too long or the material is complex.

4. When you are ending your introduction or starting your conclusion. Your introductory and concluding material should always be in a new paragraph. Many introductions and conclusions have multiple paragraphs depending on their content, length, and the writer's purpose. 

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Unity In and Across the Parts of an Essay

You will need to have unity within paragraphs and between paragraphs. Having unity within paragraphs means that your supporting sentences in a particular paragraph all support the topic sentence of that paragraph. Having unity  between paragraphs means that your paragraphs all support the thesis statement of the essay. Consider how you can draft your essays to have unity within and between paragraphs as you read about drafting the parts of a cause/effect essay below. 

As you write your introduction, think about the information your reader needs to understand your topic so they feel ready for the thesis when they read it. Read the following thesis. What information would help a reader understand the general topic so he is ready for the thesis?  

TH: Positive urban development is the result of careful planning, wise investing, and a good understanding of the needs of the area.  

The reader needs to know what the author means by “positive urban development” so that when they read the thesis, they will be ready to learn about the causes of this type of development. The introduction may start discussing how cities change generally and then introduce the idea of positive changes like growth, stability, and safety. Then the reader should feel prepared for this thesis.  

The ideas in the background information are all connected to the topic of the thesis statement. They support the reader's understanding of the thesis statement. All of the background sentences should be unified with the main idea of the essay: the thesis statement. The introduction paragraph is unique; it has a hook, not a topic sentence. The main idea of the introduction is instead found in the thesis statement. That is the main idea the background information should connect to and prepare the reader to understand. 

As you write your body paragraphs, keep your focus on explaining how and why your topic sentences are true. It can be easy to get distracted when incorporating research into body paragraphs, but make sure everything you write supports the topic sentence.

If a detail doesn't obviously support the topic sentence of a body paragraph, add 1-2 sentences to explain how in your mind it does connect to and support the main idea OR delete it. If a whole body paragraph doesn't obviously support the thesis statement of the essay, revise the word choice, cohesive device choice, or source used to show how in your mind it does connect to and support the main idea OR delete the paragraph. If a sentence or paragraph doesn't support the main idea it will just confuse the reader.

Conclusion Paragraphs

As you write your conclusion paragraph, you should keep your focus on your restated thesis statement. It is the same idea as the thesis statement just in different words, so it is the same idea as the main idea of the whole essay. You maybe will summarize your essay which will focus on that main idea. Or, you may extend the essay in the conclusion to a broader community and the main idea's global impact, but your supporting sentences should still be about the main idea. Be careful not to lose that main idea at the very end. Even your concluding sentence should connect back to the restated thesis statement in some way. 

Exercise 1: Brainstorm Background Knowledge for an Introduction

What does the reader need to know before they encounter any of these thesis statements in an introduction paragraph? Write your ideas on the lines provided. 

1. TH: The imbalance of brain chemicals, personality and family relationships are important causes of depression.  

2. TH: Reading can help stimulate your brain, reduce stress, and increase knowledge.  

3. TH: Obesity in the US can be caused by lifestyle or genetics and it, in turn, causes a considerable number of people to develop diseases.  

Exercise 2: Analyze an Introduction Paragraph

Read the following introduction paragraph. Were you prepared for the thesis? Why? Or, why not?

        Climate change has become one of the major problems that the planet earth is facing. Scientists have observed changes in rainfall patterns, increase droughts in some inland areas, rising of sea level due to flooding from storms, and other unusual patterns in natural phenomena. Researchers have also discovered that the planet is increasingly heating up. Oceans and land are warmer than in the past. To illustrate this, scientists have discovered that there has been an increase of 1.71 degree in the temperature between the years 1880 and 2016 in both land and oceans (Pappas, 2017). The planet needs to maintain a certain temperature for its balance and for the benefit of all living creatures. As many wonder about the roots of this phenomenon on the planet, science has shown that human activities and natural events are causes of global warming.

Exercise 3: Fill in the Blanks

A student is writing a body paragraph for their essay on the effects of increasing solar power. The student already has a topic sentence from outlining and knows how he wants to conclude the paragraph. He is now trying to develop the idea. He found many different details on his topic while researching and brainstormed a few more.

Chose the details with the best unity with his main idea and use them to complete the paragraph below. Write your answer in complete sentences. Use in-text citations if needed. 

Possible Ideas:

[topic sentence]

.................

[concluding sentence]

Exercise 4: Analyze a body paragraph

What kind of advice would you give the author of this body paragraph?  

       Growing up bilingual has cognitive benefits. Humans have the capacity to learn lan guages. How much we develop this capacity relies on the context and experiences each person has in his/her life. Dr. Bialystok in her research assessed a group of monolingual and bilingual children with specific tasks. Children needed to have flexibility in problem solving, inhibit irrelevant information, and recognition. When the rules changed, the bilingual children were outstanding in their tasks. She attributed the bilingual children’s abilities in these tasks to their ability to switch between languages and select the appropriate words to use, due to their cognitive development. Bilingual people have the ability to hold two different things in their brain at the same time, and switch between them when they need it. Bialystok (2012) cited several studies that found bilinguals perform better in the cognitive and metalinguistic measures, divergent thinking, and creativity. She explained these advantages are because bilingual have mutual interference between languages to force them to adopt strategies that accelerate cognitive development.  

Exercise 5: Write a body paragraph

Return to the research about the causes of volcanic eruptions. Use the sources to develop a body paragraph that begins with this topic sentence:  

• A difference in density or air pressure can cause a volcanic eruption.  

Exercise 6: Concluding Sentences

 Read the titles of cause/effect essays below. Pretend you have written essays except for the very last sentence for each of these. Consider the topic of the essay, and then write a memorable concluding sentence for that essay.

1. The Calming Effects of Art

2. The Causes of Tooth Decay

3. Gas Prices 

Exercise 7: Write a conclusion

Read the following introduction paragraph for an essay about effects of sugar consumption. Write a conclusion paragraph for this essay.  

       It is not surprising that sugar can trigger negatives consequences in our body. For that reason it is natural that people are concerned about sugar consumption. In 2008, Americans were consuming over 60 pounds of added sugar per year, which is equivalent to 19 teaspoons or 306 calories. (Gunnars, 2017). This habit has taken hold of the conscience of the whole world. According to Gunnars, sugar consumption went down by 23% between the years 2000 and 2008, but ongoing intake levels are still way too high and are the principal factor in making people unhealthy (2017). Sugar in great quantities can lead to health problems, such as obesity, addiction and changes in your mood.  

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Unity is strength means staying united in all situations. It has a great value in all walks of life. When we are united then we can surmount any challenges and accomplish any goal. The development of our society and country depends on this spirit. In fact civilization came into existence because of the unity among people. In order to lead a peaceful and fulfilling life, it is very important for people to stay united. Unfortunately, this word unity has become confined to motivational and inspirational talks.

India was not an independent country till 1947. British had come to India as traders but ruled for 200 years. It was just because of a lack of mutual unity among the people of the country. When the Indians realized that their freedom from the British was a must then they united and fought against the British. Their unity brought independence to India. This example proves that when we work unified then we can bring success.

India is a multi-cultural, multi-racial, multilingual and multi-ethnic society. It is a land of diversity. People of different religions, customs, cultures and traditions live here. They have their different festivals, fashion and lifestyles. Despite all this variedness, India remains a one-nation. It seems as if the whole country is bound with an invisible common thread. This distinct feature that emerges from this diversity is that in spite of this variedness, they are united.

Unity Helps to Grow: No one can grow alone. We need support from others. If we want to grow in business, we need team members. If we need to grow our family, we need a partner. If we have to achieve big success in our society, we need to work together towards that success. 

Unity Gives Courage: Unity gives us the courage, hope and strength. Whenever we see injustice in our society, we feel like raising our voice but most of the time we take a step back because we are scared to fight alone. When we get support from others then we can get the courage to fight together for injustice. When we are united, we can bring the change. So unity not only gives hope, courage and hope but also brings a change.

Unity Gives Motivation: When we work as a team, we get motivated by each other and encouraged to work harder. With motivation and hard work, we can accomplish any goal. 

Unity Inspires: We cannot get inspiration in isolation but when we are together, we get inspired by each other in personal and professional matters.

Unity Creates Wonders: In today’s world when people are suffering from depression and loneliness, then the neighborhood can be a boon for them by supporting and bringing joy and happiness in their lives. 

In spite of this, there are certain anti-elements and external forces that are continuously disturbing the unity among the people by inciting communal and sentiments. There has been increasing intolerance, disharmony and lawlessness in our society and country. Similarly, various nations across the globe are fighting amongst themselves to prove superiority. Today almost every nation has nuclear weapons, terrorist organizations are formed to bring destruction, and corrupt people try to manipulate the innocent. If the entire mankind realizes that these anti elements won’t do good to anyone then together we can create a beautiful world on this planet.

There is no doubt about the fact that the strength lies in unity. There are many stories, real incidents and experiences to prove this. It is our responsibility to maintain this unique feature.

We should think beyond petty interests and work united for much broader goals of bringing prosperity and progress in our society and country.

FAQs on Unity is Strength Essay

1. What do you mean by unity is strength?

Unity is strength means when we are together then we become stronger.

2. Why is unity important?

Unit is important because unity brings freedom, peace, success, courage, strength and hope.

3. How can unity bring a change in our society?

When we are together and support each other then we can fight against the evils and injustice of our society.

4. What is the symbol of unity?

The symbol of unity is the Gordian knot. It represents oneness and an unbreakable union.

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8.4 Revising and Editing

Learning objectives.

• Identify major areas of concern in the draft essay during revising and editing.
• Use peer reviews and editing checklists to assist revising and editing.
• Revise and edit the first draft of your essay and produce a final draft.

Revising and editing are the two tasks you undertake to significantly improve your essay. Both are very important elements of the writing process. You may think that a completed first draft means little improvement is needed. However, even experienced writers need to improve their drafts and rely on peers during revising and editing. You may know that athletes miss catches, fumble balls, or overshoot goals. Dancers forget steps, turn too slowly, or miss beats. For both athletes and dancers, the more they practice, the stronger their performance will become. Web designers seek better images, a more clever design, or a more appealing background for their web pages. Writing has the same capacity to profit from improvement and revision.

Understanding the Purpose of Revising and Editing

Revising and editing allow you to examine two important aspects of your writing separately, so that you can give each task your undivided attention.

• When you revise , you take a second look at your ideas. You might add, cut, move, or change information in order to make your ideas clearer, more accurate, more interesting, or more convincing.
• When you edit , you take a second look at how you expressed your ideas. You add or change words. You fix any problems in grammar, punctuation, and sentence structure. You improve your writing style. You make your essay into a polished, mature piece of writing, the end product of your best efforts.

How do you get the best out of your revisions and editing? Here are some strategies that writers have developed to look at their first drafts from a fresh perspective. Try them over the course of this semester; then keep using the ones that bring results.

• Take a break. You are proud of what you wrote, but you might be too close to it to make changes. Set aside your writing for a few hours or even a day until you can look at it objectively.
• Ask someone you trust for feedback and constructive criticism.
• Pretend you are one of your readers. Are you satisfied or dissatisfied? Why?
• Use the resources that your college provides. Find out where your school’s writing lab is located and ask about the assistance they provide online and in person.

Many people hear the words critic , critical , and criticism and pick up only negative vibes that provoke feelings that make them blush, grumble, or shout. However, as a writer and a thinker, you need to learn to be critical of yourself in a positive way and have high expectations for your work. You also need to train your eye and trust your ability to fix what needs fixing. For this, you need to teach yourself where to look.

Creating Unity and Coherence

Following your outline closely offers you a reasonable guarantee that your writing will stay on purpose and not drift away from the controlling idea. However, when writers are rushed, are tired, or cannot find the right words, their writing may become less than they want it to be. Their writing may no longer be clear and concise, and they may be adding information that is not needed to develop the main idea.

When a piece of writing has unity , all the ideas in each paragraph and in the entire essay clearly belong and are arranged in an order that makes logical sense. When the writing has coherence , the ideas flow smoothly. The wording clearly indicates how one idea leads to another within a paragraph and from paragraph to paragraph.

Reading your writing aloud will often help you find problems with unity and coherence. Listen for the clarity and flow of your ideas. Identify places where you find yourself confused, and write a note to yourself about possible fixes.

Creating Unity

Sometimes writers get caught up in the moment and cannot resist a good digression. Even though you might enjoy such detours when you chat with friends, unplanned digressions usually harm a piece of writing.

Mariah stayed close to her outline when she drafted the three body paragraphs of her essay she tentatively titled “Digital Technology: The Newest and the Best at What Price?” But a recent shopping trip for an HDTV upset her enough that she digressed from the main topic of her third paragraph and included comments about the sales staff at the electronics store she visited. When she revised her essay, she deleted the off-topic sentences that affected the unity of the paragraph.

Read the following paragraph twice, the first time without Mariah’s changes, and the second time with them.

Nothing is more confusing to me than choosing among televisions. It confuses lots of people who want a new high-definition digital television (HDTV) with a large screen to watch sports and DVDs on. You could listen to the guys in the electronics store, but word has it they know little more than you do. They want to sell what they have in stock, not what best fits your needs. You face decisions you never had to make with the old, bulky picture-tube televisions. Screen resolution means the number of horizontal scan lines the screen can show. This resolution is often 1080p, or full HD, or 768p. The trouble is that if you have a smaller screen, 32 inches or 37 inches diagonal, you won’t be able to tell the difference with the naked eye. The 1080p televisions cost more, though, so those are what the salespeople want you to buy. They get bigger commissions. The other important decision you face as you walk around the sales floor is whether to get a plasma screen or an LCD screen. Now here the salespeople may finally give you decent info. Plasma flat-panel television screens can be much larger in diameter than their LCD rivals. Plasma screens show truer blacks and can be viewed at a wider angle than current LCD screens. But be careful and tell the salesperson you have budget constraints. Large flat-panel plasma screens are much more expensive than flat-screen LCD models. Don’t let someone make you by more television than you need!

Answer the following two questions about Mariah’s paragraph:

Collaboration

Please share with a classmate and compare your answers.

• Now start to revise the first draft of the essay you wrote in Section 8 “Writing Your Own First Draft” . Reread it to find any statements that affect the unity of your writing. Decide how best to revise.

When you reread your writing to find revisions to make, look for each type of problem in a separate sweep. Read it straight through once to locate any problems with unity. Read it straight through a second time to find problems with coherence. You may follow this same practice during many stages of the writing process.

Writing at Work

Many companies hire copyeditors and proofreaders to help them produce the cleanest possible final drafts of large writing projects. Copyeditors are responsible for suggesting revisions and style changes; proofreaders check documents for any errors in capitalization, spelling, and punctuation that have crept in. Many times, these tasks are done on a freelance basis, with one freelancer working for a variety of clients.

Creating Coherence

Careful writers use transitions to clarify how the ideas in their sentences and paragraphs are related. These words and phrases help the writing flow smoothly. Adding transitions is not the only way to improve coherence, but they are often useful and give a mature feel to your essays. Table 8.3 “Common Transitional Words and Phrases” groups many common transitions according to their purpose.

Table 8.3 Common Transitional Words and Phrases

After Maria revised for unity, she next examined her paragraph about televisions to check for coherence. She looked for places where she needed to add a transition or perhaps reword the text to make the flow of ideas clear. In the version that follows, she has already deleted the sentences that were off topic.

Many writers make their revisions on a printed copy and then transfer them to the version on-screen. They conventionally use a small arrow called a caret (^) to show where to insert an addition or correction.

1. Answer the following questions about Mariah’s revised paragraph.

2. Now return to the first draft of the essay you wrote in Section 8 “Writing Your Own First Draft” and revise it for coherence. Add transition words and phrases where they are needed, and make any other changes that are needed to improve the flow and connection between ideas.

Being Clear and Concise

Some writers are very methodical and painstaking when they write a first draft. Other writers unleash a lot of words in order to get out all that they feel they need to say. Do either of these composing styles match your style? Or is your composing style somewhere in between? No matter which description best fits you, the first draft of almost every piece of writing, no matter its author, can be made clearer and more concise.

If you have a tendency to write too much, you will need to look for unnecessary words. If you have a tendency to be vague or imprecise in your wording, you will need to find specific words to replace any overly general language.

Identifying Wordiness

Sometimes writers use too many words when fewer words will appeal more to their audience and better fit their purpose. Here are some common examples of wordiness to look for in your draft. Eliminating wordiness helps all readers, because it makes your ideas clear, direct, and straightforward.

Sentences that begin with There is or There are .

Wordy: There are two major experiments that the Biology Department sponsors.

Revised: The Biology Department sponsors two major experiments.

Sentences with unnecessary modifiers.

Wordy: Two extremely famous and well-known consumer advocates spoke eloquently in favor of the proposed important legislation.

Revised: Two well-known consumer advocates spoke in favor of the proposed legislation.

Sentences with deadwood phrases that add little to the meaning. Be judicious when you use phrases such as in terms of , with a mind to , on the subject of , as to whether or not , more or less , as far as…is concerned , and similar expressions. You can usually find a more straightforward way to state your point.

Wordy: As a world leader in the field of green technology, the company plans to focus its efforts in the area of geothermal energy.

A report as to whether or not to use geysers as an energy source is in the process of preparation.

Revised: As a world leader in green technology, the company plans to focus on geothermal energy.

A report about using geysers as an energy source is in preparation.

Sentences in the passive voice or with forms of the verb to be . Sentences with passive-voice verbs often create confusion, because the subject of the sentence does not perform an action. Sentences are clearer when the subject of the sentence performs the action and is followed by a strong verb. Use strong active-voice verbs in place of forms of to be , which can lead to wordiness. Avoid passive voice when you can.

Wordy: It might perhaps be said that using a GPS device is something that is a benefit to drivers who have a poor sense of direction.

Revised: Using a GPS device benefits drivers who have a poor sense of direction.

Sentences with constructions that can be shortened.

Wordy: The e-book reader, which is a recent invention, may become as commonplace as the cell phone.

My over-sixty uncle bought an e-book reader, and his wife bought an e-book reader, too.

Revised: The e-book reader, a recent invention, may become as commonplace as the cell phone.

My over-sixty uncle and his wife both bought e-book readers.

Now return once more to the first draft of the essay you have been revising. Check it for unnecessary words. Try making your sentences as concise as they can be.

Choosing Specific, Appropriate Words

Most college essays should be written in formal English suitable for an academic situation. Follow these principles to be sure that your word choice is appropriate. For more information about word choice, see Chapter 4 “Working with Words: Which Word Is Right?” .

• Avoid slang. Find alternatives to bummer , kewl , and rad .
• Avoid language that is overly casual. Write about “men and women” rather than “girls and guys” unless you are trying to create a specific effect. A formal tone calls for formal language.
• Avoid contractions. Use do not in place of don’t , I am in place of I’m , have not in place of haven’t , and so on. Contractions are considered casual speech.
• Avoid clichés. Overused expressions such as green with envy , face the music , better late than never , and similar expressions are empty of meaning and may not appeal to your audience.
• Be careful when you use words that sound alike but have different meanings. Some examples are allusion/illusion , complement/compliment , council/counsel , concurrent/consecutive , founder/flounder , and historic/historical . When in doubt, check a dictionary.
• Choose words with the connotations you want. Choosing a word for its connotations is as important in formal essay writing as it is in all kinds of writing. Compare the positive connotations of the word proud and the negative connotations of arrogant and conceited .
• Use specific words rather than overly general words. Find synonyms for thing , people , nice , good , bad , interesting , and other vague words. Or use specific details to make your exact meaning clear.

Now read the revisions Mariah made to make her third paragraph clearer and more concise. She has already incorporated the changes she made to improve unity and coherence.

1. Answer the following questions about Mariah’s revised paragraph:

2. Now return once more to your essay in progress. Read carefully for problems with word choice. Be sure that your draft is written in formal language and that your word choice is specific and appropriate.

Completing a Peer Review

After working so closely with a piece of writing, writers often need to step back and ask for a more objective reader. What writers most need is feedback from readers who can respond only to the words on the page. When they are ready, writers show their drafts to someone they respect and who can give an honest response about its strengths and weaknesses.

You, too, can ask a peer to read your draft when it is ready. After evaluating the feedback and assessing what is most helpful, the reader’s feedback will help you when you revise your draft. This process is called peer review .

You can work with a partner in your class and identify specific ways to strengthen each other’s essays. Although you may be uncomfortable sharing your writing at first, remember that each writer is working toward the same goal: a final draft that fits the audience and the purpose. Maintaining a positive attitude when providing feedback will put you and your partner at ease. The box that follows provides a useful framework for the peer review session.

Questions for Peer Review

Title of essay: ____________________________________________

Date: ____________________________________________

Writer’s name: ____________________________________________

Peer reviewer’s name: _________________________________________

• This essay is about____________________________________________.
• Your main points in this essay are____________________________________________.
• What I most liked about this essay is____________________________________________.

These three points struck me as your strongest:

These places in your essay are not clear to me:

a. Where: ____________________________________________

Needs improvement because__________________________________________

b. Where: ____________________________________________

Needs improvement because ____________________________________________

c. Where: ____________________________________________

The one additional change you could make that would improve this essay significantly is ____________________________________________.

One of the reasons why word-processing programs build in a reviewing feature is that workgroups have become a common feature in many businesses. Writing is often collaborative, and the members of a workgroup and their supervisors often critique group members’ work and offer feedback that will lead to a better final product.

Exchange essays with a classmate and complete a peer review of each other’s draft in progress. Remember to give positive feedback and to be courteous and polite in your responses. Focus on providing one positive comment and one question for more information to the author.

Using Feedback Objectively

The purpose of peer feedback is to receive constructive criticism of your essay. Your peer reviewer is your first real audience, and you have the opportunity to learn what confuses and delights a reader so that you can improve your work before sharing the final draft with a wider audience (or your intended audience).

It may not be necessary to incorporate every recommendation your peer reviewer makes. However, if you start to observe a pattern in the responses you receive from peer reviewers, you might want to take that feedback into consideration in future assignments. For example, if you read consistent comments about a need for more research, then you may want to consider including more research in future assignments.

Using Feedback from Multiple Sources

You might get feedback from more than one reader as you share different stages of your revised draft. In this situation, you may receive feedback from readers who do not understand the assignment or who lack your involvement with and enthusiasm for it.

You need to evaluate the responses you receive according to two important criteria:

• Determine if the feedback supports the purpose of the assignment.
• Determine if the suggested revisions are appropriate to the audience.

Then, using these standards, accept or reject revision feedback.

Work with two partners. Go back to Note 8.81 “Exercise 4” in this lesson and compare your responses to Activity A, about Mariah’s paragraph, with your partners’. Recall Mariah’s purpose for writing and her audience. Then, working individually, list where you agree and where you disagree about revision needs.

Editing Your Draft

If you have been incorporating each set of revisions as Mariah has, you have produced multiple drafts of your writing. So far, all your changes have been content changes. Perhaps with the help of peer feedback, you have made sure that you sufficiently supported your ideas. You have checked for problems with unity and coherence. You have examined your essay for word choice, revising to cut unnecessary words and to replace weak wording with specific and appropriate wording.

The next step after revising the content is editing. When you edit, you examine the surface features of your text. You examine your spelling, grammar, usage, and punctuation. You also make sure you use the proper format when creating your finished assignment.

Editing often takes time. Budgeting time into the writing process allows you to complete additional edits after revising. Editing and proofreading your writing helps you create a finished work that represents your best efforts. Here are a few more tips to remember about your readers:

• Readers do not notice correct spelling, but they do notice misspellings.
• Readers look past your sentences to get to your ideas—unless the sentences are awkward, poorly constructed, and frustrating to read.
• Readers notice when every sentence has the same rhythm as every other sentence, with no variety.
• Readers do not cheer when you use there , their , and they’re correctly, but they notice when you do not.
• Readers will notice the care with which you handled your assignment and your attention to detail in the delivery of an error-free document..

The first section of this book offers a useful review of grammar, mechanics, and usage. Use it to help you eliminate major errors in your writing and refine your understanding of the conventions of language. Do not hesitate to ask for help, too, from peer tutors in your academic department or in the college’s writing lab. In the meantime, use the checklist to help you edit your writing.

Editing Your Writing

• Are some sentences actually sentence fragments?
• Are some sentences run-on sentences? How can I correct them?
• Do some sentences need conjunctions between independent clauses?
• Does every verb agree with its subject?
• Is every verb in the correct tense?
• Are tense forms, especially for irregular verbs, written correctly?
• Have I used subject, object, and possessive personal pronouns correctly?
• Have I used who and whom correctly?
• Is the antecedent of every pronoun clear?
• Do all personal pronouns agree with their antecedents?
• Have I used the correct comparative and superlative forms of adjectives and adverbs?
• Is it clear which word a participial phrase modifies, or is it a dangling modifier?

Sentence Structure

• Are all my sentences simple sentences, or do I vary my sentence structure?
• Have I chosen the best coordinating or subordinating conjunctions to join clauses?
• Have I created long, overpacked sentences that should be shortened for clarity?
• Do I see any mistakes in parallel structure?

Punctuation

• Does every sentence end with the correct end punctuation?
• Can I justify the use of every exclamation point?
• Have I used apostrophes correctly to write all singular and plural possessive forms?
• Have I used quotation marks correctly?

Mechanics and Usage

• Can I find any spelling errors? How can I correct them?
• Have I used capital letters where they are needed?
• Have I written abbreviations, where allowed, correctly?
• Can I find any errors in the use of commonly confused words, such as to / too / two ?

Be careful about relying too much on spelling checkers and grammar checkers. A spelling checker cannot recognize that you meant to write principle but wrote principal instead. A grammar checker often queries constructions that are perfectly correct. The program does not understand your meaning; it makes its check against a general set of formulas that might not apply in each instance. If you use a grammar checker, accept the suggestions that make sense, but consider why the suggestions came up.

Proofreading requires patience; it is very easy to read past a mistake. Set your paper aside for at least a few hours, if not a day or more, so your mind will rest. Some professional proofreaders read a text backward so they can concentrate on spelling and punctuation. Another helpful technique is to slowly read a paper aloud, paying attention to every word, letter, and punctuation mark.

If you need additional proofreading help, ask a reliable friend, a classmate, or a peer tutor to make a final pass on your paper to look for anything you missed.

Remember to use proper format when creating your finished assignment. Sometimes an instructor, a department, or a college will require students to follow specific instructions on titles, margins, page numbers, or the location of the writer’s name. These requirements may be more detailed and rigid for research projects and term papers, which often observe the American Psychological Association (APA) or Modern Language Association (MLA) style guides, especially when citations of sources are included.

To ensure the format is correct and follows any specific instructions, make a final check before you submit an assignment.

With the help of the checklist, edit and proofread your essay.

Key Takeaways

• Revising and editing are the stages of the writing process in which you improve your work before producing a final draft.
• During revising, you add, cut, move, or change information in order to improve content.
• During editing, you take a second look at the words and sentences you used to express your ideas and fix any problems in grammar, punctuation, and sentence structure.
• Unity in writing means that all the ideas in each paragraph and in the entire essay clearly belong together and are arranged in an order that makes logical sense.
• Coherence in writing means that the writer’s wording clearly indicates how one idea leads to another within a paragraph and between paragraphs.
• Transitional words and phrases effectively make writing more coherent.
• Writing should be clear and concise, with no unnecessary words.
• Effective formal writing uses specific, appropriate words and avoids slang, contractions, clichés, and overly general words.
• Peer reviews, done properly, can give writers objective feedback about their writing. It is the writer’s responsibility to evaluate the results of peer reviews and incorporate only useful feedback.
• Remember to budget time for careful editing and proofreading. Use all available resources, including editing checklists, peer editing, and your institution’s writing lab, to improve your editing skills.

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Essay on Unity 2 Models

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Essay on unity in which we explain the importance of unity for both the individual and society. We also present several short topic models and a paragraph on the importance of unity among the people of the same country.

Essay on unity is important because it deals with basic elements for writing an article or topic on unity, such as the components of unity, how we promote national unity, and what are the benefits of unity for both the individual, the family and society.

National unity is the highest and most important type of unity, because the unity of individuals leads to the strength of societies, and thus the strength of the nation.

Essay on Unity

Unity is important for individuals and societies, and that is why we present the essay on unity, in which we show that importance, and how strength is an inevitable result of unity.

In our essay on unity, we will discuss some of the global events that led to the weakness of some countries as a result of civil conflicts.

We will also talk about some strong countries as a result of the interdependence of their citizens and their union in times of crisis.

Unity definition

Unity may be between individuals, or it may be between large groups, such as national unity. It is the rallying of citizens around the goals of their state, not searching for personal gains, and not discriminating between citizens on religious, cultural or social grounds. Everyone works for the common good.

The solidarity and cooperation of citizens is necessary for the progress of the state in all fields, and therefore it is important to solve all internal problems and conflicts, so that the state can devote itself to development and the establishment of huge economic projects.

The importance of national unity

There is no doubt that national unity is the basis on which the state relies on facing all challenges, and there will be no national unity except by fighting corruption, preventing injustice, and establishing justice among citizens.

We can summarize the importance of national unity as follows:

• National unity gives the state a strength that makes enemies fear it and think a lot before trying to attack it, because men are the protectors of the homeland, and therefore they must be one hand against any enemy that threatens their homeland.
• Unity reduces the proportion of internal problems, and there is the ability to solve problems easily. This is because unity among the members of society makes them care about valuable goals, such as the economic advancement of the state, protecting the state and showing its strength so that the enemies fear it. These goals make the internal differences not of great importance, and they can be resolved easily.
• Unity contributes to the advancement of all sectors of the state. There is no doubt that progress in all areas of life requires the efforts and expertise of all individuals, so no segment of society can be dispensed with. Every member of society has an important role in the progress of society.
• National unity helps spread peace, reject violence and hatred, and eliminate racism. Feelings of love, brotherhood and tolerance prevail among the members of society. Thus, peace spreads among members of society, and crime is reduced.

The importance of unity within the family

Unity among family members is the microcosm of unity among members of society. The family is the one that teaches its children good values ​​and morals. Among these values ​​are unity between family members and cooperation among them. Unity among family members is an important thing as it achieves the following:

• Unity among family members. The individual feels safe, as his family members will support him in all crises.
• Unity makes the family strength, and we see this clearly in large families, where it is valued and respected among other families.
• The interconnected family enjoys good job opportunities, because each of them tries to help the other members of his family by transferring expertise or nominating him to the employers.
• Unity between family members strengthens their relationships, and provides them with opportunities to work in leadership positions.
• The mental health of individuals is good when the individual feels valued within his family.

How do we develop unity among the members of society?

There are many factors that any state can follow in order to strengthen unity among the people, and thus ensure economic and political stability, including:

The role of the family in educating its children the importance of unity

The family is the first teacher who implants in the hearts of young people values ​​and principles. One of the most important principles that the family must inculcate in the hearts of its children is the love of the homeland and belonging to it, and work to advance it.

All of this requires unity and cooperation among the members of society, and that general goals should take precedence over personal goals.

When the child grows up on these principles, he will realize that the most precious thing he has is the homeland, and he will work to advance his country with enthusiasm.

The role of the media in promoting unity among citizens

There is no doubt that the media, through its various means, has a great role in guiding citizens, and therefore the media must have a positive role in guiding citizens to unity and cooperation and to reject differences.

This is done through targeted programs that help bring people closer together, and not exploit differences in ideas to sow discord and division among the people’s sects.

The role of the school and the university in promoting unity among students

There is no doubt that educational institutions have a great role in guidance and counseling, and therefore teachers must be a good role model in unity and cooperation, as this behavior will be transmitted to their students easily.

The curricula should also include topics on the importance of unity among the nation’s groups, and non-discrimination between them, regardless of their culture, beliefs or economic conditions.

At the end of the essay on unity, we explained the importance of unity for both the individual and the society. We also clarified the ingredients that help to promote unity among the members of one society, and what are the advantages that accrue to both the individual and the state as a result of unity. We hope that you have benefited from what we have provided.

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Essay on Unity in Diversity in 100 to 200 Words

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If you are a school-going student and searching for a good essay on unity in diversity, then this is the place where you can get some short essays on unity in diversity. Before starting you must be familiar with what is diversity. The phrase Unity in diversity beautifully holds the essence of coexistence. Unity aggregates people belonging to different religions, cultures, ethics , social, economic , and financial backgrounds. Thus, they align together to achieve a common goal. Continue Reading to learn about the significance of unity in diversity!

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• 2 Unity in Diversity Essay 100 Words
• 3.1 Significance of Unity in Diversity

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Short Essay on Unity in Diversity

Unity in diversity is a common phrase that correctly defines India. The essay on Unity in Diversity is the most popular topic for school children and students. This essay would help them learn about the importance of unity among people of different cultures and origins and also help them to know how Indian society functions.

Given below are some essays on Unity in diversity with different word limits:

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Unity in Diversity Essay 100 Words

The concept of unity in diversity is from ancient times. People belonging to similar beliefs and communities live with unity. The essence of diversity holds people together due to which people belonging to variable sectors, caste, colour, creeds, languages, and social backgrounds live together. 

The phrase “Unity in Diversity” also referred to as “Anekta m Ekta” was first coined by the first Prime Minister of India after Independence Hon’ble Jawaharlal Nehru in his famous book “The Discovery of India”.

Despite of diversity in India, people here live with love and celebrate various festivals together. All follow the rules laid down by the Constitution of India . To do so, it is important to respect every community and culture and not differentiate people on social terms.

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Unity in Diversity Essay 200 Words

The phenomenon of unity in diversity came from the rich historical times, it is rooted in ancient civilizations. India believes in the concept of “Vasudhaiva Kutumbakam” which means the world is a family. Indians have followed this philosophy for thousands of years and therefore, we welcome guests from all over the world with utmost respect and love. This happens because there is no differentiation between people belonging to different cultures, castes, languages , colours, and backgrounds. Likewise, the Roman Empire also relied on the fundamentals of unity in diversity to maintain peace, harmony, stability, and prosperity among its citizens.

The history of the world reveals that all the great leaders like Mahatma Gandhi and Nelson Mandela followed the principles of unity in diversity to bring about social and political change in the world. 

Significance of Unity in Diversity

Unity in Diversity signifies the following:

• Social Cohesion
• Economic Growth
• Global Peace
• Cultural Enrichment
• Personal Growth

Thus, Unity in diversity is not just a concept, it is the way of living life, it is the feeling of embracing people around you accepting them as they are, and living without conflicts and discrimination. So, every individual must play their part to contribute to this noble cause either through interactions with others or by making efforts to bridge the divides among people.

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Unity in diversity is a concept that reflects a sense of bonding among individuals who are different from each other in all aspects but they follow the same rule and live in harmony. India is the best example that perfectly signifies unity in diversity.

Jawaharlal Nehru, the first Prime Minister of India coined the term “Unity in Diversity”, in his famous book “The Discovery of India”. This phrase signifies the feeling of oneness among the Indians. 

India is called Unity in diversity because, here the people belonging to different cultures, speak variable languages, yet their hearts are connected and they live together in harmony and follow the common rules written in the Constitution of India.

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Unity is Strength Essay for Students and Children

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In today’s time where there is cut-throat competition everywhere and every individual is trying to apply his or her method to reach on top, very few recognize the importance of proverb ‘Unity is strength’. Also, this proverb has now become confined to inspirational books and motivational lectures. So, very few people actually understand the importance and thus it’s application in their lives. But these people that are actually more satisfied as well as content in their lives that actually applies it. So, unity is strength essay is an insight into the increasing importance of unity in lives in the present world.

This proverb also applies when it comes to relationships. People nowadays are so blinded by the success and the power that they want to be ahead of their colleagues, relatives, and friends.

Thus, they get into professional as well as personal rivalries with each other most of the times so, they do not understand that they cannot move ahead as well as enhance their skills, knowledge, and help each other. Thus, when we go against our team-mates and start to compete with them in an office setting, then people from another team will benefit from the situation. 

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Also, another reason here people grow apart because of mistrust. This becomes true especially when it comes to the husband-wife relationship. Also, here we often see couples doubting each other always. So, they start to question small things and doubt them of lying or cheating.

So, outsiders take advantage of these type of situations. Also, they fuel the doubt and thereby create conflict between the two in order to fulfill their own motives. Also, this will not only have a negative impact on the two but also on the kids. So, if the wife and husband stay united and defend each other than no one can create the rift between the two. 

To Societies and Nations

The proverb also holds true when it comes to society and the nation as a whole. The societies and localities where people stay united are loved by everyone.

Thus, people living here meets as well as greets their neighbors with a smile, guard their neighbor’s house, help out each other in crisis, etc. Also, they celebrate each and every function together and conducts other social gatherings every now and then. In the current world, many people are suffering from loneliness as well as depression, these types of neighborhood can be a boon. 

Similarly, nations around the globe are very busy fighting each other in order to prove that they are better than one another. So, every nation has nuclear weapons and many terrorist organizations have been formed. So, if we stop all these kinds of malpractices than the world will become a much better place to live. 

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Essay on Unity in Diversity: “ Unity in Diversity ” is a phrase implying unity among people with diverse cultural, religious and other demographic differences. The origin of phrase dates back to ancient times and has since been used by various political and social groups to demonstrate unity among different individuals or community. People of varying cultures, religious beliefs and social status, living together in peace and harmony is a perfect example of “ Unity in Diversity ”.

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Unity in diversity is a famous concept which best fits on India. Essay on Unity in Diversity is the most common topic which students may be assigned to debate during discussion and write an essay during exams or essay writing competitions in their school. Variety of Unity in Diversity essay under various words limit are given below especially for the students.

Unity in Diversity Essay 1 (100 words)

The phrase “ Unity in Diversity ” implies unity among dissimilar people. It is an ancient phrase that was first used by some societies in North America and China, sometimes around 500 B.C. The most obvious example providing credence to the phrase is that of a democratic nation.

A democratic nation has people having different religions, cultures, beliefs, sects, languages, and other demarcations, but they all live in unity and harmony, following a uniform law. India as a nation is the best example of “Unity in Diversity” with people of different religions and culture living together following the rule of land as per the parameters laid by the Constitution of India .

Unity in Diversity Essay 2 (150 words)

The meaning of unity in diversity is the existence of oneness even after various differences. India is the best example of this concept of unity in diversity. We can see very clearly here that people of different religions, creeds, castes, languages, cultures, lifestyle, dressing sense, faith in God, rituals of worship, etc live together with harmony under one roof means on one land of India.

People living in India are the children of one mother whom we call Mother India. India is a vast and most populated country where people of different religions, Hinduism, Buddhism, Islam, Sikhism, Jainism, Christianity, and Parsees, live together. Still, everyone believes in one theory of Dharma and Karma. People here are god-fearing in nature and believe in the purification of the soul, rebirth, salvation, the luxury of heaven, and punishments of hell. People here celebrate their festivals ( Holi , Diwali , Id , Christmas , Good Friday , Mahavir Jayanti , Buddha Jayanti , etc) very peacefully without harming other religious people.

Unity in Diversity Essay 3 (200 words)

India is a well known country of oldest civilization in the world where people of many ethnic groups live together for years. India is a country of diverse civilization where people used almost 1650 spoken languages and dialects according to their religion and choice. In spite of being related to different cultures, traditions, religions, and languages, people here respect each other and live together with lots of love and a feeling of brotherhood.

People living here and there all over the Indian land are joined together by one faith of brotherhood. Unity in Diversity has been one of the great characteristic of our nation, which has bind people of all religions together in one bond of humanity.

We can never forget the freedom movements run by the people of all religions of India to make India an independent country. The struggle for freedom is the great example of unity in diversity in India.

Unity in diversity concept in India gives everyone a strong message that nothing is without unity. Living together with love and harmony provides the real essence of life. Unity in diversity in India shows us that we all are born, cared and nourished by one Supreme God.

Unity in Diversity Essay 4 (250 words)

It is the oneness in differences. India is a country which proves better the concept of unity in diversity. India is a highly populated country and famous all over the world because of the characteristic of unity in diversity. Unity in diversity is the strength and power of India. It has now been the most important feature identifying India.

Unity in diversity has given rise to the great national integration characteristic to the country which has become the foundation of strong and prosperous India even after lots of corruption, extremism and terrorism. People living in various states are generally differ in their speaking language, culture, traditions, clothes, festivals, looks, etc., (known to be like Bengalis, Maharashtrians, Punjabis, Tamilians, etc); however, they tell themselves Indian which shows their unity.

Humanity and people’s likelihood help them maintain unity in diversity here. People in India give high importance to spirituality, Karma, and Sanskar instead of their material wealth, which brings them closer. People here have religion tolerance power as their unique feature which helps them to feel no difficulty on the occurrence of different religions.

Majority of people in India are related to the Hinduism who has more capacity to welcome and absorb all other good cultures in their land. All such features in the Indian people help make India famous for the concept of unity in diversity.

Unity in Diversity Essay 5 (300 words)

Introduction.

India is a country proving the fact of unity in diversity. People of various religions and castes have managed to live together for many years without any problem. India is decorated by the high mountains, valleys, oceans, famous rivers, streams, forests, deserts, ancient culture and tradition, and most importantly unity in diversity. People here belong to their own race, religion, and language; however, they all have similar characteristic of humanity, which makes them able to live together. Following are the importance of unity in diversity:

Importance of Unity in Diversity:

• Unity in diversity boosts morale of people at workplace, organization, and community.
• It helps in enhancing esprit de corps, relationships, teamwork among people, thus improving performance, quality of work, productivity and lifestyle.
• It makes communication effective even in a bad situation.
• Keeps people away from social problems and help to manage conflicts easily.
• It improves healthy human relations and protects equal human rights for all.
• Unity in diversity in India provides a source of tourism. People of diverse cultures, traditions, cuisines, religions and clothing attract more visitors and tourists from all across the world.
• It gives rise to the habit of national integration among people of the country even after being diverse in various ways.
• gives value to the rich heritages of country as well as strengthens and enriches the cultural heritage of India.
• It helps to be rich in the agricultural area through different crops and thus economic growth.
• Source of skilled and advanced professionals in various areas of the country.

There may be some disadvantages too, which are mentioned below:

• It may give rise to the various social tensions among people of different states and linguistic origin.
• gives rise to the growth of corruption and illiteracy in many areas of the country.
• It may reason of poor lifestyle in various rural regions because of underdeveloped infrastructures, lack of electricity, etc.

Unity in Diversity Essay 6 (400 words)

India is a country of various cultures, races, languages, and religions. It is a land of unity in diversity where people of different lifestyles and manners live together. They belong to different religions, beliefs and faiths in God. In spite of all this diversity, they live together with the bond of humanity and brotherhood. Unity in diversity is the distinct feature of India which makes it famous all around the world.

Generally, people in India are following the great old Indian culture of being tolerant and absorbing which make them assimilating in nature. Unity in diversity in almost all aspects of society has become a source of strength and wealth all throughout the country. People of all religions do worship in different ways by following their own rituals and beliefs which represents the existence of underlying uniformity. Unity in diversity promotes spirit of harmony and brotherhood among people beyond their considerations of various diversities.

India is famous for its rich cultural heritages because of people of various religions. People who belong to various cultures give rise to various lifestyles on the basis of their interests and belief. It again give rise to the growth in various professional areas like music, fine arts, drama, dance (classical, folk, etc.), theater sculpture, etc. Spiritual tradition of the people makes them more piety to each other. All the religious Indian scriptures are a great source of spiritual wisdom to the people. There are rishis, maharishis, yogis, priests, fathers, etc., in almost all the religions following their own spiritual traditions according to their religious scriptures.

Hindi is a mother language in India; however, many other dialects and languages are spoken by the people of different religions and regions (such as English, Urdu, Sanskrit, Bhojpuri, Bihari, Punjabi, Marathi, Bengali, Odiya, Gujarati, Kashmiri, etc.); however, everyone feels proud to be the citizen of great India.

Unity in the diversity of India is especially for which it is well known all over the world. It attracts tourism in India to a great level. As Indians, we all should understand our responsibility and try to retain its unique feature at any cost. Unity in diversity here is the real prosperity and the way to progress in the present and future.

Long Essay on Unity in Diversity – Essay 7 (800 Words)

Unity in Diversity is a concept that signifies the uniformity among people of different cultures and dissimilar thoughts and ideologies. It shows that though people follow different religions, castes, cultures and traditions but they are bound together with a string of humanity, love and respect. Unity in diversity could also be explained through a garland where the flowers which belong to different varieties and colors are strung into a garland which not only enhances the beauty of the flowers, but also increases their value.

Why is Unity in Diversity Important?

Unity in diversity is very important for a country in the following ways:

For National Unity

Unity in diversity is very important for a country because it is easy to disintegrate people with different thoughts and ideologies. If there is unity among people despite their differences, it will always be impossible for a force to disintegrate the nation. Unity of the citizens plays a significant role in maintaining peace and prosperity in a country.

For Growth & Development

Unity in diversity plays a crucial role in the country’s development as the country which is integrated within will always prosper and progress on the path of growth and development. It will also face less internal issues as compared to the country which is socially unstable and is divided on various terms.

Global Recognition

A country which is diverse but still remains united will not only adds value to the nation but it also gets respected on international platforms. It sets an example globally by showcasing the values and ethics of the citizens of a country who respect and support each other despite being from different backgrounds and cultures.

For Peaceful Coexistence

Diversity could be also be reason for internal conflicts but unity in diversity plays a very crucial role in maintaining a peaceful coexistence with the people with diverse culture and background. It helps them to stay together and stay united despite their dissimilarities.

What is the difference between Unity and Diversity?

Unity is the feeling of togetherness and integration. It is the feeling which holds the people together and a bond which imply a sense of oneness. Unity stands for the ties between different groups which binds them into a single entity. Defined as absence of differences between people belonging to diverse sections based on religious or racial aspects.

In contrast, diversity refers to differences or dissimilarities. It could defined as the collective differences between diverse groups based on religion, race, language, etc. It is the variety of sections and groups residing at a geographical area with different cultures, traditions and backgrounds. Diversity is a natural phenomenon that also helps to bring different ideas, experiences, and acceptances among people.

Unity is the condition of being one, whereas diversity is the condition of being different or dissimilar. In a family, people with different thoughts, interests, or preferences might showcase their diversity in many aspects. Still, as a family, they exhibit a sense of unity among them.

Why India considered as best example of Unity in Diversity?

India, the 5000 years old civilization, is the land of diversities, be it religion, caste, race, culture, or language. There are several diversities in the country. There are 29 states, and each has its own culture, tradition, and language. More than 30 grand festivals of different communities celebrated every year in the country. Around a thousand languages and dialects spoken in India across the country.

Despite so much of differences, the people of India showcase the real sense of unity among themselves which exhibits the concept of unity in diversity. The unity in diversity culture of India considered unique in the world which surprises the global community. Because of age-old tradition of India which has taught the people importance of ethics, values, respects and tolerance.

Though people belong to diverse culture and communities. But they share the bond of humanity, love and respect and tied with a single string of nationalism. Constitution of India has also provided rights and freedom to each. And every citizen to live their life with dignity and respect without any interference, makes them united.

Unity in diversity teaches us that though we are from different caste, creeds these differences could not keep us apart. And also we always united for the betterment of our nation. It is the most unique phenomenon which showcased by our country. Difference in culture, customs and dance makes the country land of vibrancy, makes India an incredible country in world.

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Unity in Diversity FAQs

What is meant by unity in diversity.

Unity in diversity refers to the coexistence of diverse cultures, religions, and traditions within a unified community or country, promoting tolerance and harmony.

Is India a unity in diversity?

Yes, India is a shining example of unity in diversity, with its rich cultural tapestry and people from various backgrounds living together as one nation.

What is one example of unity in diversity?

One example of unity in diversity is a multicultural team collaborating and celebrating each other's unique strengths to achieve a common goal.

How to do unity in diversity?

To foster unity in diversity, it's essential to promote open dialogue, respect differences, and embrace inclusivity in all aspects of life.

What is the importance of unity in diversity?

The importance of unity in diversity lies in building strong social cohesion, fostering mutual understanding, and creating a resilient society that thrives on collective strength.

An excellent example of unity in diversity can be seen during cultural festivals where people from different backgrounds come together to celebrate and appreciate each other's traditions.

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A Culture Warrior Takes a Late Swing

The editor and essayist Joseph Epstein looks back on his life and career in two new books.

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By Dwight Garner

NEVER SAY YOU’VE HAD A LUCKY LIFE: Especially If You’ve Had a Lucky Life , by Joseph Epstein

FAMILIARITY BREEDS CONTENT: New and Selected Essays , by Joseph Epstein

When Tammy Wynette was asked to write a memoir in her mid-30s, she initially declined, she said in an interview, because “I didn’t think my life was over yet.” The publisher responded: Has it occurred to you that in 15 years no one might care? She wrote the book. “Stand by Your Man: An Autobiography” (1979) was a hit.

The essayist and editor Joseph Epstein — whose memoir “Never Say You’ve Had a Lucky Life,” is out now, alongside a greatest-hits collection titled “Familiarity Breeds Content” — has probably never heard Wynette sing except by accident. (In a 1993 essay, he wrote that he wished he didn’t know who Willie Nelson was, because it was a sign of a compromised intellect.) But his memoir illustrates another reason not to wait too long to commit your life to print.

There is no indication that Epstein, who is in his late 80s, has lost a step. His prose is as genial and bland, if comparison to his earlier work is any indication, as it ever was. But there’s a softness to his memories of people, perhaps because it was all so long ago. This is the sort of memoir that insists someone was funny, or erudite, or charismatic, while rarely providing the crucial details.

Epstein aw-shucks his way into “Never Say You’ve Had a Lucky Life” — pretending to be self-effacing while not being so in the least is one of his salient qualities as a writer — by warning readers, “I may not have had a sufficiently interesting life to merit an autobiography.” This is because he “did little, saw nothing notably historic, and endured not much out of the ordinary of anguish or trouble or exaltation.” Quickly, however, he concludes that his life is indeed worth relating, in part because “over the years I have acquired the literary skill to recount that life well.”

Here he is wrong in both directions. His story is interesting enough to warrant this memoir. His personal life has taken complicated turns. And as the longtime editor of the quarterly magazine The American Scholar, and a notably literate conservative culture warrior, he’s been in the thick of things.

He does lack the skill to tell his own story, though, if by “skill” we mean not well-scrubbed Strunk and White sentences but close and penetrating observation. Epstein favors tasseled loafers and bow ties, and most of his sentences read as if they were written by a sentient tasseled loafer and edited by a sentient bow tie.

He grew up in Chicago, where his father manufactured costume jewelry. The young Epstein was popular and, in high school, lettered in tennis. His title refers to being lucky, and a big part of that luck, in his estimation, was to grow up back when kids could be kids, before “the therapeutic culture” took over.

This complaint sets the tone of the book. His own story is set next to a rolling series of cultural grievances. He’s against casual dress, the prohibition of the word “Negro,” grade inflation, the Beat Generation, most of what occurred during the 1960s, standards slipping everywhere, de-Westernizing college curriculums, D.E.I. programs, you name it. His politics aren’t the problem. We can argue about those. American culture needs more well-read conservatives. The problem is that in his search for teachable moments, his memoir acquires the cardboard tone of a middling opinion column.

His youth was not all tennis lessons and root beer floats. He and his friends regularly visited brothels because, he writes, sex was not as easy to come by in the 1950s. He was kicked out of the University of Illinois Urbana-Champaign for his role in the selling of a stolen accounting exam to other students.

He was lucky to find a place at the University of Chicago, a place of high seriousness. The school changed him. He began to reassess his values. He began to read writers like Irving Howe, Sidney Hook, Midge Decter and Norman Podhoretz, and felt his politics pull to the right.

After college, he was drafted into the Army and ended up in Little Rock, Ark., where he met his first wife. At the time, she was a waitress at a bar and restaurant called the Gar Hole. Here Epstein’s memoir briefly threatens to acquire genuine weight.

She had lost custody of her two sons after a divorce. Together they got them back, and she and Epstein had two sons of their own. After their divorce, Epstein took all four of the boys. This is grist for an entire memoir, but Epstein passes over it quickly. One never gets much of a sense of what his boys were like, or what it was like to raise them. He later tells us that he has all but lost touch with his stepsons and has not seen them for decades.

He worked for the magazine The New Leader and the Encyclopaedia Britannica before becoming the editor of The American Scholar in 1975. It was a position he would hold for 22 years. He also taught at Northwestern University for nearly three decades.

At The American Scholar he began to write a long personal essay in each issue, under the pseudonym Aristides. He wrote 92 of these, on topics such as smoking and envy and reading and height. Most ran to 6,500 words, or about 4,000 words longer than they should have been.

Many magazine editors like to write every so often, to keep a hand in. But there is something unseemly about an editor chewing up acres of space in his own publication on a regular basis. Editorially, it’s a droit du seigneur imposition.

A selection of these essays, as well as some new ones, can now be found in “Familiarity Breeds Content.” In his introduction to this book, Christopher Buckley overpraises Epstein, leaving the reader no choice but to start mentally pushing back.

Buckley calls Epstein “the most entertaining living essayist in the English language.” (Not while Michael Kinsley, Lorrie Moore, Calvin Trillin, Sloane Crosley and Geoff Dyer, among many others, walk the earth.) He repurposes Martin Amis’s comment about Saul Bellow: “One doesn’t read Saul Bellow. One can only reread him.” To this he adds, “Ditto Epstein.” (Epstein is no Saul Bellow.) Buckley says, “Joe Epstein is incapable of writing a boring sentence.”

Well. How about this one, from an essay about cats?

A cat, I realize, cannot be everyone’s cup of fur.

Or this one, from an essay about sports and other obsessions:

I have been told there are people who wig out on pasta.

Or this one, about … guess:

When I was a boy, it occurs to me now, I always had one or another kind of hat.

Juggling today appears to be undergoing a small renaissance.

If one is looking to save on fuel bills, politics is likely to heat up a room quicker than just about anything else.

In tennis I was most notable for flipping and catching my racket in various snappy routines.

The essays are, by and large, as tweedy and self-satisfied as these lines make them sound. There are no wild hairs in them, no sudden deepenings of tone. Nothing is at stake. We are stranded with him on the putt-putt course.

Epstein fills his essays with quotation after quotation, as ballast. I am a fan of well-deployed, free-range quotations. So many of Epstein’s are musty and reek of Bartlett’s. They are from figures like Lord Chesterfield and Lady Mary Montagu and Sir Herbert Grierson and Tocqueville and Walpole and Carlyle. You can feel the moths escaping from the display case in real time.

To be fair, I circled a few sentences in “Familiarity Breeds Content” happily. I’m with him on his distrust of “fun couples.” He writes, “A cowboy without a hat is suitable only for bartending.” I liked his observation, which he borrowed from someone else, that a career has five stages:

(1) Who is Joseph Epstein? (2) Get me Joseph Epstein. (3) We need someone like Joseph Epstein. (4) What we need is a young Joseph Epstein. (5) Who is Joseph Epstein?

It’s no fun to trip up a writer on what might have been a late-career victory lap. Epstein doesn’t need me to like his work. He’s published more than 30 books, and you can’t do that unless you’ve made a lot of readers happy.

NEVER SAY YOU’VE HAD A LUCKY LIFE : Especially If You’ve Had a Lucky Life | By Joseph Epstein | Free Press | 287 pp. | $29.99

FAMILIARITY BREEDS CONTENT : New and Selected Essays | By Joseph Epstein | Simon & Schuster | 441 pp. | Paperback, $20.99

Dwight Garner has been a book critic for The Times since 2008, and before that was an editor at the Book Review for a decade. More about Dwight Garner

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